for neko harmony11/10/2023 c1 SamonIllmantrim
I do like this a lot. The writing, the characterizations, and the tweaking of the plot, all are really cool.
My only criticism is that occasionally, your point of view seems to be changing between third person and first.
I do like this a lot. The writing, the characterizations, and the tweaking of the plot, all are really cool.
My only criticism is that occasionally, your point of view seems to be changing between third person and first.
7/18/2023 c1 
2A10riddick
Great chapter!
I know you wrote something like this but can’t wait for the next chapter!
2A10riddickGreat chapter!
I know you wrote something like this but can’t wait for the next chapter!