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1/25 c11 Mega L0randto
Oh dear. L-Laura! Eri's on a dark path!
1/25 c11 Temparo
First of all I like how this story is developing. Secondly, are turning Eri into the Scarlet Witch!?
1/25 c11 Sakumon16
Is Eri okay?
1/25 c11 4Monster King
Awesome work please continue the story it's amazing
11/27/2024 c10 StarWanderer's Writing
Great Story so far, I am very interested to see how the first days of UA are going to change because some students know each other before hand.

I can just see Laura absolutely hating Minoru Mineta especially if he finds out that midnight is her mum, I feel like his life expectancy will be measured in single digits.

As a side note, for Laura's Hero costume, I think you should use X-Men Evolution's design for her first suit (a dull black leather suit). If you choose to change it, I would suggest that you give her a suit like Logan's original suit (Yellow and blue). I would also have Laura not bother with a mask early on because she doesn't care about other people. With this idea in mind you could have her donning the mask be a key point in her character arc and she may choose to don it to honor her now dead father. (Does she know that Eri killed her, at this point, I'll assume so).

Finally, in the case for Laura and Eri's mother, a suggestion I would do is have her realize her mistake and try and get them back from Chisaki. At the time Chisaki, was performing experiments on the sisters with no oversite so he would have her become a pile of ash (reference to chapter 10 nightmare) in order to keep his prized test subjects, not having any consequences at the time.

All in all, speculation aside, I will look forward for the next chapter, which is hopefully soon.
11/25/2024 c1 ZoyeZest
Hey there! I hope you're doing great!

I just finished reading your story Magic in My Bones, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share!

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11/19/2024 c10 1Ultimatrix bearer
Ok so she's a MHA Native. Good to know.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!
11/19/2024 c10 6Mega Lorandto
Damn. Fucking hells. y.
11/18/2024 c10 Sakumon16
That started out as a flashback (which answers three of the questions I’ve had about this, that being whether Eri and Laura are blood related, if Laura’s claws, super-senses, strength, and healing factor are a Quirk, and if Laura is related to Wolverine or if she’s his clone like in canon), that went horrifically terrifying. Poor Laura and Eri have had a bad life. Oh well. At the very least, they’ve got Nemuri and Izuku. I hope the next chapter is lighter.
11/18/2024 c10 4Monster King
Your doing amazing work please continue the story it's incredible
11/3/2024 c7 guest
Thank you for continuing this. God bless you have a great day and night
10/31/2024 c9 Sakumon16
I have several things to say. One, go Hagakure! Two, Bakugo still hasn’t learned his lesson. Three, I despise those little brats who bully Eri. And four, Osore has the most bananas Quirk I’ve ever heard of.
10/30/2024 c8 Sakumon16
Don’t think I didn’t notice the Daredevil reference. Also, well done Masaru. Katsuki really needed to hear this.
10/30/2024 c7 Sakumon16
Bakugo should be barred from U/
10/30/2024 c7 Sakumon16
That absolutely does it. If thatprincipal doesn’t die soon, I’m going to reach into this story and murder everyone in Aldera .
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