for The Fourth Try11/8/2024 c1 
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Love the storyThe Fourth Try. Just followed the writer and story.
1HeartByte-FreeAIWritingToolLove the storyThe Fourth Try. Just followed the writer and story.
8/24/2023 c7 NameEntry25
ah so its just saber (alter?) that came to emiya's house and saw both archer and lancer from the last chapter, and just decided to nuke both. wonder what rider will shirou summon? or its just saber securing her broken scabbard? but then again shirou should know how to trace avalon from saber route? boom avalon is back lmao although downgraded lol. and then archer be like wtf this shirou has no seigi no mikata mindset wtf happened? alaya not happy rn she wants her CG back. OR OR WILD THEORY, shirou traced fkin excalibur. or somehow its rider richard
ah so its just saber (alter?) that came to emiya's house and saw both archer and lancer from the last chapter, and just decided to nuke both. wonder what rider will shirou summon? or its just saber securing her broken scabbard? but then again shirou should know how to trace avalon from saber route? boom avalon is back lmao although downgraded lol. and then archer be like wtf this shirou has no seigi no mikata mindset wtf happened? alaya not happy rn she wants her CG back. OR OR WILD THEORY, shirou traced fkin excalibur. or somehow its rider richard
8/22/2023 c7 1Dimihd
Don't know. A corrupted saber or saber alter doesn't have attractive female traits, if I understand you correctly. Bad luck for Shirou.
1DimihdDon't know. A corrupted saber or saber alter doesn't have attractive female traits, if I understand you correctly. Bad luck for Shirou.
8/22/2023 c6 Guest
To Pixie Duck: I have to agree with Avalon thing it didn’t make sense, but I don’t agree on the Sakura comment every have a route they like it would be no different then I calling you a Saber fanboy so let’s no go there. Plus even heavens feel route Shirou got separated from Artoria early on so this happening here it’s no different except the method that happen wasn't good or handle well. The author get to decide who Shirou ends up with either 3 heroines if Sakura then ok same for rin and saber and if they decided for all 3 it’s fine for me. The fic could also use some grammar fix here and there
To Pixie Duck: I have to agree with Avalon thing it didn’t make sense, but I don’t agree on the Sakura comment every have a route they like it would be no different then I calling you a Saber fanboy so let’s no go there. Plus even heavens feel route Shirou got separated from Artoria early on so this happening here it’s no different except the method that happen wasn't good or handle well. The author get to decide who Shirou ends up with either 3 heroines if Sakura then ok same for rin and saber and if they decided for all 3 it’s fine for me. The fic could also use some grammar fix here and there
8/15/2023 c6 Pixie Duck
Typical Sakura fanboy writing
Rescue Sakura and force separate Artoria and Shirou and you even did what you did to Avalon!
and you have Artoria with that piece of shit Kiara?
This is trash
Typical Sakura fanboy writing
Rescue Sakura and force separate Artoria and Shirou and you even did what you did to Avalon!
and you have Artoria with that piece of shit Kiara?
This is trash
7/31/2023 c4 16Blue Glass Spear
"But I will only do so, if you guys ask for it in the comments. Because I can't be certain if sensitive people are reading this or not. Especially, considering how dark Fate series is..."
You kind of answered your own question. Also, its been long confirmed by sociologists that trigger warnings don't actually work. The general trend seems to be people actually ignore what they don't like if they aren't told to hate it.
16Blue Glass Spear"But I will only do so, if you guys ask for it in the comments. Because I can't be certain if sensitive people are reading this or not. Especially, considering how dark Fate series is..."
You kind of answered your own question. Also, its been long confirmed by sociologists that trigger warnings don't actually work. The general trend seems to be people actually ignore what they don't like if they aren't told to hate it.
7/30/2023 c6 NameEntry25
NO U DIDNT, NO U DIDNT. ITS EITHER RICHARD OR ARTHUR HUH.
NO YOU FKING DIDNT. SHIROU THE SABER COLLECTOR. orrrrrrr actually the lady knight from chap 5 is rider arthuria, and she has like rongominiad excalibur and carwennan. but if this is the cu fight in the house and atrhur(male)/arthuria just casually excaliburs, aint no way its them. its gotta be richard. this heavily leans on the faker part of shirou, because richard is a sort of fake with his excalibur not actually being the sword excalibur, but anything he weilds is "excalibur". you could say its a strange fake BADUMTSSSS.
NO U DIDNT, NO U DIDNT. ITS EITHER RICHARD OR ARTHUR HUH.
NO YOU FKING DIDNT. SHIROU THE SABER COLLECTOR. orrrrrrr actually the lady knight from chap 5 is rider arthuria, and she has like rongominiad excalibur and carwennan. but if this is the cu fight in the house and atrhur(male)/arthuria just casually excaliburs, aint no way its them. its gotta be richard. this heavily leans on the faker part of shirou, because richard is a sort of fake with his excalibur not actually being the sword excalibur, but anything he weilds is "excalibur". you could say its a strange fake BADUMTSSSS.
6/18/2023 c5 Guest
To Exodus12345: smh I will never understand people dislike for Sakura, I prefer Rin personally but Sakura would be my second pick
To Exodus12345: smh I will never understand people dislike for Sakura, I prefer Rin personally but Sakura would be my second pick
6/10/2023 c5 Exodus12345
Well this sucks. If Artoria is with someone else then she will be loyal to them and Shirou will not be able to get with her, she will even try to kill his servant and maybe him since he always jumps in the fights. Guess he is with Sakura here. Never really liked her so guess this is it for me.
Well this sucks. If Artoria is with someone else then she will be loyal to them and Shirou will not be able to get with her, she will even try to kill his servant and maybe him since he always jumps in the fights. Guess he is with Sakura here. Never really liked her so guess this is it for me.
6/10/2023 c4 Exodus12345
So how is Shirou going to summon Artoria without the sheath? Splitting them up is just unfair.
So how is Shirou going to summon Artoria without the sheath? Splitting them up is just unfair.
6/8/2023 c5 Guest
To the other guest: hey I’m the one that call the fate route Shirou the weakest, and let me express something else the fate route to me was the most boring, and Saber as a love interest was mid. UBW is the best route with the best girl, but heaven feels come at close to the top too and I ain’t taking it back, UBW and heaven feels Shirou’s is hype and did way more impressive stuff compare to in fate, with better love interest that isn’t a stuck in another dimension
To the other guest: hey I’m the one that call the fate route Shirou the weakest, and let me express something else the fate route to me was the most boring, and Saber as a love interest was mid. UBW is the best route with the best girl, but heaven feels come at close to the top too and I ain’t taking it back, UBW and heaven feels Shirou’s is hype and did way more impressive stuff compare to in fate, with better love interest that isn’t a stuck in another dimension
6/8/2023 c1 Guest
Screw you Guest just now, how dare you insult my favourite Saber Route is Weakest
Screw you Guest just now, how dare you insult my favourite Saber Route is Weakest
6/8/2023 c5 Guest
I wouldn’t consider heaven feels Shirou the weakest, tbf just having archer arm probably kickstarted his mastery of projection to tracing quicker compare to the other two plus there’s the fact he also get memories directly which result in boosting his Arsenal quicker compare to UBW!Shirou. I argue Fate!Shirou is the weakest by feats alone
I wouldn’t consider heaven feels Shirou the weakest, tbf just having archer arm probably kickstarted his mastery of projection to tracing quicker compare to the other two plus there’s the fact he also get memories directly which result in boosting his Arsenal quicker compare to UBW!Shirou. I argue Fate!Shirou is the weakest by feats alone