6/29 c66 lileep07
This was an amazing story. I really enjoyed it. I am glad it was “completedbefore i found it because the waiting would have kilked me.
This was an amazing story. I really enjoyed it. I am glad it was “completedbefore i found it because the waiting would have kilked me.
6/24 c66 lileep07
Loved this. I am kind of glad i discovered this website and the story in 2024. It means I didn’t have to wait days and weeks for the next installment and was able to binge it in just a few days. I very much enjoyed reading the story and seeing where it would go. Thank you for writing.
Loved this. I am kind of glad i discovered this website and the story in 2024. It means I didn’t have to wait days and weeks for the next installment and was able to binge it in just a few days. I very much enjoyed reading the story and seeing where it would go. Thank you for writing.
5/1 c24 Guest
What an odd driving plan. That sounds like the most exhausting way to cross-country... not to mention inefficient. 40 hours to get to Chicago from Massachusetts?! Are they going 10 mph the whole way?
Mystery has me intrigued, for sure. Some of these extra details, including the preaching, take me out of the story, but thankfully the mystery hooks drag me right back in.
What an odd driving plan. That sounds like the most exhausting way to cross-country... not to mention inefficient. 40 hours to get to Chicago from Massachusetts?! Are they going 10 mph the whole way?
Mystery has me intrigued, for sure. Some of these extra details, including the preaching, take me out of the story, but thankfully the mystery hooks drag me right back in.
12/1/2023 c66 James24
I have read many stories on this site. I, myself, have thought how the hardy boys and Nancy drew could work together. I'm really happy to find a fan story that is well written, (better wrote than a Clive Cussler, or Tom Clancy novel). To me it was the newest book in the series. I encourage you to continue on, with a break of course. Again best story I have read ever!
I have read many stories on this site. I, myself, have thought how the hardy boys and Nancy drew could work together. I'm really happy to find a fan story that is well written, (better wrote than a Clive Cussler, or Tom Clancy novel). To me it was the newest book in the series. I encourage you to continue on, with a break of course. Again best story I have read ever!
10/28/2023 c66 Erin Mansfield
This story is amazing, well done! I thoroughly enjoyed it and I even got some food for thought as well. But you you can't read a good story without having some of that, right? I love reading survival stories and this one is no different, if not better because the hardy boys are in the mix! I can't wait to see what else you'll write and thank you for the inspiration on writing my own hardy boys fanfiction! But most importantly; thank you for finishing this story!
This story is amazing, well done! I thoroughly enjoyed it and I even got some food for thought as well. But you you can't read a good story without having some of that, right? I love reading survival stories and this one is no different, if not better because the hardy boys are in the mix! I can't wait to see what else you'll write and thank you for the inspiration on writing my own hardy boys fanfiction! But most importantly; thank you for finishing this story!
10/18/2023 c66 3188Keys
How nice of you to post the last chapter on my birthday! :) I like that everything ended happy but they still have things to work though. A brief follow-up story would be nice...hint hint!
I'm really impressed with your ability to write such a long story, to keep everything straight, and to present it in a way that the reader can keep it straight, too. Thank you so much for writing and posting this- I have truly enjoyed it.
How nice of you to post the last chapter on my birthday! :) I like that everything ended happy but they still have things to work though. A brief follow-up story would be nice...hint hint!
I'm really impressed with your ability to write such a long story, to keep everything straight, and to present it in a way that the reader can keep it straight, too. Thank you so much for writing and posting this- I have truly enjoyed it.
10/18/2023 c66 27Drumboy100
Congrats on another completed story. I admire that you pulled no punches with this one, exploring mistakes and regret and character flaws and feeling helpless and the nature of hope. Frank hit the nail on the head, for next time (sorry, boys, you get kidnapped a lot!) everybody should forget about debating their opinions and all focus on catching the gang that was responsible. Thanks for sharing.
Congrats on another completed story. I admire that you pulled no punches with this one, exploring mistakes and regret and character flaws and feeling helpless and the nature of hope. Frank hit the nail on the head, for next time (sorry, boys, you get kidnapped a lot!) everybody should forget about debating their opinions and all focus on catching the gang that was responsible. Thanks for sharing.
10/17/2023 c66 t4swp
it was an awesome story. I have been thinking of trying to write one but I am afraid of it being stupid.
it was an awesome story. I have been thinking of trying to write one but I am afraid of it being stupid.
10/17/2023 c66 8ErinJordan
Awesome story looking forward to anymore stories if or when you decide to write one. thanks again God bless
Awesome story looking forward to anymore stories if or when you decide to write one. thanks again God bless
10/17/2023 c66 20angelicalkiss
Good ending though I was hoping that we would see Casey again and Frank beat him up for what he did to Callie. Oh, well. Wishful thinking. It was a great journey with you and I wish you nothing but the best as you take your much needed break! Have fun and until next time!
Good ending though I was hoping that we would see Casey again and Frank beat him up for what he did to Callie. Oh, well. Wishful thinking. It was a great journey with you and I wish you nothing but the best as you take your much needed break! Have fun and until next time!
10/17/2023 c66 Candylou
This is a fantastic story. It definitely will take frank, Joe, and all the others time to heal and go through their emotions it was good Brock survived so frank wouldn't be dealing with the issue of killing someone. I hope you enjoy your life and will be looking forward to if you ever post another story may the Lord bless and protect you and yours
This is a fantastic story. It definitely will take frank, Joe, and all the others time to heal and go through their emotions it was good Brock survived so frank wouldn't be dealing with the issue of killing someone. I hope you enjoy your life and will be looking forward to if you ever post another story may the Lord bless and protect you and yours
10/17/2023 c66 9MamaStreet
I love bittersweet moments too. That moment of camaraderie between Joe and Iola made me tear up. And it does take time to heal from traumatic events, I think it was wise of you not to force a sugary happy ending. Thank you for sharing your story!
I love bittersweet moments too. That moment of camaraderie between Joe and Iola made me tear up. And it does take time to heal from traumatic events, I think it was wise of you not to force a sugary happy ending. Thank you for sharing your story!