for Total Drama: All 681/6/2024 c5 Mr.NInja21
YES! Cody is gone never liked him much either to be honest kinda bummed that Zoey go the boot to but in a cast this large can't expect all my favorites to last really liked MK being a snake betraying Gwen's alliance and knowing she's most likely playing Heather as well can't wait for the next chapter!
YES! Cody is gone never liked him much either to be honest kinda bummed that Zoey go the boot to but in a cast this large can't expect all my favorites to last really liked MK being a snake betraying Gwen's alliance and knowing she's most likely playing Heather as well can't wait for the next chapter!
1/6/2024 c5 
142Cody Fanatic
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Why must you break my heart twice in the same episode?
142Cody FanaticNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Why must you break my heart twice in the same episode?
1/6/2024 c5 4PrincessGumballWatterson777
The story was great until you eliminated Zoey. Plus, you put her in 67th place in the character ranking. Also, I wished someone out there would create a TD story where everyone is completing, EVEN the Ridonculous Race characters.
In conclusion, TD competition stories involving crossover characters are much better.
No offense to you, but this review is my opinion.
4PrincessGumballWatterson777The story was great until you eliminated Zoey. Plus, you put her in 67th place in the character ranking. Also, I wished someone out there would create a TD story where everyone is completing, EVEN the Ridonculous Race characters.
In conclusion, TD competition stories involving crossover characters are much better.
No offense to you, but this review is my opinion.
12/12/2023 c3 Guest
Hope you update soon. This is getting good.
Hope you update soon. This is getting good.
12/12/2023 c4 Guest
Wow this is a great total drama fanfic. All contestants from every generation competing in season one is great. While I am a bit disappointed that not all 100 contestants, which include ridonculous race aren't on here, I'll take what I can get. Just hope other authors take your lead and write a total drama island season 1 with all 100 contestants in the franchise from all gens and the spinoff and compete to see who is the ultimate contestant out of all of them.
Wow this is a great total drama fanfic. All contestants from every generation competing in season one is great. While I am a bit disappointed that not all 100 contestants, which include ridonculous race aren't on here, I'll take what I can get. Just hope other authors take your lead and write a total drama island season 1 with all 100 contestants in the franchise from all gens and the spinoff and compete to see who is the ultimate contestant out of all of them.
8/31/2023 c4 FlyingTomato
This was a fun chapter, but the jokes about Trent really got annoying quickly. It was a one off in cannon and there was literally no reason to stretch it out this long. Other than that though, solid time all around. As for the eliminations:
Anne Maria: can’t complain about her going here. While she can be funny, I’ve never found it realistic for her to last long, plus there are just so many better characters than her.
Katie: I was greatly surprised by her this chapter. Making her and Sadie actually competent was nice to see and I’m looking forward to seeing how Sadie can fair. If I’m being honest though, her elimination does feel kind of forced and now I kind of want to see Sadie holding a bit of a grudge against her teammates, it would honestly feel justified in this case.
This was a fun chapter, but the jokes about Trent really got annoying quickly. It was a one off in cannon and there was literally no reason to stretch it out this long. Other than that though, solid time all around. As for the eliminations:
Anne Maria: can’t complain about her going here. While she can be funny, I’ve never found it realistic for her to last long, plus there are just so many better characters than her.
Katie: I was greatly surprised by her this chapter. Making her and Sadie actually competent was nice to see and I’m looking forward to seeing how Sadie can fair. If I’m being honest though, her elimination does feel kind of forced and now I kind of want to see Sadie holding a bit of a grudge against her teammates, it would honestly feel justified in this case.
8/19/2023 c4 2richboylion
God, Trent sucked so much in this challenge! Even Cameron could have beaten him!
2richboylionGod, Trent sucked so much in this challenge! Even Cameron could have beaten him!
8/15/2023 c2 2lazy2login
Good point. Pretty much the first half of the people who showed up to the cliff first are gonna end up final half (minus things going array) and a couple of outliers.
I hate when fanfic writers show favoritism and have certain people end up making it far like seriously Sadie isn’t it making it top three be for real
Good point. Pretty much the first half of the people who showed up to the cliff first are gonna end up final half (minus things going array) and a couple of outliers.
I hate when fanfic writers show favoritism and have certain people end up making it far like seriously Sadie isn’t it making it top three be for real
8/14/2023 c4 Lucas
Why did u kick Katie off so quickly! :( If comebacks happen, Plls let her comeback.
Why did u kick Katie off so quickly! :( If comebacks happen, Plls let her comeback.
8/13/2023 c4 46Thunderstrike16
Last two chapters have been good, but dang two double eliminations in a row. Which makes sense, considering how big the cast is. Can't wait to see what else you got in store, dude.
Keep up the good work.
46Thunderstrike16Last two chapters have been good, but dang two double eliminations in a row. Which makes sense, considering how big the cast is. Can't wait to see what else you got in store, dude.
Keep up the good work.
8/13/2023 c1 beck
lovin' it
lovin' it
8/12/2023 c4 coralcarl11
Good chapter. Trent being on the chopping block was a fun bit for the chapter, though it made it obvious that Katie was going home. Speaking of, Katie’s elimination just didn’t feel very justified. Enough of her teammates are rational players that I find it hard to believe they’d be willing to place the blame on her, a team player and asset, over any of the several poor challenge performers on the team. Overall though I did enjoy the chapter and hope you’ve got something good planned for Sadie this season.
Good chapter. Trent being on the chopping block was a fun bit for the chapter, though it made it obvious that Katie was going home. Speaking of, Katie’s elimination just didn’t feel very justified. Enough of her teammates are rational players that I find it hard to believe they’d be willing to place the blame on her, a team player and asset, over any of the several poor challenge performers on the team. Overall though I did enjoy the chapter and hope you’ve got something good planned for Sadie this season.
8/12/2023 c4 SuperSonicHeroes
Another fun chapter, and a good one for the classic dodgeball challenge. I was a bit worried that Cameron was going to be eliminated for a moment due to his weak physical nature, and how he seems to be very under appreciated by a lot of fans, but I am glad he survived this round. I am a bit shocked that Staci is still around though. I don't think I have ever found a story where she has lasted this long.
You did great with all the character interactions as usual. However, one bit of criticism I personally have for this chapter is I wasn't a big fan of everyone making Trent sound like the worst at dodgeball and being on the chopping block for it. In the actual episode that was an obvious script error where Courtney was supposed to say Tyler instead of Trent, and I don't think this joke was necessary for it.
Another fun chapter, and a good one for the classic dodgeball challenge. I was a bit worried that Cameron was going to be eliminated for a moment due to his weak physical nature, and how he seems to be very under appreciated by a lot of fans, but I am glad he survived this round. I am a bit shocked that Staci is still around though. I don't think I have ever found a story where she has lasted this long.
You did great with all the character interactions as usual. However, one bit of criticism I personally have for this chapter is I wasn't a big fan of everyone making Trent sound like the worst at dodgeball and being on the chopping block for it. In the actual episode that was an obvious script error where Courtney was supposed to say Tyler instead of Trent, and I don't think this joke was necessary for it.