for Amber's Return7/11/2004 c9 Lady Lorene
I'm glad you tried to finish this, but you could do so much better. I hope you write more, but I understand things can stay in the way.
I'm glad you tried to finish this, but you could do so much better. I hope you write more, but I understand things can stay in the way.
7/29/2003 c5 Lady Lorene
It's a great story. I just want to know more about Lola. What happened to her and why is Bray just now finding her? What's their story?
It's a great story. I just want to know more about Lola. What happened to her and why is Bray just now finding her? What's their story?
7/13/2003 c3 
1Pinball Wizard
Great story, short and sweet! :D Is there gonna be any follow up? Don't mean to sound rude, lol, I'd just love to find out how Bray takes this in the long run! As I said, great story!
1Pinball WizardGreat story, short and sweet! :D Is there gonna be any follow up? Don't mean to sound rude, lol, I'd just love to find out how Bray takes this in the long run! As I said, great story!