for The Honored One5/10 c12 Guest
And we have the line!
And we have the line!
5/10 c1 Guest
Not sure if you reached a point of pairs yet, but of his age group - be fine with Tenten (rarer/uncommon, feisty tomboy that wants to be the strongest kunoichi, interested in fuinjutsu [Uzumaki Specialty and one of his father's best skills], willing to do more than just learn weapons [especially if he can help her get the control for medical usage like her idol], trains hard under Gai even if she isn't a taijutsu focus like her team,etc). His age outside of the village? Temari.
Not sure if you reached a point of pairs yet, but of his age group - be fine with Tenten (rarer/uncommon, feisty tomboy that wants to be the strongest kunoichi, interested in fuinjutsu [Uzumaki Specialty and one of his father's best skills], willing to do more than just learn weapons [especially if he can help her get the control for medical usage like her idol], trains hard under Gai even if she isn't a taijutsu focus like her team,etc). His age outside of the village? Temari.
4/30 c12 SgtSmelly
Wow. I was a little skeptical because of the story’s premise, but you really incorporated the aspects of JJK perfectly into the Narutoverse. I can’t wait to see the next updates.
Wow. I was a little skeptical because of the story’s premise, but you really incorporated the aspects of JJK perfectly into the Narutoverse. I can’t wait to see the next updates.
4/24 c12 Akamigaku
Peak
Peak
4/18 c12 Guest
This story is so good please continue to update
This story is so good please continue to update
4/8 c12 modeeb
If you let Naruto learn sage mode he can use the energy to sense where he can teleport or something like he can use it even if he doesn’t see it and if you mange to mix the sage energy with infinite it would be sick can be used as defense and atk as it can you the force you know when Naruto punched one of the pain clones and he missed but it still hit or if you let Naruto see someone or he learns how summoning jutsu works he can maybe make something so people can teleport him to them self as aid or something as I am writing this it’s similar to the harashin but he can’t teleport to them only when they do it. And overall sage mode increase status by a lot and if masters it it would insane like in boruto Naruto sage mode is equal or stronger on KCM1 and maybe he can use natural energy to expand his domain. And i am sorry about the grammar i am not bothered to fix anything as it’s 4 am. Also i am loving this fic, can’t wait for the next chapter.
If you let Naruto learn sage mode he can use the energy to sense where he can teleport or something like he can use it even if he doesn’t see it and if you mange to mix the sage energy with infinite it would be sick can be used as defense and atk as it can you the force you know when Naruto punched one of the pain clones and he missed but it still hit or if you let Naruto see someone or he learns how summoning jutsu works he can maybe make something so people can teleport him to them self as aid or something as I am writing this it’s similar to the harashin but he can’t teleport to them only when they do it. And overall sage mode increase status by a lot and if masters it it would insane like in boruto Naruto sage mode is equal or stronger on KCM1 and maybe he can use natural energy to expand his domain. And i am sorry about the grammar i am not bothered to fix anything as it’s 4 am. Also i am loving this fic, can’t wait for the next chapter.
3/30 c1 Guest
I like the story don’t get me wrong but I feel it would’ve been much better for him to be either an Oc or have been that way from birth. The seal sealing him away bit is convoluted it just seems that the author wanted to have him be an underdog and underestimated by people.
I like the story don’t get me wrong but I feel it would’ve been much better for him to be either an Oc or have been that way from birth. The seal sealing him away bit is convoluted it just seems that the author wanted to have him be an underdog and underestimated by people.
3/18 c11 Delirious
Why does ch.12 keep reappearing and disappearing
Why does ch.12 keep reappearing and disappearing
3/15 c12 KaratachiYagura
Nah, impresionante capítulo, no puedo esperar a leer el siguiente.
Have a nice day
Nah, impresionante capítulo, no puedo esperar a leer el siguiente.
Have a nice day