for Monkey D Luffy - Avatar of Nika4/23/2023 c2 
5Piraite apprentice
Question will all the male members of the original crew be women in this story
5Piraite apprenticeQuestion will all the male members of the original crew be women in this story
4/23/2023 c2 1Helventhity4
Yes! Finally a story where Makino x Luffy becomes a reality! I’ve been looking for a story like this but never found one…unless I somehow missed one already existing. Anyway! Great story thus far! I’m eagerly looking forward to more so, please, keep updating as best as you can!
1Helventhity4Yes! Finally a story where Makino x Luffy becomes a reality! I’ve been looking for a story like this but never found one…unless I somehow missed one already existing. Anyway! Great story thus far! I’m eagerly looking forward to more so, please, keep updating as best as you can!
4/23/2023 c1 1GreyNimbus
I'm loving this so far! It's just like the fanfic I've been writing. Keep it up!
1GreyNimbusI'm loving this so far! It's just like the fanfic I've been writing. Keep it up!
4/22/2023 c2 Nami4Life
After reading the first chapter I was wondering if the fruit he ate tasting delicious meant he was the one that was supposed to eat it. Others that ate fruits that tasted like sewage meant they weren’t supposed to eat them. Kinda makes sense if ya think about it. I’m talking about this fic, not canon just to clarify. Makino’s ability is pretty sick tbh, it will only get stronger as she does. Nami joining and getting the Gold Gold fruit ability would be awesome. I’m not really bothered who is in the crew/harem as long as Nami and Robin are. I hope you don’t genderbend though. Just have Kuina/Zoro Santoryu, Reiju/Sanji Black Leg. Even swap Kaya/Usopp, make her the blond girl that goes to see a sick Usopp and tell him stories etc etc.
After reading the first chapter I was wondering if the fruit he ate tasting delicious meant he was the one that was supposed to eat it. Others that ate fruits that tasted like sewage meant they weren’t supposed to eat them. Kinda makes sense if ya think about it. I’m talking about this fic, not canon just to clarify. Makino’s ability is pretty sick tbh, it will only get stronger as she does. Nami joining and getting the Gold Gold fruit ability would be awesome. I’m not really bothered who is in the crew/harem as long as Nami and Robin are. I hope you don’t genderbend though. Just have Kuina/Zoro Santoryu, Reiju/Sanji Black Leg. Even swap Kaya/Usopp, make her the blond girl that goes to see a sick Usopp and tell him stories etc etc.
4/22/2023 c2 bastidaswilliam2005
Each option it is fine by me just if you are gona put from other famdom please put from where you take the women for example in exchange of zoro you could put erzaz from fairy tail as the swordwoman
Each option it is fine by me just if you are gona put from other famdom please put from where you take the women for example in exchange of zoro you could put erzaz from fairy tail as the swordwoman
4/22/2023 c2 27InsaneMakaioshin
1. Shouldn't Makino be after Shanks?
2. One Piece only.
3. Please include Ann & Silk from the One-shots & Carina from Film Gold.
4. Would other God fruits be created by Nika, like the Elbaf fruit?
27InsaneMakaioshin1. Shouldn't Makino be after Shanks?
2. One Piece only.
3. Please include Ann & Silk from the One-shots & Carina from Film Gold.
4. Would other God fruits be created by Nika, like the Elbaf fruit?
4/22/2023 c1 Nami4Life
That’s more like it. Really enjoyed that especially his interactions with Nika. Don’t be sleeping on Garp though, Aokiji just tried that. Didn’t go too well for him, found himself in a Blue Hole, lol.
That’s more like it. Really enjoyed that especially his interactions with Nika. Don’t be sleeping on Garp though, Aokiji just tried that. Didn’t go too well for him, found himself in a Blue Hole, lol.
4/22/2023 c2 4El Pirato
Stick to canon. Shuffling them in various would be very Interesting. Imagine a Charlotte being found and enlisted at Whiskey Peak
4El PiratoStick to canon. Shuffling them in various would be very Interesting. Imagine a Charlotte being found and enlisted at Whiskey Peak
4/22/2023 c2 4Negima Uzumaki
You know she could also use the Burst Fruit powers in the bedroom if she figures out how to control them.
4Negima UzumakiYou know she could also use the Burst Fruit powers in the bedroom if she figures out how to control them.
4/22/2023 c2 Unanium
Though I would like to see more shonen woman I think if the whole crew will consist of only woman and you can do genderbends for the male characters, I'll say only One Piece Girls.
Though I would like to see more shonen woman I think if the whole crew will consist of only woman and you can do genderbends for the male characters, I'll say only One Piece Girls.