for Chaos Born: Destiny Undone3/12 c24 Hunter1
Can Luna when she gets all of the power from being death under control can she bring all of the pece's of Sirius's soul back together and she and Harry will bring Sirius's back to life
Can Luna when she gets all of the power from being death under control can she bring all of the pece's of Sirius's soul back together and she and Harry will bring Sirius's back to life
3/9 c25 StabbingFate
The introduction of Halo was interesting and I’m glad for the new allies that showed up, while not all exposition is good, it can help keep track of what’s going on. I was not smart enough to follow the conversation about nexuses and the multiverse but very much look forward to the crossovers to come. A part of me is hoping one of the universes they visit runs on porn logic, where the main characters are given a chance to relax and impregnate thousands of women.
The introduction of Halo was interesting and I’m glad for the new allies that showed up, while not all exposition is good, it can help keep track of what’s going on. I was not smart enough to follow the conversation about nexuses and the multiverse but very much look forward to the crossovers to come. A part of me is hoping one of the universes they visit runs on porn logic, where the main characters are given a chance to relax and impregnate thousands of women.
3/9 c25 
22Yami Luna Kitsune
pretty good chapter
this was rather interesting
eager for the next chapter
22Yami Luna Kitsunepretty good chapter
this was rather interesting
eager for the next chapter
3/9 c25 jp236
I absolutely love the writing snd dedication to this fiction. I just wishes it updated a bit more frequently. Keep up the amazing work!
I absolutely love the writing snd dedication to this fiction. I just wishes it updated a bit more frequently. Keep up the amazing work!
3/8 c25 DarkRavie
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading that happens in your next chapter.
I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading that happens in your next chapter.
3/8 c25 2AvidReader2425
This was the chapter of certainly filled with one hell of a metamorphosis. The age of transition between Harry Potter‘s time to the more cyberpunk era was certainly filled with its own share of atrocities, hedonism, and plenty of things to peak the interest of the chaos gods.
I do enjoy the Halo element that was introduced in this chapter, and I’m very curious on how it will be developed later, especially with things like the flood, and the particularly devastating halo rings. I also liked the cyberpunk elements added, and how Luna was so effective as to be confused as one of the most effective and dangerous AI on the net.
Overall, a good chapter, even if the overall tone of the story is certainly very dark. Harry certainly had his own metamorphosis as the story went on, becoming a much darker character as things developed.
2AvidReader2425This was the chapter of certainly filled with one hell of a metamorphosis. The age of transition between Harry Potter‘s time to the more cyberpunk era was certainly filled with its own share of atrocities, hedonism, and plenty of things to peak the interest of the chaos gods.
I do enjoy the Halo element that was introduced in this chapter, and I’m very curious on how it will be developed later, especially with things like the flood, and the particularly devastating halo rings. I also liked the cyberpunk elements added, and how Luna was so effective as to be confused as one of the most effective and dangerous AI on the net.
Overall, a good chapter, even if the overall tone of the story is certainly very dark. Harry certainly had his own metamorphosis as the story went on, becoming a much darker character as things developed.
2/26 c1 15darthwizard
I love horror stories, and you perfectly captured that atmosphere leading up to the chapter ending. I really enjoyed this first chapter and hopefully the subsequent chapters are just as good.
15darthwizardI love horror stories, and you perfectly captured that atmosphere leading up to the chapter ending. I really enjoyed this first chapter and hopefully the subsequent chapters are just as good.
2/6 c16 randiandn293
This story it's getting weirder than i can imagine. Honestly, I love reading this story so far but past this point it ain't my cup of tea. Thanks for the story btw, I hope you can write another story that atleast i can chew the content in it.
This story it's getting weirder than i can imagine. Honestly, I love reading this story so far but past this point it ain't my cup of tea. Thanks for the story btw, I hope you can write another story that atleast i can chew the content in it.
12/10/2024 c24 Mikeblade
sort of hard for the emperor to prepare when he can't move or do anything at all and his empire is being attacked from all sides
sort of hard for the emperor to prepare when he can't move or do anything at all and his empire is being attacked from all sides
12/8/2024 c24 2Black Doberman
not what i expected. honestly was thinkin he was horus reborn half way through. while i like where ya went with it. the explanation i feel could have been delivered a bit better. overall love your take and the missing legion. wonder and hope you bring in the 11th as well.
2Black Dobermannot what i expected. honestly was thinkin he was horus reborn half way through. while i like where ya went with it. the explanation i feel could have been delivered a bit better. overall love your take and the missing legion. wonder and hope you bring in the 11th as well.