for The Good Life (WC - Arcane)8/5/2023 c7 Gilgamesh50
It would be smart if he changed his organs (that are in the bag) with someone else organs
Cz even though they work together Robin and him its still risky
It would be smart if he changed his organs (that are in the bag) with someone else organs
Cz even though they work together Robin and him its still risky
18/4/2023 c12 IshuDivan
Looks like for some reason my review didn't show up here, so I'm going to retry sending it. Hopefully this one comes through. It also has some grammar fixes, so that's a plus.
So, someone sent the video with Annie and Deep to Cinder, and that's how she got the blackmail material. Three things: first, it was sent to Cinder basically instantly after the deed was done, and second, it was sent by someone pretending to be Law. Which leaves us two direct clues: the sender both has access to the security of Seven HQ (where the thing was recorded), (either enough to infiltrate and place a camera where it wasn't supposed to be, or to straight up hack the already existing camera and get the footage from it. I'm inclined to think it's the second, but the first is likely because the second would mean that Deep made Annie suck him off in a room for the entirety of security team to see and record knowing full well there is a security camera. To be fair, he is an idiot, so I still consider this option, but the other one, where camera wasn't supposed to be here and placed by the culprit, is more likely) and knows about Cinder and Law's relationship.
Finally, the last thing which we can only speculate on, is the motive for all this. Whoever it is who sent the video, they had something to gain from Cinder obtaining that video and thinking it was sent by Law. If you think about it, they would achieve basically same results if they just sent the video to Cinder anonymously, so even if they had other goals they still wanted Cinder to think Law sent it, which pretty much confirms that whoever it was they wanted Cinder to find more value in Law. Basically, unless they are playing some 5D chess there it means they are on Law's side.
So, it was someone with access to Vought security system (either legitimate or by infiltration), who knows about Law and Cinder's relationship and who wants Law's plans to work out. And all that without telling Law directly what they did for him.
Which limits the list of suspects to either Robin or Yoruichi. I am yet to see how you are going to write Yoruichi's character, but I would say blackmailing and scheming like that isn't her style. Especially given what job she took according to the latest chapter, the one about beating up people. Which leaves only Robin as the prime suspect.
I guess it could also be some third party, but they would have to be basically omnipotent to know and be able to do so much without being close to any main characters, and that I can't predict, selavi
Looks like for some reason my review didn't show up here, so I'm going to retry sending it. Hopefully this one comes through. It also has some grammar fixes, so that's a plus.
So, someone sent the video with Annie and Deep to Cinder, and that's how she got the blackmail material. Three things: first, it was sent to Cinder basically instantly after the deed was done, and second, it was sent by someone pretending to be Law. Which leaves us two direct clues: the sender both has access to the security of Seven HQ (where the thing was recorded), (either enough to infiltrate and place a camera where it wasn't supposed to be, or to straight up hack the already existing camera and get the footage from it. I'm inclined to think it's the second, but the first is likely because the second would mean that Deep made Annie suck him off in a room for the entirety of security team to see and record knowing full well there is a security camera. To be fair, he is an idiot, so I still consider this option, but the other one, where camera wasn't supposed to be here and placed by the culprit, is more likely) and knows about Cinder and Law's relationship.
Finally, the last thing which we can only speculate on, is the motive for all this. Whoever it is who sent the video, they had something to gain from Cinder obtaining that video and thinking it was sent by Law. If you think about it, they would achieve basically same results if they just sent the video to Cinder anonymously, so even if they had other goals they still wanted Cinder to think Law sent it, which pretty much confirms that whoever it was they wanted Cinder to find more value in Law. Basically, unless they are playing some 5D chess there it means they are on Law's side.
So, it was someone with access to Vought security system (either legitimate or by infiltration), who knows about Law and Cinder's relationship and who wants Law's plans to work out. And all that without telling Law directly what they did for him.
Which limits the list of suspects to either Robin or Yoruichi. I am yet to see how you are going to write Yoruichi's character, but I would say blackmailing and scheming like that isn't her style. Especially given what job she took according to the latest chapter, the one about beating up people. Which leaves only Robin as the prime suspect.
I guess it could also be some third party, but they would have to be basically omnipotent to know and be able to do so much without being close to any main characters, and that I can't predict, selavi
8/4/2023 c12 LyingChicken
Can't tell if Law Is actually a savant criminal and actually a genius or if he's just fanning the flames of him being a "criminal mastermind" and stumbling onto success.
God I hope it's the first one. I get that he doesn't have an actual interest in the criminal underworld and his reasons for conquering it basically boil down to "cuz it sounds cool" but if you're gonna do something that impressive then do it RIGHT.
Can't tell if Law Is actually a savant criminal and actually a genius or if he's just fanning the flames of him being a "criminal mastermind" and stumbling onto success.
God I hope it's the first one. I get that he doesn't have an actual interest in the criminal underworld and his reasons for conquering it basically boil down to "cuz it sounds cool" but if you're gonna do something that impressive then do it RIGHT.
7/28/2023 c11 Guest
Great chapter! Glad you came back this week
Great chapter! Glad you came back this week