for Stars of Entertainment9/25/2023 c7 Guest
woah this is good
woah this is good
9/17/2023 c5 
7BoombaTheSaint
Let me get this straight, this guy can fabricate legal documents, create solid clones, further customise those clones into adults, earn millions, be able to do everything that an adult can so (albeit by proxy). But for some unfathomable reason, he just can’t adopt himself, buy an estate, and carry on with his life and live out his dreams?
Why? I just don’t understand the blatant foolery forced upon this story for the sake of plot. This is especially so since the guy is a monster genius with all those essences in his pocket. He basically has all the solutions to his problems…hell, he doesn’t even have problems. If he cares so much about Ai he could just adopt her and dispose of her abusive mother.
If I have to be honest, your Essence basically voided the tension and drama within this story, and if something bad happens, it would feel forced and awkward.
7BoombaTheSaintLet me get this straight, this guy can fabricate legal documents, create solid clones, further customise those clones into adults, earn millions, be able to do everything that an adult can so (albeit by proxy). But for some unfathomable reason, he just can’t adopt himself, buy an estate, and carry on with his life and live out his dreams?
Why? I just don’t understand the blatant foolery forced upon this story for the sake of plot. This is especially so since the guy is a monster genius with all those essences in his pocket. He basically has all the solutions to his problems…hell, he doesn’t even have problems. If he cares so much about Ai he could just adopt her and dispose of her abusive mother.
If I have to be honest, your Essence basically voided the tension and drama within this story, and if something bad happens, it would feel forced and awkward.
9/17/2023 c4 BoombaTheSaint
For Christ’s Sake, man, choose a POV point and stick to it. You either do first-person or you do third-person.
For Christ’s Sake, man, choose a POV point and stick to it. You either do first-person or you do third-person.
9/8/2023 c7 Zet4
thanks for the chapter!
man, that would be the dream of the recruiter. godly capability, godly availability, and minimal cost. the only consideration left is, since this is his hobby, this would end if he lost interest. it is nice though, to be voice actor instead of actor in oshi no ko. it opens more options in scenario.
thanks for the chapter!
man, that would be the dream of the recruiter. godly capability, godly availability, and minimal cost. the only consideration left is, since this is his hobby, this would end if he lost interest. it is nice though, to be voice actor instead of actor in oshi no ko. it opens more options in scenario.
7/21/2023 c6 2Jake Grim
I Binged the story, its not bad.
Just have a couple of things to say.
There are only 34 (ha nice)story in the Oshi no Ko section and only 4 of them have MCxAi your first arguments invalid.
A 10 year age gap isn't that weird... A specially, not in the entertainment industry. It is actually hilariously common.
Honestly, the only thing that kept me reading after the (MC x AI is not going to be a thing in this story) part was the... Holy shit 4 goddamnd essences! I mean, ONE would make you Invincible if used properly, BUT 4 is just OVERKILL of the highest magnitude and I wanted to see where that would go...
No wear, it went no wear.
You split your attention between too many powers. it made it boring especially in a world like this, you should have hyper focused on one power and stuck to it, like the essence of the music.
You could have written in entire plot about him becoming a world class talent in the entertainment industry sticking to the theme of the OG world somewhat. that would have made for a more interesting story.
2Jake GrimI Binged the story, its not bad.
Just have a couple of things to say.
There are only 34 (ha nice)story in the Oshi no Ko section and only 4 of them have MCxAi your first arguments invalid.
A 10 year age gap isn't that weird... A specially, not in the entertainment industry. It is actually hilariously common.
Honestly, the only thing that kept me reading after the (MC x AI is not going to be a thing in this story) part was the... Holy shit 4 goddamnd essences! I mean, ONE would make you Invincible if used properly, BUT 4 is just OVERKILL of the highest magnitude and I wanted to see where that would go...
No wear, it went no wear.
You split your attention between too many powers. it made it boring especially in a world like this, you should have hyper focused on one power and stuck to it, like the essence of the music.
You could have written in entire plot about him becoming a world class talent in the entertainment industry sticking to the theme of the OG world somewhat. that would have made for a more interesting story.
7/14/2023 c6 ReignHopeless
Ay yo I really hope no Kamiki bs gonna happen. The last line is really worrying, I have two interpretations. First is Kamiki bs where MC's advice drove Ai to went after Kamiki harder than canon which of course means a greater negative effect on Ai when Kamiki being himself did something shady or second refers to Ai going crazy for MC himself and this is just him kinda lamenting accidentally grooming child Ai to go crazy for him which is unhealthy and stuff.
Loli Ai calling out Onii-chan... That image is scary for my heart
Ay yo I really hope no Kamiki bs gonna happen. The last line is really worrying, I have two interpretations. First is Kamiki bs where MC's advice drove Ai to went after Kamiki harder than canon which of course means a greater negative effect on Ai when Kamiki being himself did something shady or second refers to Ai going crazy for MC himself and this is just him kinda lamenting accidentally grooming child Ai to go crazy for him which is unhealthy and stuff.
Loli Ai calling out Onii-chan... That image is scary for my heart
7/11/2023 c6 SeigZeon
anyone saw this coming but is still very nice anyway :D love the stories of them having fun :3
anyone saw this coming but is still very nice anyway :D love the stories of them having fun :3