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Harry Potter x harém
Harry Potter x harém
2/20 c20 Ultach
Almost a year since the last update of this tale. Have you cocked up your toes? Shuffled off this mortal coil? Taken the eternal dirt nap?
Basically, kick your muse's arse, shove a gallon of coffee down it's gullet, break out the defibrillator or whatever is needed to stir the synapses into firing regularly.
Or declare it abandoned.
Over to you!
Ciao.
PS; edit out the numerous superfluous words that litter your work, please.
Almost a year since the last update of this tale. Have you cocked up your toes? Shuffled off this mortal coil? Taken the eternal dirt nap?
Basically, kick your muse's arse, shove a gallon of coffee down it's gullet, break out the defibrillator or whatever is needed to stir the synapses into firing regularly.
Or declare it abandoned.
Over to you!
Ciao.
PS; edit out the numerous superfluous words that litter your work, please.
2/18 c4 Ultach
"time-diluted"?
WTF?
Perhaps you should correct the third sentence of chapter 4 to read "time-DILATED".
Ciao.
"time-diluted"?
WTF?
Perhaps you should correct the third sentence of chapter 4 to read "time-DILATED".
Ciao.
2/8 c6 
1MayaviPanchi
"The last time the hogwarts express didn't leave on the 1st of September was in the 1500s".
What do you mean by that?
Locomotive train was invented by muggles in early 1800s.
And till then students went to hogwarts by Portkeys, floo or flying carriages like we see in hogwarts legacy.
1MayaviPanchi"The last time the hogwarts express didn't leave on the 1st of September was in the 1500s".
What do you mean by that?
Locomotive train was invented by muggles in early 1800s.
And till then students went to hogwarts by Portkeys, floo or flying carriages like we see in hogwarts legacy.
2/8 c5 MayaviPanchi
Seeing other males naked will never stop making man squeamish.
The fact that you believe otherwise confirms my theory that you are female.
Seeing other males naked will never stop making man squeamish.
The fact that you believe otherwise confirms my theory that you are female.
2/8 c5 MayaviPanchi
If cassie and Patricia were really looking for Harry seriously, how were they unable to find him?
There are several instances where they could have met him, like during September 1 when Harry boards his train.
If cassie and Patricia were really looking for Harry seriously, how were they unable to find him?
There are several instances where they could have met him, like during September 1 when Harry boards his train.
11/16/2024 c1 stacygrrl2002
Very good. Totally in line with canon plot of Albus and Gellert being pals and taking over to shape the world to their image.
Very good. Totally in line with canon plot of Albus and Gellert being pals and taking over to shape the world to their image.
9/30/2024 c20 HallowedMold179
Hope you haven’t abandoned this or originality. Both are very good and I can’t wait to see if you are going to continue updating them.
Hope you haven’t abandoned this or originality. Both are very good and I can’t wait to see if you are going to continue updating them.
9/21/2024 c20 Moi
Amazing story! Also the first one I've ever seen with evil Flamels. :)
Amazing story! Also the first one I've ever seen with evil Flamels. :)