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3xxXCrimson-Wolf-MoonXxx
Phew I finally caught up to this fic. Sorry for going ghost on ya for a while! Life has been really busy for me, but I've also just been going through some stuff, but I digress.
Again, I love the dream sequences. But I also like that you're bringing his partners in to see what his past was like. Zeref making his appearance in said dream also has me curious, but I'm sure you already have your plans there.
I like that Natsu, even though he's locked up his real feelings, his real emotions. That he's starting to show it to his loved ones. The jokey banter between the characters never gets old at all.
The fact Natsu could smell Gemini off of the fake Ichiya was a nice touch, something I wish anime Natsu would've picked up on. Sometimes I am questioning though who's side E.N.D is on. It almost appears that he's like a double agent. Helping Natsu, or they share mutal feelings of disgust or hatred towards a certain topic.
So far I love how this arc is going and I can't wait to read more from this fic. A Natsu and Jellal rematch is gonna be good I bet.
Keep up the amazing work!
3xxXCrimson-Wolf-MoonXxxPhew I finally caught up to this fic. Sorry for going ghost on ya for a while! Life has been really busy for me, but I've also just been going through some stuff, but I digress.
Again, I love the dream sequences. But I also like that you're bringing his partners in to see what his past was like. Zeref making his appearance in said dream also has me curious, but I'm sure you already have your plans there.
I like that Natsu, even though he's locked up his real feelings, his real emotions. That he's starting to show it to his loved ones. The jokey banter between the characters never gets old at all.
The fact Natsu could smell Gemini off of the fake Ichiya was a nice touch, something I wish anime Natsu would've picked up on. Sometimes I am questioning though who's side E.N.D is on. It almost appears that he's like a double agent. Helping Natsu, or they share mutal feelings of disgust or hatred towards a certain topic.
So far I love how this arc is going and I can't wait to read more from this fic. A Natsu and Jellal rematch is gonna be good I bet.
Keep up the amazing work!
11/19 c55 Guest
Well, hopefully the Oracion Seis are just a little battered.
Well, hopefully the Oracion Seis are just a little battered.
11/14 c54 Discipline01
Absolutely loved the chapter, it perfectly encapsulated the essence of this story.
Absolutely loved the chapter, it perfectly encapsulated the essence of this story.
11/6 c53 naedinefebruary2.0
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Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, Crimson Absolution, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. If you're messaging me on Discord, please also check my Twitter and Instagram, where I've uploaded my work. You can contact me on Discord, Twitter, and Instagram as well.
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11/6 c53 TheOldNick
just finished the last chapter and I must say this is one of best written natsu/END relationships around. it's fairly plausible for someone that old to act like natsu is doing in the story.
I'm just curious about how the dragon/demon duality will be resolved because I think it won't be like in the anime I guess.
cheers, keep going!
just finished the last chapter and I must say this is one of best written natsu/END relationships around. it's fairly plausible for someone that old to act like natsu is doing in the story.
I'm just curious about how the dragon/demon duality will be resolved because I think it won't be like in the anime I guess.
cheers, keep going!
11/4 c49 TheLaughingStalk
i figured Makarov would have met Natsu since he is "acquainted" with Porlyusica. Weren't the two of them comrades? If their meeting took place after her adventures with Makarov, then i guess it makes sense that Makarov and Natsu have not met since that would make Porlyusica about in her 30s or late 20s. If her age is accurate to my predictions, then everything falls into place i guess
i figured Makarov would have met Natsu since he is "acquainted" with Porlyusica. Weren't the two of them comrades? If their meeting took place after her adventures with Makarov, then i guess it makes sense that Makarov and Natsu have not met since that would make Porlyusica about in her 30s or late 20s. If her age is accurate to my predictions, then everything falls into place i guess
11/2 c53 Guest
Oh, this is interesting. I wonder how different the battle against the Oracion Seis will be.
Oh, this is interesting. I wonder how different the battle against the Oracion Seis will be.
10/26 c51 Discipline01
I'll be honest, i personally wouldnt mind it if you just didnt write the smut at all. It rarely adds anything of value to the romantic aspect of the story. You really have to know what the fuck you are doing so that it doesnt just feel like porn. Its just my personal experience though, do what you will.
Besides that, Natsu being the most hesitant one about the polygamy going on is really funny and somewhat ironic considering his overall personality. Great chapter.
I'll be honest, i personally wouldnt mind it if you just didnt write the smut at all. It rarely adds anything of value to the romantic aspect of the story. You really have to know what the fuck you are doing so that it doesnt just feel like porn. Its just my personal experience though, do what you will.
Besides that, Natsu being the most hesitant one about the polygamy going on is really funny and somewhat ironic considering his overall personality. Great chapter.
10/22 c51 xxXCrimson-Wolf-MoonXxx
I think it was a good decision to hold back on the steamy bits. This whole relationship between the three girls, Natsu and END is definitely interesting. END almost sounds scared of the thought of Natsu showing the girls his long distant memories. And again its so refreshing to see a harem story where the girls are not at each others throats. The main question is since END is getting a stronger grip on Natsu. How much longer till he breaks out? Can't wait to see his next memory.
Sorry for not reviewing right away. Life got in the way a bit. Anyway, keep up the amazing work. Can't wait to read more.
I think it was a good decision to hold back on the steamy bits. This whole relationship between the three girls, Natsu and END is definitely interesting. END almost sounds scared of the thought of Natsu showing the girls his long distant memories. And again its so refreshing to see a harem story where the girls are not at each others throats. The main question is since END is getting a stronger grip on Natsu. How much longer till he breaks out? Can't wait to see his next memory.
Sorry for not reviewing right away. Life got in the way a bit. Anyway, keep up the amazing work. Can't wait to read more.
10/22 c1 1HeartByte-FreeAIWritingTool
Love the story Crimson Absolution. Just followed the writer and story.
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10/13 c49 3xxXCrimson-Wolf-MoonXxx
Out of all seriousness, though. You're doing an amazing job with this fic. I look forward to every update with eagerness. I will continue to be your dedicated reader to this awesome story.
3xxXCrimson-Wolf-MoonXxxOut of all seriousness, though. You're doing an amazing job with this fic. I look forward to every update with eagerness. I will continue to be your dedicated reader to this awesome story.
10/13 c49 xxXCrimson-Wolf-MoonXxx
I... I feel called out. I'm just giving ya the reviews you ask for! Anyway, I do like this take on how Makarov obtained his titan magic. I haven't really seen it explored, nor done really at all.
Like most of the reviewers have already commented. I can not get enough of this Natsu's humor and sarcastic remarks he makes to anyone. It's really a breath of fresh air compared to most fics who depict Natsu as a buffoon or just plain cold-hearted. He is kinda a mixture of cold, intelligent, idiotic, and humurous all in one package.
I'm interested to see where you take Lucy's dragon slayer magic.
So that's about it. There's not much to say other than thatI can't wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work you do.
I... I feel called out. I'm just giving ya the reviews you ask for! Anyway, I do like this take on how Makarov obtained his titan magic. I haven't really seen it explored, nor done really at all.
Like most of the reviewers have already commented. I can not get enough of this Natsu's humor and sarcastic remarks he makes to anyone. It's really a breath of fresh air compared to most fics who depict Natsu as a buffoon or just plain cold-hearted. He is kinda a mixture of cold, intelligent, idiotic, and humurous all in one package.
I'm interested to see where you take Lucy's dragon slayer magic.
So that's about it. There's not much to say other than thatI can't wait to read more. Keep up the amazing work you do.
10/13 c49 shadesslayer
This is great got me chuckling and giggling many times. As well as a cackle or two now that i think about it!
This is great got me chuckling and giggling many times. As well as a cackle or two now that i think about it!
10/12 c48 xxXCrimson-Wolf-MoonXxx
Honestly I don't got much to say about this chapter. It was cute. The tension between Lucy and Natsu due to their draconic instincts is definitely interesting. Curious on where this new arc is gonna take us. Great work, can't wait for more.
Honestly I don't got much to say about this chapter. It was cute. The tension between Lucy and Natsu due to their draconic instincts is definitely interesting. Curious on where this new arc is gonna take us. Great work, can't wait for more.