for A Story of Ice and Magic
18/4/2024 c1 Guest
This Story is so heart warming that the end brings a tears to my eye. This is most wonderful tale i have ever heard. Thanks.
This Story is so heart warming that the end brings a tears to my eye. This is most wonderful tale i have ever heard. Thanks.
5/19/2024 c1 Elanor12345
Part of me wants to say that this should have been an adventure of finding Sirius, as he was mentioned and Harry was given that hope that he might be alive, but then again, I completely forgot about that chance when the real story got started because I was pulled in. I still wish though that he would have gotten a slightly longer finding or at least a live reaction of how they reacted to seeing each other. But nice story. As I said. Until you mentioned him in the end I forgot he could even be there and Siri is my favourite and I cry every time I am with the canon.
Part of me wants to say that this should have been an adventure of finding Sirius, as he was mentioned and Harry was given that hope that he might be alive, but then again, I completely forgot about that chance when the real story got started because I was pulled in. I still wish though that he would have gotten a slightly longer finding or at least a live reaction of how they reacted to seeing each other. But nice story. As I said. Until you mentioned him in the end I forgot he could even be there and Siri is my favourite and I cry every time I am with the canon.
2/27/2024 c1 Guest
Hans Christian Andersen's The Snow Queen
Hans Christian Andersen's The Snow Queen
1/18/2024 c1 Ravenclaw Queen
OMG I LOVE IT! At first I thought the shipping Harry& Elsa is a little bit silly but now I love it! It's AMAZING! The story is really cool but it's sad that Harry won't see Hermione, Ron, Ginny; Luna, Neville, George, Hagrid, Mister and Miss Weasley again :( But still a cool storie. By the way can you please tell me the name of the friends who
OMG I LOVE IT! At first I thought the shipping Harry& Elsa is a little bit silly but now I love it! It's AMAZING! The story is really cool but it's sad that Harry won't see Hermione, Ron, Ginny; Luna, Neville, George, Hagrid, Mister and Miss Weasley again :( But still a cool storie. By the way can you please tell me the name of the friends who
12/7/2023 c1 soccersack
Enjoyed this overall and would like to see more. That said, I feel like the second half lost its way and ended up a little cluttered and disconnected.
I'll preface this by mentioning that I am not a writer, but I think that you'd need to take this right back to the planning stage of you wanted to expand on it.
I've also been reading your Alagaesia story, which is outstanding. It's great to see how much progress you've made as a writer, keep up the good work :)
Enjoyed this overall and would like to see more. That said, I feel like the second half lost its way and ended up a little cluttered and disconnected.
I'll preface this by mentioning that I am not a writer, but I think that you'd need to take this right back to the planning stage of you wanted to expand on it.
I've also been reading your Alagaesia story, which is outstanding. It's great to see how much progress you've made as a writer, keep up the good work :)
4/25/2023 c1 Guest
I'd rather prefer them (Anna and Elsa) as strangers.
I'd rather prefer them (Anna and Elsa) as strangers.
4/17/2023 c1 Arian Penmage
This was a fun rehash of the movie! I liked everything you added in and your writing style did well to bring the characters to life a bit more. There were a few tense switches in the second half or so, but otherwise, well written!
Ignore the person(s) who seem(s) to struggle with the ability to stop reading/ignore something they don't like.
This was a fun rehash of the movie! I liked everything you added in and your writing style did well to bring the characters to life a bit more. There were a few tense switches in the second half or so, but otherwise, well written!
Ignore the person(s) who seem(s) to struggle with the ability to stop reading/ignore something they don't like.
4/17/2023 c1 Guest
If only we never had to deal with Frozen.
If only we never had to deal with Frozen.
4/17/2023 c1 Guest
(sighs): I'll never ever understand the reason this crossover have to be like Disney's Frozen 1 all over again.
(sighs): I'll never ever understand the reason this crossover have to be like Disney's Frozen 1 all over again.
4/17/2023 c1 Guest
I don't like Disney's Frozen 2 as/for what/the way it is, either.
I don't like Disney's Frozen 2 as/for what/the way it is, either.
4/17/2023 c1 Guest
Oh great, just what we need another crossover canon version of Disney's Frozen 1.
Oh great, just what we need another crossover canon version of Disney's Frozen 1.
4/17/2023 c1 Otsutsuki no Yami
Nice story. Glad that Sirius survived, however, I don't think the Death Eaters should have known about the Veil of Death. I hope they were Obliviated from the knowledge.
Nice story. Glad that Sirius survived, however, I don't think the Death Eaters should have known about the Veil of Death. I hope they were Obliviated from the knowledge.