Reviews: Kitchen Fun

7/10 c1 AJGuardian
...it seems that some paragraphs get copied twice.

4/20 c1 SamsonOfOld
looks like a teenager wrote this it's horribly written tons of mistakes and sadly probably could only get worse

4/13 c2 kage88
want more please continue

4/13 c2 Guest
Great update more please

4/12 c1

8MaddyBunny10
It's good, but some parts of the story are doubled.