for Monkey D Luffy - Avatar of Nika10/10/2024 c7 Jibberflex
Let me guess, he's gonna beat Arlong up and then tell him to leave as well...?
Let me guess, he's gonna beat Arlong up and then tell him to leave as well...?
10/10/2024 c6 Jibberflex
What the fuck kinda stupid ass FF is this? They let a murdering, pillaging pirate crew free instead of having thr village turn them in? I hate FFs that do this.
What the fuck kinda stupid ass FF is this? They let a murdering, pillaging pirate crew free instead of having thr village turn them in? I hate FFs that do this.
10/10/2024 c26 AweMazing
Sorry about that previous anon review. It seems ff logged me out for some weird reason. I've posted that review under my same name.
Sorry about that previous anon review. It seems ff logged me out for some weird reason. I've posted that review under my same name.
10/8/2024 c7 AnimeGuy93
yea these DF make absolutely no sense if you stick to what you said that the power the person gained fit's the personality/will, kaya should of gotten something todo with healing as that's what her interest was and she always wanted to help the weak due to her poor health, this fic is honestly lame and the hole i can give DF powers is just stupid not to mention that if anyone falls into water then they are fked as not one of them can swim, its like the author hasn't really thought this whole thing out and its was just an idea that poped into his/her head and thought sounds good and got to wrighting
yea these DF make absolutely no sense if you stick to what you said that the power the person gained fit's the personality/will, kaya should of gotten something todo with healing as that's what her interest was and she always wanted to help the weak due to her poor health, this fic is honestly lame and the hole i can give DF powers is just stupid not to mention that if anyone falls into water then they are fked as not one of them can swim, its like the author hasn't really thought this whole thing out and its was just an idea that poped into his/her head and thought sounds good and got to wrighting
10/8/2024 c3 AnimeGuy93
you gave makino a shit DF the doesn't fit her personality like you said it's supposed to do so you have already failed at a plot point
you gave makino a shit DF the doesn't fit her personality like you said it's supposed to do so you have already failed at a plot point
10/2/2024 c26 Wishfull-star
Oh I hope that the Strawhat's get past CPO and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
Oh I hope that the Strawhat's get past CPO and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
9/30/2024 c26 
2Monkey Prince
So we have an evil Zoro and an Sanji. This story is getting very interesting
2Monkey PrinceSo we have an evil Zoro and an Sanji. This story is getting very interesting
9/29/2024 c26 KidChaos69
Well damn I didn't expect Reiju and Sanjis positions to be swapped like that. That's definitely a excellent twist, can't wait to see what happens when CP3 meets Luffy.
Well damn I didn't expect Reiju and Sanjis positions to be swapped like that. That's definitely a excellent twist, can't wait to see what happens when CP3 meets Luffy.
9/29/2024 c26 27InsaneMakaioshin
1. (high-velocity speedboat) Pretty sure that those don’t exist outside of maybe egghead and baldimore.
2. (recognized CP agents) If you’re recognized as a member of CP9, you are horrible at your job. CPA0 would have been a better comparison.
27InsaneMakaioshin1. (high-velocity speedboat) Pretty sure that those don’t exist outside of maybe egghead and baldimore.
2. (recognized CP agents) If you’re recognized as a member of CP9, you are horrible at your job. CPA0 would have been a better comparison.
9/29/2024 c26 aritrakumarroy47
Dear milo f waters your story is awsome though I did not like adding oc but it still it fitted well with the story. The only problem is can you update the story more frequently. if possible twice a month since I think the wait is a little to much. Thank you.
Dear milo f waters your story is awsome though I did not like adding oc but it still it fitted well with the story. The only problem is can you update the story more frequently. if possible twice a month since I think the wait is a little to much. Thank you.
9/29/2024 c26 Guest
When luffy hears about what's going on with his crew getting hurt and captured by the marines he will be absolutely furious and go and unleash his fury and do whatever it takes to save them and put fear into them they never felt before and make them regret they ever messed with the captain and his crew also make sure something like that never happens again and also train harder so they be much stronger to be able to fight strong opponents like these guys
When luffy hears about what's going on with his crew getting hurt and captured by the marines he will be absolutely furious and go and unleash his fury and do whatever it takes to save them and put fear into them they never felt before and make them regret they ever messed with the captain and his crew also make sure something like that never happens again and also train harder so they be much stronger to be able to fight strong opponents like these guys
9/29/2024 c26 14Power of Magic
Ah, crap. Well, here's hoping that fighting these Cipher Pol agents will show the Straw Hats that not all they'll face will be as weak as those they've defeated before, and that they'll come out stronger than before. I had wondered if you'd have Sanji be the same as his brothers in this and it looks like I was right and I can only imagine what Luffy will do to Judge, when he meets him (most likely when Judge and Big Mom want to enter an alliance with each other, with Judge offering up Reiju to marry one of Big Mom's sons)
So, will Chopper be joining the crew like he does in the anime or does Kaya get some books, to help her become a better nurse for the crew?
14Power of MagicAh, crap. Well, here's hoping that fighting these Cipher Pol agents will show the Straw Hats that not all they'll face will be as weak as those they've defeated before, and that they'll come out stronger than before. I had wondered if you'd have Sanji be the same as his brothers in this and it looks like I was right and I can only imagine what Luffy will do to Judge, when he meets him (most likely when Judge and Big Mom want to enter an alliance with each other, with Judge offering up Reiju to marry one of Big Mom's sons)
So, will Chopper be joining the crew like he does in the anime or does Kaya get some books, to help her become a better nurse for the crew?