for Harry Potter and All the Skywalker Chicks4/30 c6 Glitner
Yes, the introduction of Mr. X and his various versions of the girls really ruins the story. We came to watch Harry Potter, and it's clear that he will end up with one of the girls. But then Mr. X suddenly appears with different versions of the girls that Harry is supposed to be with, and it feels like he's literally getting involved with their copies. It's strangely reminiscent of a cuckold situation.
Yes, the introduction of Mr. X and his various versions of the girls really ruins the story. We came to watch Harry Potter, and it's clear that he will end up with one of the girls. But then Mr. X suddenly appears with different versions of the girls that Harry is supposed to be with, and it feels like he's literally getting involved with their copies. It's strangely reminiscent of a cuckold situation.
4/30 c4 Glitner
well mr x inclusion in the story ruind everything honestly it was good b4 but now it just feelt like something a first time writer would write
well mr x inclusion in the story ruind everything honestly it was good b4 but now it just feelt like something a first time writer would write
4/26 c16 AlastorGodofVengeance
Love the story so far, the only really annoying thing I found with the past few chapters was Sirius constantly calling Harry pup which is more than a bit condescending when Harry is 15 or 16, beyond that I'm looking forward to more.
Love the story so far, the only really annoying thing I found with the past few chapters was Sirius constantly calling Harry pup which is more than a bit condescending when Harry is 15 or 16, beyond that I'm looking forward to more.
4/23 c16 
4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Fantastic work. It seems that Qui-Gon may be saved, yet even so, there were still some casualties. Not all of them adults… such is the price of war and conflict.
Keep this up!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkFantastic work. It seems that Qui-Gon may be saved, yet even so, there were still some casualties. Not all of them adults… such is the price of war and conflict.
Keep this up!
4/23 c16 Guest
well, you got the whole progressively darker thing accomplished
well, you got the whole progressively darker thing accomplished
4/23 c16 3WhiteElfElder
Everyone is after Harry. The Skulls likely to kill him, but what of the cyborgs?
3WhiteElfElderEveryone is after Harry. The Skulls likely to kill him, but what of the cyborgs?
4/23 c16 Guest
Hm. Just bend all the women over and worship their assess.
Hm. Just bend all the women over and worship their assess.
4/15 c5 DevilishPotato
I actually hope we don't see a lot of this Mr. X. I rather keep this a mystery for Harry to decipher
I actually hope we don't see a lot of this Mr. X. I rather keep this a mystery for Harry to decipher
4/15 c5 DevilishPotato
I'm not going to lie and this is not a rant but my own opinion, I believe the starting point of this fic was amazing, however, the introduction of this Mr. X character was unnecessary and feel like it made the book decline, at least for me. This idea of the Muktiverse is not knew but I just sorta don't like the introdcution of it, Mr. x sounds like a Godly being and the Timetraveler? it's adding too much that I know for sure Author would get stuck, have a writer's block soon. so yeah, Everything else is really good, I just don't like the introduction of some unknown being knowing about them and their counterparts.. Star Wars is a huge franchise and adding more to it feels too much... anyways, I think that's all I wanted to say. Correct me if I'm wrong but this Mr. X being, is you, author? I get the feeling that you made this Mx. X being in your Image of what you would like to be in this fanfic... just curious about that
I'm not going to lie and this is not a rant but my own opinion, I believe the starting point of this fic was amazing, however, the introduction of this Mr. X character was unnecessary and feel like it made the book decline, at least for me. This idea of the Muktiverse is not knew but I just sorta don't like the introdcution of it, Mr. x sounds like a Godly being and the Timetraveler? it's adding too much that I know for sure Author would get stuck, have a writer's block soon. so yeah, Everything else is really good, I just don't like the introduction of some unknown being knowing about them and their counterparts.. Star Wars is a huge franchise and adding more to it feels too much... anyways, I think that's all I wanted to say. Correct me if I'm wrong but this Mr. X being, is you, author? I get the feeling that you made this Mx. X being in your Image of what you would like to be in this fanfic... just curious about that
3/22 c4 jimmy.oz
pretty good story so far keep up the good work. harry better become way stronger though if he has to deal with sith and all the other issues that seem to be going to pop up with time traveling and all.
pretty good story so far keep up the good work. harry better become way stronger though if he has to deal with sith and all the other issues that seem to be going to pop up with time traveling and all.
3/22 c2 jimmy.oz
feel like these dudes should just forget the timeline lol. all these women coming back to the past and then harry here will do what he wants or what he thinks is best when it comes to helping people lol.
feel like these dudes should just forget the timeline lol. all these women coming back to the past and then harry here will do what he wants or what he thinks is best when it comes to helping people lol.
3/22 c1 jimmy.oz
This story seems interesting plus harry getting a harem is always good as well. wonder if harry will be able to use the force since others can't sense him in it. guess the future is about to be changed which is good for the star wars galaxy but i do wonder if harry's earth is a apart of it or in a different galaxy all together.
This story seems interesting plus harry getting a harem is always good as well. wonder if harry will be able to use the force since others can't sense him in it. guess the future is about to be changed which is good for the star wars galaxy but i do wonder if harry's earth is a apart of it or in a different galaxy all together.
3/5 c1 Jiro
Why is rey there? Her reality does not exist in the same one as solo yeah? And shes not an actual skywalker
Why is rey there? Her reality does not exist in the same one as solo yeah? And shes not an actual skywalker