for Darth Vader: Shattered Galaxy3/12 c24 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Still loving the story! That scene with Vader and the engineer was something Lovecraftian. Not expecting that. Are we going to see more of it? Might be an interesting twist for the story. I was suspecting that Hego's interrogation was all just a setup, but apparently not. Only his potential death was... Oddly enough, I'm glad to see that he's not dead. Methinks the investigation into the plague is about to turn very interesting. Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
Excellent chapter! Still loving the story! That scene with Vader and the engineer was something Lovecraftian. Not expecting that. Are we going to see more of it? Might be an interesting twist for the story. I was suspecting that Hego's interrogation was all just a setup, but apparently not. Only his potential death was... Oddly enough, I'm glad to see that he's not dead. Methinks the investigation into the plague is about to turn very interesting. Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
3/9 c23 loboleona1111
Ooh the psychosis that each of the various members Vader stumbles upon was very interesting to read, very curious what he'll do to the ones that obey?
Ooh the psychosis that each of the various members Vader stumbles upon was very interesting to read, very curious what he'll do to the ones that obey?
3/6 c24 RandoFox
I've finally gotten around to reading this again, had to go back and read the previous story too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I've finally gotten around to reading this again, had to go back and read the previous story too. Looking forward to the next chapter.
3/6 c24 havocofwar
Plots thicken, schemes unfold and some mysteries slowly unravel while others only get more mysterious.
Plots thicken, schemes unfold and some mysteries slowly unravel while others only get more mysterious.
3/4 c23 brandonepphilipps
Vader's been through worse than any horror he could come across. You can't intimidate him.
Vader's been through worse than any horror he could come across. You can't intimidate him.
3/4 c24 E
That sense of drive the engineer had really reminded me of some of the ways that Abeloth's mind powers affecting people were described. That need to act, sense of surety, and general Eldritch feel certainly fit.
Dunno why she would be involved, either with the Executor or time travel in general. I cannot imagine her benefiting from either, aside from the general chaos maybe freeing her a decade earlier. Maybe she wants to break free during the Clone Wars and try and play it low key, so that people don't immediately rally to defeat her? But ... there will also be WAY more of the powerful Force users required to defeat her alive at the time, not to mention multiple candidates for the Throne of Balance.
So, uh, probably unlikely that she's involved unless her planning abilities exist only to the extent of "make more chaos", which does not seem to be the case in the EU proper.
I await more, as always.
That sense of drive the engineer had really reminded me of some of the ways that Abeloth's mind powers affecting people were described. That need to act, sense of surety, and general Eldritch feel certainly fit.
Dunno why she would be involved, either with the Executor or time travel in general. I cannot imagine her benefiting from either, aside from the general chaos maybe freeing her a decade earlier. Maybe she wants to break free during the Clone Wars and try and play it low key, so that people don't immediately rally to defeat her? But ... there will also be WAY more of the powerful Force users required to defeat her alive at the time, not to mention multiple candidates for the Throne of Balance.
So, uh, probably unlikely that she's involved unless her planning abilities exist only to the extent of "make more chaos", which does not seem to be the case in the EU proper.
I await more, as always.
3/3 c24 Boogie Woogie
"Possible Eldritch horrors"
I'd say you're talking about Abeloth with how deep we are into the old EU, but not even Vader could scare Abeloth. That, and as far as you've told us, the Ones are still alive and well. Hell, it could even be Nom Anor, fifty years earlier, but Vader sensed it so it's not a Vong. Regardless, what are you planning...?
Anyways, I must say, reading this and the prequel has simply been a delight!
"Possible Eldritch horrors"
I'd say you're talking about Abeloth with how deep we are into the old EU, but not even Vader could scare Abeloth. That, and as far as you've told us, the Ones are still alive and well. Hell, it could even be Nom Anor, fifty years earlier, but Vader sensed it so it's not a Vong. Regardless, what are you planning...?
Anyways, I must say, reading this and the prequel has simply been a delight!
3/3 c23 
3JediMasterDraco
Oh. Oh. Oh great. Was this supposed to remind me of Event Horizon? Because I am officially creeped and reminded of Event Horizon. I’m gonna go pray to the God-Emperor to save us from the Warp. Or more likely, Abeloth is going to make a much undesired appearance.
Also Anakin and Plagueis having team-ups is something I sense will become a pattern.
3JediMasterDracoOh. Oh. Oh great. Was this supposed to remind me of Event Horizon? Because I am officially creeped and reminded of Event Horizon. I’m gonna go pray to the God-Emperor to save us from the Warp. Or more likely, Abeloth is going to make a much undesired appearance.
Also Anakin and Plagueis having team-ups is something I sense will become a pattern.
3/3 c23 xx.valtiel.xx
The whole Vader section reminded me of another fic "Welcome to the Club" by Malicean, just because of the "Lady" thing, the mysteries keep popping.
The whole Vader section reminded me of another fic "Welcome to the Club" by Malicean, just because of the "Lady" thing, the mysteries keep popping.
3/3 c24 20YugiohFreak54
Well now, this is getting interesting. I wonder what Hego/Plagueis is planning now. Vader seems to have the whole Executor debacle under control...but you know the old saying 'if things are going your way, the universe (or Force in this case) is gonna throw a monkey wrench at your head soon.'
Got a question for you though AkumaKami, in your story did Plagueis create Anakin like most Fanon stories or do you have your own idea on how Anakin came to be?
20YugiohFreak54Well now, this is getting interesting. I wonder what Hego/Plagueis is planning now. Vader seems to have the whole Executor debacle under control...but you know the old saying 'if things are going your way, the universe (or Force in this case) is gonna throw a monkey wrench at your head soon.'
Got a question for you though AkumaKami, in your story did Plagueis create Anakin like most Fanon stories or do you have your own idea on how Anakin came to be?
3/2 c23 3FreakShowMilotic
Darth Vader. The Shadow of Anakin Skywalker. Truly ironic, he was never free-er as a Jedi; he just never looked for that freedom. This is one of the only SW fanfics that I've read that has actually gotten Vader right. Good on you, I await further exploration of this concept with much anticipation.
3FreakShowMiloticDarth Vader. The Shadow of Anakin Skywalker. Truly ironic, he was never free-er as a Jedi; he just never looked for that freedom. This is one of the only SW fanfics that I've read that has actually gotten Vader right. Good on you, I await further exploration of this concept with much anticipation.
3/1 c24 Phnom Penh Hotel
Thank you for another chapter update, Chief but you’ve got noticeable spelling errors near the end — with Anakin and Hego’s banter and even in your closing Author’s Notes.
Thank you for another chapter update, Chief but you’ve got noticeable spelling errors near the end — with Anakin and Hego’s banter and even in your closing Author’s Notes.