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7The PhantomHokage
Great story so far but you messed up the age if Lincoln was only gone 4 years and he was 12 than he’d be 16 not 18. Unless he was aged two years xtra years when sent to the past.
7The PhantomHokageGreat story so far but you messed up the age if Lincoln was only gone 4 years and he was 12 than he’d be 16 not 18. Unless he was aged two years xtra years when sent to the past.
11/8/2024 c8 Skully13
Hehehe, looks like the seeds have been planted hopefully we will see Lori and Lenis friends soon cause I wonder how they will react to teen Lincoln also as an idea if u want to use it u think u can have Lincoln meet one of his deceased friends descendants cause there could be potential romance to bloom
Hehehe, looks like the seeds have been planted hopefully we will see Lori and Lenis friends soon cause I wonder how they will react to teen Lincoln also as an idea if u want to use it u think u can have Lincoln meet one of his deceased friends descendants cause there could be potential romance to bloom
8/29/2024 c8 Tornado man
Great chapter as an idea for a future loud house story u could ask permission from Whimfu1 to do Zap the story where Lincoln is a descendant of Zeus and any girl Lincoln touches they fall in love with him it’s a great story many people would love to see it come back
Great chapter as an idea for a future loud house story u could ask permission from Whimfu1 to do Zap the story where Lincoln is a descendant of Zeus and any girl Lincoln touches they fall in love with him it’s a great story many people would love to see it come back
6/11/2024 c7 Guest
Out of curiosity buddy what are the chances Lincoln will end up meeting one of his comrades descendants cause maybe at least one of them had to have some family remaining
Out of curiosity buddy what are the chances Lincoln will end up meeting one of his comrades descendants cause maybe at least one of them had to have some family remaining
1/21/2024 c7 vanhellsing9000
That was a fantastic but sad chapter I hope that the next one will be Lincoln at home anyhoo really looking forward to seeing what happens next
That was a fantastic but sad chapter I hope that the next one will be Lincoln at home anyhoo really looking forward to seeing what happens next
1/21/2024 c7 yami15147
this confused me until i re read it, but was this supposed to be a flash back after he got home or something else ? I'm just plain confused now
this confused me until i re read it, but was this supposed to be a flash back after he got home or something else ? I'm just plain confused now
1/9/2024 c6 guest99
hey man great to have u back, also a brief experience of what hell looks like is looking great so far, lincoln being in world war 1 for 4 years, family being sad only to rejoyce when lincoln returns and no doubt things are gonna get spicy between with the family and their friends like Carol, Whitney, Teri, Jackie, Mandee, and Becky who is is gonna be pretty interesting since chapter 1 explained becky being in a quite an emotional state but when she along with the others are gonna be in for a jaw dropping surprise when they see him next time. see u in the next chapter buddy but no rush
hey man great to have u back, also a brief experience of what hell looks like is looking great so far, lincoln being in world war 1 for 4 years, family being sad only to rejoyce when lincoln returns and no doubt things are gonna get spicy between with the family and their friends like Carol, Whitney, Teri, Jackie, Mandee, and Becky who is is gonna be pretty interesting since chapter 1 explained becky being in a quite an emotional state but when she along with the others are gonna be in for a jaw dropping surprise when they see him next time. see u in the next chapter buddy but no rush
10/4/2023 c2 Guest
Why did you have Lincoln age and not everyone else or just have him go back to his time period with a shrunken army uniform? I know probably going to say some stupid crap like *Oh If I dIdN,t Do ThAt ThAn HiS mOm WoUlD bE A pEdo” dude you just made Lincoln a pedo!
Why did you have Lincoln age and not everyone else or just have him go back to his time period with a shrunken army uniform? I know probably going to say some stupid crap like *Oh If I dIdN,t Do ThAt ThAn HiS mOm WoUlD bE A pEdo” dude you just made Lincoln a pedo!
8/24/2023 c6 vanhellsing9000
With chapters this fantastic I don't care how long it takes lol just keep them comming
With chapters this fantastic I don't care how long it takes lol just keep them comming
7/20/2023 c1 Pen name Guest has been tak
Hehe good chapter but I think you should change some of the stuff up, for starters nobody ever just charged in the open like that they had shelling to act as support and later in war both sides used a tactic called ‘creeping bombardment’ which completely covered the attackers position form being shot at. Also German attacks were a lot more organized than what was depicted, they would attack during creeping bombardment and the first few squads would be grenadiers whose job it was to blow everything that looked important to high hell, bunkers, machine guns, people, etc. the. The assault would be next whose job it was clear to the trenches fully and unlike popular belief it was rare fot melee combat to start(they didn’t wanna get stabbled) the soldiers more likely than not just fire some shots at the attacking enemy take as much ammo as possible and fall back to the second trench. This was a vary good chapter though and I’m impressed with your story telling I hope you keep updating until completion!
Hehe good chapter but I think you should change some of the stuff up, for starters nobody ever just charged in the open like that they had shelling to act as support and later in war both sides used a tactic called ‘creeping bombardment’ which completely covered the attackers position form being shot at. Also German attacks were a lot more organized than what was depicted, they would attack during creeping bombardment and the first few squads would be grenadiers whose job it was to blow everything that looked important to high hell, bunkers, machine guns, people, etc. the. The assault would be next whose job it was clear to the trenches fully and unlike popular belief it was rare fot melee combat to start(they didn’t wanna get stabbled) the soldiers more likely than not just fire some shots at the attacking enemy take as much ammo as possible and fall back to the second trench. This was a vary good chapter though and I’m impressed with your story telling I hope you keep updating until completion!
7/10/2023 c3 7Canadians Rock
Hell on earth is what it was also why the hell didn't anyone calls the cops to say there's a man walking around with a boltaction rifle dressed up as a WW1 German soldier, I also fine it funny that he was walking like that
7Canadians RockHell on earth is what it was also why the hell didn't anyone calls the cops to say there's a man walking around with a boltaction rifle dressed up as a WW1 German soldier, I also fine it funny that he was walking like that
7/6/2023 c1 Guest
Interesting looking forward to seeing more
Interesting looking forward to seeing more