
9/11 c31 Player Zero
Part 1- Was So Fun, sneaky meet up with Mariam and then Max forgets their supposed to be discreet!
Part 2- OMG Rick, hahaha. And then Mariah just messing with him.
Part 3- My fav! Perfect. Loved Mariam's teasing! And then the jab and smirk when Max finally joined her! So great!
Loved the Whole Series! Can't wait to read more of your stories!
Part 1- Was So Fun, sneaky meet up with Mariam and then Max forgets their supposed to be discreet!
Part 2- OMG Rick, hahaha. And then Mariah just messing with him.
Part 3- My fav! Perfect. Loved Mariam's teasing! And then the jab and smirk when Max finally joined her! So great!
Loved the Whole Series! Can't wait to read more of your stories!
9/3 c30 Player Zero
Love it! Always great to have more Max&Mariam stories.
Fun that its the saint shields helping with the move. (and as a bonus we get more of the ever teasing Joseph!)
I guess if Tyson and the rest of the gang were there, it prob would of devolved in to a massive bey battle!
Love it! Always great to have more Max&Mariam stories.
Fun that its the saint shields helping with the move. (and as a bonus we get more of the ever teasing Joseph!)
I guess if Tyson and the rest of the gang were there, it prob would of devolved in to a massive bey battle!
8/28 c29 Player Zero
Nice, its probably just as accurate as any non tennis focused anime. ( I know nothing of tennis ether.)
Always fun having the smug for no reason characters loose.
Nice, its probably just as accurate as any non tennis focused anime. ( I know nothing of tennis ether.)
Always fun having the smug for no reason characters loose.
8/22 c28 Player Zero
Very nice, and fun to go back to earlier times.
Couldn't Help imagining how different characters would have handled getting a teammate or partner to eat / bed.
Hilary would have chose violence to get Tyson moving.
And Mariam wouldn't have any trouble getting Max moving.
Very nice, and fun to go back to earlier times.
Couldn't Help imagining how different characters would have handled getting a teammate or partner to eat / bed.
Hilary would have chose violence to get Tyson moving.
And Mariam wouldn't have any trouble getting Max moving.
8/18 c27
56SaberLariat
You are such a talented writer that it entertains us to read about other characters for a while. Normally, readers and authors here on FFN want to read a story only if it is pertaining to their pairing but you are different. I don't even have to suggest or request or plead like please write TyHil and it's been long...To be honest, TyHil is a precious pairing just like significant others, and it takes a while for good things to come.

You are such a talented writer that it entertains us to read about other characters for a while. Normally, readers and authors here on FFN want to read a story only if it is pertaining to their pairing but you are different. I don't even have to suggest or request or plead like please write TyHil and it's been long...To be honest, TyHil is a precious pairing just like significant others, and it takes a while for good things to come.
8/14 c27 Player Zero
Nice story. Nice to see Emily involved, and not just like usual as Judy's enforcer.
Mariah would definitely be the team builder of that group.
Nice story. Nice to see Emily involved, and not just like usual as Judy's enforcer.
Mariah would definitely be the team builder of that group.
7/28 c26 Goldmineempire5
I had no idea King and Queen are siblings. is it real? Anyway, their relationship was beautifully enhanced.
I had no idea King and Queen are siblings. is it real? Anyway, their relationship was beautifully enhanced.
7/26 c26 Player Zero
Great story.
I agree King would find BEGA really bad.
I can see Queen still being stubborn.
Another match vs Max would knock Queen down a peg again, lol. (Mariam would wipe the floor with her too.)
Great story.
I agree King would find BEGA really bad.
I can see Queen still being stubborn.
Another match vs Max would knock Queen down a peg again, lol. (Mariam would wipe the floor with her too.)