for The Love of the Game2/2 c35 Cina's
Just finished rereading your story. It was just as magnificent as it was the first time I read it.
Just finished rereading your story. It was just as magnificent as it was the first time I read it.
1/6 c35 jen5795
I love this story. I'm so glad that they stuck it out and worked through both of their issues together. This is what a really good relationship should be like. Thank you for giving us this story.
I love this story. I'm so glad that they stuck it out and worked through both of their issues together. This is what a really good relationship should be like. Thank you for giving us this story.
11/27/2024 c35 twirob
AWESOME ! You hit it out of the park ;) With your first story ;) Thanks for sharing ;D
AWESOME ! You hit it out of the park ;) With your first story ;) Thanks for sharing ;D
10/12/2024 c1 Allear
This is too funny. As a European, I know that no one gets to be a pro at soccer if you start playing as late as in high school, unless the team is really bad, of course. I suggest you change that to middle school instead.
This is too funny. As a European, I know that no one gets to be a pro at soccer if you start playing as late as in high school, unless the team is really bad, of course. I suggest you change that to middle school instead.
10/7/2024 c35 it's simply me n you
This was a fantastic story.
You wrote a love story that we all can only wish for. This last chapter brought tears to my eyes.
Thanks for sharing with us.
This was a fantastic story.
You wrote a love story that we all can only wish for. This last chapter brought tears to my eyes.
Thanks for sharing with us.
10/6/2024 c12 Wendy
From: Wendy (Guest)
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Wendy:Let me guess, they're both just going to hold in secrets until it's "Almost" to late, she runs away and he's stubborn!
Loving the story and their connection, but the lack of communication has been done over and over again.
Dearest Gentle Reader,
LOL I always wanted to do that. First off, Thank you SO MUCH for reading. I appreciate you and your review. Secondly, I COULDN’T agree with you more. I think the miscommunication trope is SOOO OVER DONE. That is NOT happening in this story. They are grown ups and they communicate well. They may not always like what is said or make the right decisions at times, but who does? They are both working out things from their pasts and they support each other very well. You will find out both their stories and see the whats and whys of how it affected them. I have placed breadcrumbs throughout the story as well. This is based this off of a close friend of mine and her relationship with her husband. Edward is based off of someone else. I am thrilled you are loving the story and their connection. Thank you so much for giving this story a chance. XOXO, Pamela
From: Wendy (Guest)
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Wendy:Let me guess, they're both just going to hold in secrets until it's "Almost" to late, she runs away and he's stubborn!
Loving the story and their connection, but the lack of communication has been done over and over again.
Dearest Gentle Reader,
LOL I always wanted to do that. First off, Thank you SO MUCH for reading. I appreciate you and your review. Secondly, I COULDN’T agree with you more. I think the miscommunication trope is SOOO OVER DONE. That is NOT happening in this story. They are grown ups and they communicate well. They may not always like what is said or make the right decisions at times, but who does? They are both working out things from their pasts and they support each other very well. You will find out both their stories and see the whats and whys of how it affected them. I have placed breadcrumbs throughout the story as well. This is based this off of a close friend of mine and her relationship with her husband. Edward is based off of someone else. I am thrilled you are loving the story and their connection. Thank you so much for giving this story a chance. XOXO, Pamela
9/22/2024 c35 
2AHotMess
Thank you for such a beautiful fic. This final chap was such a beautiful encapsulation of such a fantastic story
2AHotMessThank you for such a beautiful fic. This final chap was such a beautiful encapsulation of such a fantastic story
9/16/2024 c35 breakawaygirl
Dammit Pamela, why am I bawling like a goddamn baby right now?! So much sweet emotion, ugh, I love it!
Dammit Pamela, why am I bawling like a goddamn baby right now?! So much sweet emotion, ugh, I love it!
9/16/2024 c34 breakawaygirl
Ugh, so freaking sweet. Loved them so much (well, once they got their heads out of their asses).
Ugh, so freaking sweet. Loved them so much (well, once they got their heads out of their asses).