for Despite it All7/28/2023 c1 Foxxe
Damn. Such potential for a good story...wasted right at the end. You do understand that Kushina being alive changes half the damn story, right? Naruto wouldn't have hyperactivity issues or chakra issues, Naruto wouldn't be hated by anyone, and he wouldn't be as untalented as he was originally. Also, Naruto was friends with all the guys in his class besides Sasuke by like...the second year he was there? Especially Kiba, who he had an intense rivalry with, because they both considered themselves 'Alphas'. So, yeah...great start, absolutely idiotic finish
Damn. Such potential for a good story...wasted right at the end. You do understand that Kushina being alive changes half the damn story, right? Naruto wouldn't have hyperactivity issues or chakra issues, Naruto wouldn't be hated by anyone, and he wouldn't be as untalented as he was originally. Also, Naruto was friends with all the guys in his class besides Sasuke by like...the second year he was there? Especially Kiba, who he had an intense rivalry with, because they both considered themselves 'Alphas'. So, yeah...great start, absolutely idiotic finish
7/25/2023 c7 Reviewer no Kage
An interesting AU premise Author-san. The older age of the protagonists makes for some interesting comparisons with how things played out in canon. I’m definitely intrigued.
The team compositions are also a fresh look at these characters. While a number of stories have featured Naruto and Ino on the same team, this is the only story I can recall that adds Neji to the mix. It’s certainly got elements of the canon Team 7 but also it’s own vibe that I’m currently enjoying.
You’ve got my attention Author-san, let’s see what happens next. Till then - ja ne!
- the Reviewer no Kage
An interesting AU premise Author-san. The older age of the protagonists makes for some interesting comparisons with how things played out in canon. I’m definitely intrigued.
The team compositions are also a fresh look at these characters. While a number of stories have featured Naruto and Ino on the same team, this is the only story I can recall that adds Neji to the mix. It’s certainly got elements of the canon Team 7 but also it’s own vibe that I’m currently enjoying.
You’ve got my attention Author-san, let’s see what happens next. Till then - ja ne!
- the Reviewer no Kage
7/25/2023 c6 
6Blond Lucifer
This is Interesting. So far so good. I want you to make Naruto a bit more smart. or something like that. if you give him a good head on his shoulders, then it's very interesting. And I can understand that being with his mom, he can be brash, but come on man, him being with Kushina should make him a bit more smart and versatile. Anyway, not bad writing at all. Keep it up.
6Blond LuciferThis is Interesting. So far so good. I want you to make Naruto a bit more smart. or something like that. if you give him a good head on his shoulders, then it's very interesting. And I can understand that being with his mom, he can be brash, but come on man, him being with Kushina should make him a bit more smart and versatile. Anyway, not bad writing at all. Keep it up.