for When Darkness Reaches4/29/2023 c1 
27Drumboy100
Wow! Effective build-up with the creepy ambiance. Happy Birthday to Nancy, who started out 16 in 1930...so 109th birthday? "Cautious and prudent, yes, but never afraid," that is an accurate and redemptive description of Ned's character. Is the voice someone that Nancy knew? And I feel like Carson knows something about that asylum that he didn't share? And is our trespassing hero going to get arrested for burning down an abandoned building?! "It's better not to know some things" is a great lesson for Nancy to learn at the beginning of her amazing and over-the-top career, and it's Ned who's the real hero here, pulling her back from the abyss. Thanks for sharing.
27Drumboy100Wow! Effective build-up with the creepy ambiance. Happy Birthday to Nancy, who started out 16 in 1930...so 109th birthday? "Cautious and prudent, yes, but never afraid," that is an accurate and redemptive description of Ned's character. Is the voice someone that Nancy knew? And I feel like Carson knows something about that asylum that he didn't share? And is our trespassing hero going to get arrested for burning down an abandoned building?! "It's better not to know some things" is a great lesson for Nancy to learn at the beginning of her amazing and over-the-top career, and it's Ned who's the real hero here, pulling her back from the abyss. Thanks for sharing.
4/28/2023 c1 Guest
Cool story. I would have freaked out if I stumbled on a dead body in the dark.
Cool story. I would have freaked out if I stumbled on a dead body in the dark.