for A Bewitching Dance6/9 c17 
1Boomshanka
If everything is going to be the same, why the hell make Naruto stronger, get him help of Kushina, Hinata's support, even Sasuke's friendship, and still let him be so pathetic?
I'm done .
All I wanted was a fanfic where Naruto isn't a pathetic loser like Baja-moto made him, and I end up with an overcomplicated clusterfuck with hardly any change.
If the original was dried pigshit, this one's the same ...only more colorful coz the pig was having digestion problems.
1BoomshankaIf everything is going to be the same, why the hell make Naruto stronger, get him help of Kushina, Hinata's support, even Sasuke's friendship, and still let him be so pathetic?
I'm done .
All I wanted was a fanfic where Naruto isn't a pathetic loser like Baja-moto made him, and I end up with an overcomplicated clusterfuck with hardly any change.
If the original was dried pigshit, this one's the same ...only more colorful coz the pig was having digestion problems.
6/4 c1 Juliasimon77
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma , connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation, balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease, capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
A quietly powerful work that unfolds with emotional resonance and narrative confidence, this story draws the reader into a world both fantastical and deeply personal. Its strength lies not only in the compelling plot but in its unflinching exploration of trauma , connection, and identity. The writing moves with the rhythm of memory and revelation, balancing lyrical introspection with moments of raw, visceral tension. Scenes shift seamlessly between tenderness and unease, capturing the delicate balance between light and darkness that defines so much of the human experience. It lingers not just as a narrative, but as an echo of something truer beneath the surface.
5/29 c37 codywhite162
This was an excellent chapter as usual and regarding the mist ninja to me it would seem Kaya will make another attempt to claim the Kiba swords and more than likely end up dead because of it. Definitely looking forward to what you have planned regarding them.
This was an excellent chapter as usual and regarding the mist ninja to me it would seem Kaya will make another attempt to claim the Kiba swords and more than likely end up dead because of it. Definitely looking forward to what you have planned regarding them.
5/24 c37 9Dragon Man 180
So does Chojuro have a Biju in him in this continuity? That combined with Hiramekarei could let him make weapons as tall as skyscrapers to fight Kaiju sized summons.
Kaya is a bit of a greedy bitch, hopefully she doesn’t constantly show up and pester Hinata to hand over the Lightning Fangs.
I love how Naruto is working on Sai and getting progress on breaking Danzo’s conditioning on him!
9Dragon Man 180So does Chojuro have a Biju in him in this continuity? That combined with Hiramekarei could let him make weapons as tall as skyscrapers to fight Kaiju sized summons.
Kaya is a bit of a greedy bitch, hopefully she doesn’t constantly show up and pester Hinata to hand over the Lightning Fangs.
I love how Naruto is working on Sai and getting progress on breaking Danzo’s conditioning on him!
5/24 c37 14Dark-Star217
That was the best interaction between Naruto and Chojuro I’ve ever seen on this website. The way your Naruto has flushed out, that unspoken intimidation is EXACTLY what I would expect Chojuro to fear, woth his natural Timid nature. This chapter felt a bit short, campared to most your others, but I love the undertone of it all. The way Anko approached the Naruto/Orochimaru issue, and Hinata’s path towards a healing liberation were both masterfully done. I do wish you spent more time with the Kurama/Kushina issue, but can fully appreciate the way it was handled. Not some major angsty trial, but more intimate and familial. You are steal my favorite author on this platform, make no mistake.
14Dark-Star217That was the best interaction between Naruto and Chojuro I’ve ever seen on this website. The way your Naruto has flushed out, that unspoken intimidation is EXACTLY what I would expect Chojuro to fear, woth his natural Timid nature. This chapter felt a bit short, campared to most your others, but I love the undertone of it all. The way Anko approached the Naruto/Orochimaru issue, and Hinata’s path towards a healing liberation were both masterfully done. I do wish you spent more time with the Kurama/Kushina issue, but can fully appreciate the way it was handled. Not some major angsty trial, but more intimate and familial. You are steal my favorite author on this platform, make no mistake.
5/18 c36 codywhite162
This story continues to be amazing and I am interested in what you have planned for Kurama. It seems for now he needs a bit of humbling and realize that he wasn't the only victim. I am excited though for your overall plans regarding him are though.
This story continues to be amazing and I am interested in what you have planned for Kurama. It seems for now he needs a bit of humbling and realize that he wasn't the only victim. I am excited though for your overall plans regarding him are though.
5/5 c18 sid99
...im sorry but fuck this heaping pile of shit you call a story. you turned Naruto into a fucking Pussy and its pathetic to read now. seriously? he backed down and went quiet cause Jiraiya yelled at him? fuck you.
...im sorry but fuck this heaping pile of shit you call a story. you turned Naruto into a fucking Pussy and its pathetic to read now. seriously? he backed down and went quiet cause Jiraiya yelled at him? fuck you.
5/5 c17 sid99
...this story is rapidly becoming hot trash. seriously? first dozen chapters and you had a budding bad ass and now we got a fucking bitch weaking as a Naruto -_- you are like many other Authors, adding unneeded drama or nerfing the MC for no fucking reason.
...this story is rapidly becoming hot trash. seriously? first dozen chapters and you had a budding bad ass and now we got a fucking bitch weaking as a Naruto -_- you are like many other Authors, adding unneeded drama or nerfing the MC for no fucking reason.
5/5 c16 sid99
...ok, i was gonna wait till the last chapter that is available before speaking but i cant keep silent. wtf is this repeated BS you keep feeding us? anytime Naruto looks a lil bad ass, you slap him fucking down. keeping him injured for far too long, getting easily slapped by a Genjustu and so on. he has most of the experiences of fucking Mito in her warrior days and yet you keep making him look and react like a fucking weak idiot. make up your mind on this shit, either the legacy seal fucking works like you described or it doesnt. otherwise, a good story.
...ok, i was gonna wait till the last chapter that is available before speaking but i cant keep silent. wtf is this repeated BS you keep feeding us? anytime Naruto looks a lil bad ass, you slap him fucking down. keeping him injured for far too long, getting easily slapped by a Genjustu and so on. he has most of the experiences of fucking Mito in her warrior days and yet you keep making him look and react like a fucking weak idiot. make up your mind on this shit, either the legacy seal fucking works like you described or it doesnt. otherwise, a good story.
4/29 c23 Walkmanapprenticewordsmith
not a fan of the summons honestly, seemed like a great opportunity to give gim spiders. also not a fan of the stipulations of the contract. can already tell we gonna get a slug forest arc with a 3-5 chapter fight that ima skip to get to some story progression
not a fan of the summons honestly, seemed like a great opportunity to give gim spiders. also not a fan of the stipulations of the contract. can already tell we gonna get a slug forest arc with a 3-5 chapter fight that ima skip to get to some story progression