for Pilgrimage6/8 c1 ReflectiveReader
The hype buildup at the beginning was awesome, from the description of the Pilgrimage to the people involved! It made the cut to Tucker hilarious! Why do I know which games Tucker was playing? I was thinking Indiana Jones until he corrected Jazz. I like the sounds of this adventure already, and am amused that they all know Danny so well it's like he and his puns are haunting them without trying. the Phantoms really would be insufferable if they returned so quickly.
The hype buildup at the beginning was awesome, from the description of the Pilgrimage to the people involved! It made the cut to Tucker hilarious! Why do I know which games Tucker was playing? I was thinking Indiana Jones until he corrected Jazz. I like the sounds of this adventure already, and am amused that they all know Danny so well it's like he and his puns are haunting them without trying. the Phantoms really would be insufferable if they returned so quickly.
6/6 c1 
12Cyan Quartz
I thought President Chan was my favorite OC of yours, but the new character in this story might take the cake. They don't even have a name! Very polite too, I love them.
12Cyan QuartzI thought President Chan was my favorite OC of yours, but the new character in this story might take the cake. They don't even have a name! Very polite too, I love them.
6/3 c1 17
Yesssssss! MY FAVORITE HAS RETURNED! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
Yesssssss! MY FAVORITE HAS RETURNED! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!