for Mist and Maelstroms8/29/2023 c18 
1demonboy121986
Another awesome chapter, read n review people. can't wait for the next.
1demonboy121986Another awesome chapter, read n review people. can't wait for the next.
8/28/2023 c13 demonboy121986
Ya know..
when ya first read this and go...
shit... that's wtf... that's kinda holy shit...
do not worry its not as bad as you think.
look underneath the underneath.
Ya know..
when ya first read this and go...
shit... that's wtf... that's kinda holy shit...
do not worry its not as bad as you think.
look underneath the underneath.
8/28/2023 c12 demonboy121986
Honestly, would have looked at the 3 holding em back turned to Duckett and said your on your own then go to the hokage and asked if I could just retire, civilian life would be much better for his mental health...
Honestly, would have looked at the 3 holding em back turned to Duckett and said your on your own then go to the hokage and asked if I could just retire, civilian life would be much better for his mental health...
8/28/2023 c7 demonboy121986
Ok... ya had me damn well intrigued but now I want to see how bad ass the damn sword will be alone. No spoilers read to damn well find out what freaking sword I mean. Did he make it, find it, buy it. read to find out and as always read n review people.
Ok... ya had me damn well intrigued but now I want to see how bad ass the damn sword will be alone. No spoilers read to damn well find out what freaking sword I mean. Did he make it, find it, buy it. read to find out and as always read n review people.
8/28/2023 c6 demonboy121986
1... 2... Samehada coming for you... 3... 4... Mei's knocking with a glob 5... 6... don't shit a brick 7... 8... to fucking late 9... 10... best to run again.
1... 2... Samehada coming for you... 3... 4... Mei's knocking with a glob 5... 6... don't shit a brick 7... 8... to fucking late 9... 10... best to run again.
8/28/2023 c4 demonboy121986
...Pretty sure just by one person giving an ounce of a fuck from meeting him Naruto could roast well.. drown copy cats ass let alone the exams. muwahahahaha ... on to the exaims.
...Pretty sure just by one person giving an ounce of a fuck from meeting him Naruto could roast well.. drown copy cats ass let alone the exams. muwahahahaha ... on to the exaims.
8/28/2023 c3 demonboy121986
Awesome chapter, till next time on dragon ba... *cough cough* Mist and Maelstorms
Awesome chapter, till next time on dragon ba... *cough cough* Mist and Maelstorms
8/28/2023 c1 demonboy121986
Ok... normally I don't do this but for fucks sake... this foreshadowing is nuts in such an awesome way. Now I will be the first to say, I ramble, I rant and don't give much care if what I say is like or not. it's a review, it's an opinion, sometimes it's just a reader getting so hooked into a story it gets to be like they are almost in it themselves, or wish they are. That last one... is the one I always find the most special and damn but wouldn't mind stepping into this Narutos shoes. And yes I am being vague for a reason because SPOILERS ...no no no. read an review everyone, even if you end up leaving becuase of such an such, eh ... review, rant, whatevs still helps the writer even if they go "Ass" an move on, still adds 1 more review to the search option, maybe moving it up just enough for more to notice.
Ok... normally I don't do this but for fucks sake... this foreshadowing is nuts in such an awesome way. Now I will be the first to say, I ramble, I rant and don't give much care if what I say is like or not. it's a review, it's an opinion, sometimes it's just a reader getting so hooked into a story it gets to be like they are almost in it themselves, or wish they are. That last one... is the one I always find the most special and damn but wouldn't mind stepping into this Narutos shoes. And yes I am being vague for a reason because SPOILERS ...no no no. read an review everyone, even if you end up leaving becuase of such an such, eh ... review, rant, whatevs still helps the writer even if they go "Ass" an move on, still adds 1 more review to the search option, maybe moving it up just enough for more to notice.
8/23/2023 c18 Guest
Awesome chapter man keep it up and I'll see ya next time you update and Please update again soon as you possibly can thanks.
Awesome chapter man keep it up and I'll see ya next time you update and Please update again soon as you possibly can thanks.
8/20/2023 c18 TigrezzTail
Heh, so I'm guessing the naruto 'charm' will have it's work cut out for it with many in kiri. But that's the beauty of it. It should make transitioning in Kiri go smoother with Naruto at work.
Heh, so I'm guessing the naruto 'charm' will have it's work cut out for it with many in kiri. But that's the beauty of it. It should make transitioning in Kiri go smoother with Naruto at work.
8/13/2023 c17 Guest
Awesome chapter man keep it up and update again soon as you possibly can thanks.
Awesome chapter man keep it up and update again soon as you possibly can thanks.