10/29 c75 cassnova5424
Shits about to go down like life chugged a cup of laxatives. Im assuming [Broadcast] doesnt know/care how poorly this will go for the jacktster (least i hope thats the case...)
Shits about to go down like life chugged a cup of laxatives. Im assuming [Broadcast] doesnt know/care how poorly this will go for the jacktster (least i hope thats the case...)
10/21 c75 Grimnosh
Well Jack's back. ARe we in the ending stretch yet?
Side note: a Faraday Cage wouldn't stop someone from recording, all it does is stops people from making cell phone calls and connecting wirelessly to the internet. So they could record Ashley and upload it later.
(laughing) Missy's revenge has an unexpected target.
And what happens at Kitsu's home will be game changing for the S9. She will wipe them out if her family is hurt.
Well Jack's back. ARe we in the ending stretch yet?
Side note: a Faraday Cage wouldn't stop someone from recording, all it does is stops people from making cell phone calls and connecting wirelessly to the internet. So they could record Ashley and upload it later.
(laughing) Missy's revenge has an unexpected target.
And what happens at Kitsu's home will be game changing for the S9. She will wipe them out if her family is hurt.
10/21 c5 Guest
The fic’s good so far, but I think you added an extra zero the date at the start of the chapter
The fic’s good so far, but I think you added an extra zero the date at the start of the chapter
10/21 c75 dieselfuel
well things are about to get VERY interesting
well things are about to get VERY interesting
10/19 c75 BlitizSlash
Ah. And the reason for the countdown becomes evident. Well the next chapters are going to be interesting
Ah. And the reason for the countdown becomes evident. Well the next chapters are going to be interesting
10/19 c75 bradlysteak
This is my favorite fanfic of all time! Can wait for Kitsu to get her revenge. Also the dildo was hilarious. I wonder what Kitsu's feelings are towards the nine? Because I remeber her being a victim was a big thing early on then it was just sort of forgotten about. Then later on an internal monolog about how she didn't care. I may just be forgetting some things so can you clarify.
Also, question for Kitsu: What are your thoughts on having more tails? Would more floof beworth more maintenance?
This is my favorite fanfic of all time! Can wait for Kitsu to get her revenge. Also the dildo was hilarious. I wonder what Kitsu's feelings are towards the nine? Because I remeber her being a victim was a big thing early on then it was just sort of forgotten about. Then later on an internal monolog about how she didn't care. I may just be forgetting some things so can you clarify.
Also, question for Kitsu: What are your thoughts on having more tails? Would more floof beworth more maintenance?
10/19 c75 RadChaos897
Batten down the hatches, lock all doors and windows, hide your spouses and children…
Because the Slaughterhouse 9 has arrived!
Let the Games Begin!
Man, next chapter is gonna be chaotic as hell and I can’t wait to read it! I’m especially interested in to see the interactions between the S9 and the various characters in Brockton Bay currently. Especially certain characters like Dean and Cherish (if she’s around) since those two never met in canon and I’d like to see how two different emotion controllers with drastically different views on their powers see each other. Not to mention the potential of new S9 recruits and S9 Targets, Scarecrow and Carnage make perfect S9 members and The Siberian and Mannequin are going to have a bloody good time slaughtering and killing the many parahumans and Tinkers in the city. By the way, are the members of the S9 the same as in canon (with the exception of their newly acquired recruits) or are some of them different due to the changes made to the setting? I can definitely think of some potential S9 members not from Worm, but the S9 is already deadly enough as is, don’t wanna go too overkill, ya know?
Alright, enough yammering about the fatal potentials and deadly possibilities of the S9.
Kitsu and Missy unknowingly teaming up to prank Ashely was the chef’s kiss of the chapter. I’m sure this will backfire later in the future, but for now it’s all shits and giggles. The fact that Missy was the one to place the “toy” in the locker that fell on Kitsu’s head was absolute comedy gold, the mental image of an unsuspecting Kitsu playing the “innocent and helpful fox girl” role to throw suspicion off her only for a pink dildo to smack her on the head had me literally rolling with laughter. My sides still hurt from laughing so hard. The only thing that could have made that situation even funnier was if it had turned on when it fell and began vibrating toward Kitsu like it was chasing her. Now that would have been hilarity platinum!
Hmm… now that I think about it, since that dildo belonged to Missy’s mom and that same dildo had smacked Kitsu on the head: then in a weird, twisted way that means Missy’s mom had unintentionally flirted with Kitsu again. Is it weird? Yes. Am I weird for doing the mental gymnastics to get to that conclusion? Definitely. Does that weird, twisted logic make Kitsu getting smacked with a dildo even more hilarious? Absolutely.
Aw man, The Oddities really can’t catch a break at all, can they? Jason is either dead or a captive of the S9, which is arguably an even worse fate than death, and Circe unalives herself so her friends wouldn’t have to work for Scarecrow anymore, only for Jack Slash to suddenly show up. I just hope Jack doesn’t bring Circe’s body back to Riley so she can create another one of her parahuman experiments like Hackjob or Murder Rat. Maybe her brain, specifically her Corona Pollentia and Gemma, were damaged enough to prevent Riley from operating on her, fingers crossed. As for the remaining members of the Oddities? I just hope they’re good at running from a roaming band of psychopathic murder hobos, because if not… well, let’s just say death is the best case scenario.
Alright, that’s all for today. Until next time… wait, crap I had something for this.
…
Um… Uh….something, something… crack is whack!
There, end of review quote achieved!
RadChaos897, out!
Batten down the hatches, lock all doors and windows, hide your spouses and children…
Because the Slaughterhouse 9 has arrived!
Let the Games Begin!
Man, next chapter is gonna be chaotic as hell and I can’t wait to read it! I’m especially interested in to see the interactions between the S9 and the various characters in Brockton Bay currently. Especially certain characters like Dean and Cherish (if she’s around) since those two never met in canon and I’d like to see how two different emotion controllers with drastically different views on their powers see each other. Not to mention the potential of new S9 recruits and S9 Targets, Scarecrow and Carnage make perfect S9 members and The Siberian and Mannequin are going to have a bloody good time slaughtering and killing the many parahumans and Tinkers in the city. By the way, are the members of the S9 the same as in canon (with the exception of their newly acquired recruits) or are some of them different due to the changes made to the setting? I can definitely think of some potential S9 members not from Worm, but the S9 is already deadly enough as is, don’t wanna go too overkill, ya know?
Alright, enough yammering about the fatal potentials and deadly possibilities of the S9.
Kitsu and Missy unknowingly teaming up to prank Ashely was the chef’s kiss of the chapter. I’m sure this will backfire later in the future, but for now it’s all shits and giggles. The fact that Missy was the one to place the “toy” in the locker that fell on Kitsu’s head was absolute comedy gold, the mental image of an unsuspecting Kitsu playing the “innocent and helpful fox girl” role to throw suspicion off her only for a pink dildo to smack her on the head had me literally rolling with laughter. My sides still hurt from laughing so hard. The only thing that could have made that situation even funnier was if it had turned on when it fell and began vibrating toward Kitsu like it was chasing her. Now that would have been hilarity platinum!
Hmm… now that I think about it, since that dildo belonged to Missy’s mom and that same dildo had smacked Kitsu on the head: then in a weird, twisted way that means Missy’s mom had unintentionally flirted with Kitsu again. Is it weird? Yes. Am I weird for doing the mental gymnastics to get to that conclusion? Definitely. Does that weird, twisted logic make Kitsu getting smacked with a dildo even more hilarious? Absolutely.
Aw man, The Oddities really can’t catch a break at all, can they? Jason is either dead or a captive of the S9, which is arguably an even worse fate than death, and Circe unalives herself so her friends wouldn’t have to work for Scarecrow anymore, only for Jack Slash to suddenly show up. I just hope Jack doesn’t bring Circe’s body back to Riley so she can create another one of her parahuman experiments like Hackjob or Murder Rat. Maybe her brain, specifically her Corona Pollentia and Gemma, were damaged enough to prevent Riley from operating on her, fingers crossed. As for the remaining members of the Oddities? I just hope they’re good at running from a roaming band of psychopathic murder hobos, because if not… well, let’s just say death is the best case scenario.
Alright, that’s all for today. Until next time… wait, crap I had something for this.
…
Um… Uh….something, something… crack is whack!
There, end of review quote achieved!
RadChaos897, out!
10/19 c75 1GideonBlackthorn
oh, shit ... S9. this is gonna get messy, fast. and poor missy, caught up in this.
oh, shit ... S9. this is gonna get messy, fast. and poor missy, caught up in this.
10/19 c75 mangouschase
finally, the kind of unobtrusive gay character. the gay character that does not base all their personality nor story around "oh i'm gay". thank you for this.
finally, the kind of unobtrusive gay character. the gay character that does not base all their personality nor story around "oh i'm gay". thank you for this.
10/19 c75 4Lorra Dru Zod
I would love to see a prototype Kitsu. I hope nothing bad happens to her family now that the Nine is in the bay
I would love to see a prototype Kitsu. I hope nothing bad happens to her family now that the Nine is in the bay
10/19 c75 mangouschase
sorry, too many chapters on diff stories w titles like part 1 or part 2 so i forgor
sorry, too many chapters on diff stories w titles like part 1 or part 2 so i forgor