for Let There Be Lightning10/8 c2 
13Writey the Writer
The only issues I've had is how dumb his comparisons can be and inspiration versus copycating. His excuse that children shouldn't be fighting is other fictional works, which have different rules and mechanics from the FT world and the regular world. He could have just explained that people are just built differently in FT, but the reasoning he gave was just kinda stupid and shortsighted.
Also, getting inspiration from other franchises is cool but as another reviewer said, I'd rather he innovated as well instead of just being a second-rate rip-off a bunch of other people. Also, the changes between titles are NOT 1:1. S class at six, while PUSHING IT, is possibly plausible (though, still kinda dumb sounding). Wizard saint at 13 though? He might make it power wise, but power is not the only thing that decides the Wizard Saints. Do you really think the Magic Council is going to put a 13 year old as a Wizard Saint, especially from a Guild they are known to dislike at the very least?
13Writey the WriterThe only issues I've had is how dumb his comparisons can be and inspiration versus copycating. His excuse that children shouldn't be fighting is other fictional works, which have different rules and mechanics from the FT world and the regular world. He could have just explained that people are just built differently in FT, but the reasoning he gave was just kinda stupid and shortsighted.
Also, getting inspiration from other franchises is cool but as another reviewer said, I'd rather he innovated as well instead of just being a second-rate rip-off a bunch of other people. Also, the changes between titles are NOT 1:1. S class at six, while PUSHING IT, is possibly plausible (though, still kinda dumb sounding). Wizard saint at 13 though? He might make it power wise, but power is not the only thing that decides the Wizard Saints. Do you really think the Magic Council is going to put a 13 year old as a Wizard Saint, especially from a Guild they are known to dislike at the very least?
8/5 c1 3GhastlyOrnox
Love the story so far, But if the naruto references and comparisons don't end, I think I may just drop it out of sheer cringe.
I like the fact that he takes a bit of reference for his abilities from certain anime characters, but if I wanted to read a copy and paste of a somewhat OC naruto I wouldve gone to a different genere.
Also the constant showboating in the fight with the big dude was kind of unneccessary when you consider the fact that the dude he was fighting was more or less a civillian who hadnt exactly shown any ability to utilize magic, meaning he couldve simply knocked him out and caused way less of a scene/Spectacle for no reason other than to show off.
That fight scene could have more or less been better replaced with story progression through talking with the bartender that wouldve better set up the next chapter.
3GhastlyOrnoxLove the story so far, But if the naruto references and comparisons don't end, I think I may just drop it out of sheer cringe.
I like the fact that he takes a bit of reference for his abilities from certain anime characters, but if I wanted to read a copy and paste of a somewhat OC naruto I wouldve gone to a different genere.
Also the constant showboating in the fight with the big dude was kind of unneccessary when you consider the fact that the dude he was fighting was more or less a civillian who hadnt exactly shown any ability to utilize magic, meaning he couldve simply knocked him out and caused way less of a scene/Spectacle for no reason other than to show off.
That fight scene could have more or less been better replaced with story progression through talking with the bartender that wouldve better set up the next chapter.
7/27 c1 Guest
warning carry on reading! Or you will die,even if you only looked at the word warning!Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person who reads this letter on Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly,by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this site and she will haunt someone else who doesn’t. This isn’t fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next 10 minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.4
warning carry on reading! Or you will die,even if you only looked at the word warning!Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person who reads this letter on Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly,by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this site and she will haunt someone else who doesn’t. This isn’t fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next 10 minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.4
7/21 c3 Guest
Wonder if he could learn How to make magic tools too?
Like maybe a magic converter tool
Laxus could maybe make a speeder bike (it SHOULD fly yes) that converts pedal or solar Power to electrical energy to Power its motor and Laxus?
Or Laxus could straight up Power it all himself
Maybe when he finally has a team he could make or Commission someone to make a truck with the bikes engine design
A big camper trailer
Camping aint all that fun if it could be avoided
Plus Laxus and Co could totally bombard people from above lol
Wonder if he could learn How to make magic tools too?
Like maybe a magic converter tool
Laxus could maybe make a speeder bike (it SHOULD fly yes) that converts pedal or solar Power to electrical energy to Power its motor and Laxus?
Or Laxus could straight up Power it all himself
Maybe when he finally has a team he could make or Commission someone to make a truck with the bikes engine design
A big camper trailer
Camping aint all that fun if it could be avoided
Plus Laxus and Co could totally bombard people from above lol
7/21 c3 Booklovinkitten
lmfao, get reckt. laxus is the biggest sign of the beginning of a possible generation of monsters (ㆁωㆁ).
lmfao, get reckt. laxus is the biggest sign of the beginning of a possible generation of monsters (ㆁωㆁ).
7/16 c3 Guest
Maybe laxus when he’s in his teens could expand the dreyar clan with strong female mages?
Maybe laxus when he’s in his teens could expand the dreyar clan with strong female mages?