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5/22/2023 c3 4freedomringer
Now that "Brotherhood that Transcends All" was a unique way that I've yet to see. Also I love your AN they're funny and informative. That quick look at the alt universe makes me wonder if you have another story about Minato and Rin and I want to read it.
5/22/2023 c2 freedomringer
Another great chapter. And I'm happy you didn't do what some authors on here do and go full misery porn with it. You kept only the necessary info and gave enough detail to ensure the point was put across
5/21/2023 c1 freedomringer
Allies share techniques and the only reason we haven't seen it in canon show is because Konoha had no real allies and their only ally had attacked them during the Chūnin Exams. But we can know of when Konoha had a true ally to share techniques with since the Whirlpool village shared Uzumaki clan techniques for barriers. So we know it's happened before. That said, this chapter is amazing and I want more
5/21/2023 c7 Beastyd22
Awesome chapter man,but damn you and your cliffhanger LMAO. Anyway please update again soon as you possibly can thanks man and the sooner the better would be appreciated thanks.
5/21/2023 c7 ghust95
God damn, putting kurama into the sword first time I read that just awsome and cant wait for the next one and the figths
5/21/2023 c7 NarutoManiac2400
If never let them know your next move was a story… so many surprises in this story it’s crazy… I love it
5/16/2023 c6 Joseph
I hope sasuke gets in trouble for launching a fireball at Naruto.
5/17/2023 c1 Pixie Duck
Naruto bowing, falling to his knree, calling Mei a queen.

What the fuck is this cringy shit?

Have you ever read a single chapter of the manga? because Naruto would never act like this
5/16/2023 c6 thor94
orochimaru messed the wrong person
5/16/2023 c6 Beastyd22
Awesome chapter man keep it up and I will see you next time you update thanks. P. story is getting really good the more I read.
5/16/2023 c6 Pinumbit Coffee
Expected as much. Nothing short of Itachi's level would beat Orochimaru. And if we're talking of power scaling, Naruto only achieved such power when he got sage mode.
5/16/2023 c6 marquis.shax
Kisame alone would destroy Pedomaru before he slithers off with his tail between his legs but add in Mei and he's going to take an absolutely massive fucking beat down to the point he might just need to have his butt buddy KabuHO revive him using the curse mark lol
5/16/2023 c6 jose.demolle
wtf this fic is absolutely insane and gooood
5/15/2023 c5 marquis.shax
well I think Pedomaru is going to be the one taking it from behind this time if he doesn't run away the minute he learns from his young lover Kabuto that Itachi is back in the village as he can't beat Itachi in a fight and there's no way in hell he'd beat Kisame since anything he does to Kisame would just be healed by Samehada as soon as it absorbs some of Pedo's chakra and of course Mei would probably just melt Pedo lol
5/14/2023 c5 Beastyd22
Awesome chapter man, I can't wait to see what happens next so please update again soon as you possibly can thanks man.
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