for Sinful Seduction7/7/2023 c32 Donna J Dowling
I can't believe Mike got off scot-free, the weasel. And Edward had to sell his business, oh man! So sad! Just glad that he's free and happy and seems to be starting a new life in New Mexico. Yes, get away from it all. thanx ;o)
I can't believe Mike got off scot-free, the weasel. And Edward had to sell his business, oh man! So sad! Just glad that he's free and happy and seems to be starting a new life in New Mexico. Yes, get away from it all. thanx ;o)
7/7/2023 c31 Donna J Dowling
Oh holy crap, wth? Mike is a leech, snake, etc., etc. Funny though how he was a bit taken back at first and then comes out with that. Then camera's all over, hmm? Two more chapters, I hope it all gets straightened out. thanx ;o)
Oh holy crap, wth? Mike is a leech, snake, etc., etc. Funny though how he was a bit taken back at first and then comes out with that. Then camera's all over, hmm? Two more chapters, I hope it all gets straightened out. thanx ;o)
7/7/2023 c33 Guest
You wouldn't say "to help I move in," so don't say "to help Bella and I move in." Use ME. "To help me move in." "To help Bella and me move in"
You wouldn't say "to help I move in," so don't say "to help Bella and I move in." Use ME. "To help me move in." "To help Bella and me move in"
7/7/2023 c33 Guest
Do you mean "business savvy"? "Business suave" makes no sense.
Do you mean "business savvy"? "Business suave" makes no sense.
7/7/2023 c33 Guest
I am not sure why you deleted all of your other stories, but the quality of this one doesn’t really hold up. I hope you add back your older ones in the future!
I am not sure why you deleted all of your other stories, but the quality of this one doesn’t really hold up. I hope you add back your older ones in the future!
7/8/2023 c33 PreciousJuls
Love that it all worked out. Would have loved to see a little more of Renee's demise ;)
Love that it all worked out. Would have loved to see a little more of Renee's demise ;)
7/8/2023 c22 PreciousJuls
Oh no. That's going to be an awkward convo. I hope Bella doesn't slip and call him daddy in front of his mother. LoL!
Oh no. That's going to be an awkward convo. I hope Bella doesn't slip and call him daddy in front of his mother. LoL!
7/6/2023 c30 Donna J Dowling
Oh ho, give it to her Edward. What a vapid woman Renee is. Thinking she was going to get it all! I think Bella better stay with Rose since all this went down. Good grief, he's too close to winning against the witch. And now I believe I know what that commotion is happening at the bar now, lol. thanx so much ;o)
Oh ho, give it to her Edward. What a vapid woman Renee is. Thinking she was going to get it all! I think Bella better stay with Rose since all this went down. Good grief, he's too close to winning against the witch. And now I believe I know what that commotion is happening at the bar now, lol. thanx so much ;o)
7/6/2023 c29 Donna J Dowling
I wondered where Emmett was, lol, now I know. He's a good guy it seems. Can't wait to find out what all the commotion is. thanx ;o)
I wondered where Emmett was, lol, now I know. He's a good guy it seems. Can't wait to find out what all the commotion is. thanx ;o)