for A Muddy Legacy4/24 c26 Guest
It’s very good read. A bit slow at first but it caught up nicely. Awaiting your sequel.
It’s very good read. A bit slow at first but it caught up nicely. Awaiting your sequel.
4/24 c15 Guest
This is just an advice, my good author but it is prudent to use well time table to show the dates during the storytelling. Like days later, a week ago, it’s been an hour or two since, a month passes by, you know. Anyways, I enjoyed the story and awaits your sequel.
This is just an advice, my good author but it is prudent to use well time table to show the dates during the storytelling. Like days later, a week ago, it’s been an hour or two since, a month passes by, you know. Anyways, I enjoyed the story and awaits your sequel.
3/4 c1 avilasamantha
This story is an engaging and immersive experience that captivates the reader from start to finish. The plot is well-structured, with a perfect balance of tension, emotion, and intrigue. The characters are thoughtfully developed, each bringing depth and relatability to the narrative. /..
This story is an engaging and immersive experience that captivates the reader from start to finish. The plot is well-structured, with a perfect balance of tension, emotion, and intrigue. The characters are thoughtfully developed, each bringing depth and relatability to the narrative. /..
2/20 c24 ClassicXD
What a great chapter! Well done on all the success this fic has had, it's been a great journey and I've loved every chapter. Very much looking forward to the sequel! Also, yes, KCD 2 is incredible. Game of the year? I think so
What a great chapter! Well done on all the success this fic has had, it's been a great journey and I've loved every chapter. Very much looking forward to the sequel! Also, yes, KCD 2 is incredible. Game of the year? I think so
2/20 c25 Maverick123214685
Tristifer should conduct a sacrifice by burning of a criminal ritual over a dragon egg to hatch a dragon for aegon, to maintain the supremacy of the targaryen line that he controls.
Tristifer should conduct a sacrifice by burning of a criminal ritual over a dragon egg to hatch a dragon for aegon, to maintain the supremacy of the targaryen line that he controls.
2/19 c23 KingInTheNorth27
Been a crazy ride. Cant wait for the sequel and im a little mad Rhaella is being a fool and being used by her house’s enemies so easily. But all well makes things interesting.
Been a crazy ride. Cant wait for the sequel and im a little mad Rhaella is being a fool and being used by her house’s enemies so easily. But all well makes things interesting.
2/9 c24 Solomon
Have we ever Heard House Mudd's words?
Have we ever Heard House Mudd's words?
2/9 c24 
4CarpetGang3
So sad that this fic is drawing to a close. Would love a sequel so much. Thanks!
4CarpetGang3So sad that this fic is drawing to a close. Would love a sequel so much. Thanks!
2/8 c24 Maverick123214685
Will we see how tristifer has stabilised aegon’s reign next? Surely he will have the rest of maegor’s passages cleared once he has his own foundations secured? And given he is in a shadow war with varys surely he will attack more overtly soon?
Will we see how tristifer has stabilised aegon’s reign next? Surely he will have the rest of maegor’s passages cleared once he has his own foundations secured? And given he is in a shadow war with varys surely he will attack more overtly soon?
1/27 c23 ClassicXD
Great story and chapter but I think its a real shame to end this fic so soon this has real potential for so much more
Great story and chapter but I think its a real shame to end this fic so soon this has real potential for so much more
1/26 c23 Max20.7
It will be i teresring to see what Robert does in the future.
Your story is really developing well.
It will be i teresring to see what Robert does in the future.
Your story is really developing well.