for The Hound of Central Academy1h c48 Peter Kim
I think Blake should have Last Warrior from Another Planet since that card’s effect prevents any summoning and Blake can temporarily banish that card until the end of that turn so Blake can summon monsters during that turn and prevent your opponent from summoning monsters on the opponent’s turn even if the opponent was able to destroy Last Warrior from Another Planet, you can bring it back from the graveyard by cards like Monster Reborn to prevent your opponent from summoning.
I think Blake should have Last Warrior from Another Planet since that card’s effect prevents any summoning and Blake can temporarily banish that card until the end of that turn so Blake can summon monsters during that turn and prevent your opponent from summoning monsters on the opponent’s turn even if the opponent was able to destroy Last Warrior from Another Planet, you can bring it back from the graveyard by cards like Monster Reborn to prevent your opponent from summoning.
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30kazikamikaze24
I know I missed on the previous chapter, but reading both back to back made it all the better. Seriously great job! I am hoping that Blake would be able to keep the Cyberdarks, or at least be the one to pass them to a duelist of his choice. Sheppard isn't exactly fair with his views, but that has me curious to read what comes next!
30kazikamikaze24I know I missed on the previous chapter, but reading both back to back made it all the better. Seriously great job! I am hoping that Blake would be able to keep the Cyberdarks, or at least be the one to pass them to a duelist of his choice. Sheppard isn't exactly fair with his views, but that has me curious to read what comes next!
1/9 c48 demissedwaifu
Go Blake Kami~, honestly to god, the thing I'm looking forward the most is DAD trying to flirt again, that was hilarious lmaooo
Go Blake Kami~, honestly to god, the thing I'm looking forward the most is DAD trying to flirt again, that was hilarious lmaooo
1/6 c48 Guest
Another type of deck I can picture Blake playing would be the Lair of Darkness. He could bond with Diabolos Lord of the Lair and have a whole menagerie of virus cards to infect his opponents decks.
Another type of deck I can picture Blake playing would be the Lair of Darkness. He could bond with Diabolos Lord of the Lair and have a whole menagerie of virus cards to infect his opponents decks.
1/6 c48 2Grim1298
Im loving this story i hope you will expend into the 5ds universe please for all that is holy cause this is fun to read its been ages since i felt like a little kid reading a story
2Grim1298Im loving this story i hope you will expend into the 5ds universe please for all that is holy cause this is fun to read its been ages since i felt like a little kid reading a story
1/5 c48 Peter Kim
Keep up the good work!
Keep up the good work!
1/5 c48 D2268
the one thing i hate about ffn is its buggy review system, forgot that dashes seem to be deleted
the one thing i hate about ffn is its buggy review system, forgot that dashes seem to be deleted
1/5 c48 D2268
that is a way to start the chapter lol, a character going undefeated or losing once doesn't really change much if the loss is against an equal opponent, so not sure if there was a point to change it, but you do you.
Belowski'dnot sure what you meant there
Not liked it stayed at onethat is nr 2
Not like he could beat him in a duelnot sure if it is a mistake, but pointing it out just for double checking
You showed Zane you got it on youtypo number 3
Getting a duelist who would run cyberdarks is...difficult, since their default is energy draining you would need someone with either massive energy reserves or someone who is experienced in spirit wrangling and actualy playes a strat compatible with them
Spirits stirring shit up during spirit day will be nuts
3 mistakes maybe 4, possible idea to look into a place you can write, then copy paste paragraphs from, that will show spelling mistakes. or don't, doing this is pretty interesting
that is a way to start the chapter lol, a character going undefeated or losing once doesn't really change much if the loss is against an equal opponent, so not sure if there was a point to change it, but you do you.
Belowski'dnot sure what you meant there
Not liked it stayed at onethat is nr 2
Not like he could beat him in a duelnot sure if it is a mistake, but pointing it out just for double checking
You showed Zane you got it on youtypo number 3
Getting a duelist who would run cyberdarks is...difficult, since their default is energy draining you would need someone with either massive energy reserves or someone who is experienced in spirit wrangling and actualy playes a strat compatible with them
Spirits stirring shit up during spirit day will be nuts
3 mistakes maybe 4, possible idea to look into a place you can write, then copy paste paragraphs from, that will show spelling mistakes. or don't, doing this is pretty interesting
1/5 c48 6Capito Celcior
Great chapter. And I guess I can see where you're coming from with the Cyberdarks. I mostly kept including them in the list of partners because it made the number bigger. But if he can get other, more INTERESTING Dark partners that compliment his deck better, then I don't think there is anything negative to be said. Agree with Honest, let's try to see if a more suitable partner can be found.
6Capito CelciorGreat chapter. And I guess I can see where you're coming from with the Cyberdarks. I mostly kept including them in the list of partners because it made the number bigger. But if he can get other, more INTERESTING Dark partners that compliment his deck better, then I don't think there is anything negative to be said. Agree with Honest, let's try to see if a more suitable partner can be found.
1/5 c48 3Raidentensho
nice one. though, will there be another oc with the Abyss deck? figured that there will be another junior character besides Hasslebarry to round out the 2nd year. no doubt this will be epic. until then, later!
3Raidentenshonice one. though, will there be another oc with the Abyss deck? figured that there will be another junior character besides Hasslebarry to round out the 2nd year. no doubt this will be epic. until then, later!
1/3 c1 Sunny us
Your story is badass, and the way you've written it is quite realistic. I really enjoyed your story and see great potential for it as a comic. Would you be open to me adapting it into a visual format?
Your story is badass, and the way you've written it is quite realistic. I really enjoyed your story and see great potential for it as a comic. Would you be open to me adapting it into a visual format?