for Colours of Obsession5/9 c1 Natalie4q6
I stumbled upon Storio (storioai dot com) yesterday — really interesting. You can build interactive novels with decision points and art scenes. Just thought I’d share in case others might like it too.
I stumbled upon Storio (storioai dot com) yesterday — really interesting. You can build interactive novels with decision points and art scenes. Just thought I’d share in case others might like it too.
5/3 c11 enfield4forever
You're definitely one of my favorite authors on this site, especially when it comes to writing Daphne and Harry's interactions. I am also quite enjoying Tracy and Neville's interactions as well.
You're definitely one of my favorite authors on this site, especially when it comes to writing Daphne and Harry's interactions. I am also quite enjoying Tracy and Neville's interactions as well.
5/2 c19 
10CaskettFan5
You should stop making predictions/promises. There'll be a lot less hassle that way. :)
The reference to Twilight was amusing, it is hard for Robert Pattinson to live that down. I don't know how Daphne puts up with Tracey.
10CaskettFan5You should stop making predictions/promises. There'll be a lot less hassle that way. :)
The reference to Twilight was amusing, it is hard for Robert Pattinson to live that down. I don't know how Daphne puts up with Tracey.
5/1 c6 7Berix
Such a cute chapter. Love all the sections around physical touch and cuddling. Just so cute.
7BerixSuch a cute chapter. Love all the sections around physical touch and cuddling. Just so cute.
4/30 c19 sjkbyite
The chapter name reminds me of the poem "Girls Only Want One Thing" by Isabelle Correa.
Great chapter, looking forward to more!
The chapter name reminds me of the poem "Girls Only Want One Thing" by Isabelle Correa.
Great chapter, looking forward to more!
4/28 c1 rachlnoah
The story presents a lighthearted, yet charming interaction between Harry and Daphne, filled with awkward moments and subtle humor. The dynamic between the characters is engaging, capturing both the humor and the tension of their budding connection, while highlighting Harry's genuine care and Daphne's internal conflict.
The story presents a lighthearted, yet charming interaction between Harry and Daphne, filled with awkward moments and subtle humor. The dynamic between the characters is engaging, capturing both the humor and the tension of their budding connection, while highlighting Harry's genuine care and Daphne's internal conflict.
4/17 c8 Spanner96
Oliver Wood? Why is he still there? Bro graduated the at the end of Harry’s third year
Oliver Wood? Why is he still there? Bro graduated the at the end of Harry’s third year
4/17 c18 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed seeing Draco crash and burn. Sad thing is that it's really his parents' fault and he's too stupid/proud to realize that they taught him wrong. Still fun though! Bullies need to learn sooner or later. The cooing Harry and Daphne did over each other was hilarious! Even better that it was in front of Draco. Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
Excellent chapter! Enjoyed seeing Draco crash and burn. Sad thing is that it's really his parents' fault and he's too stupid/proud to realize that they taught him wrong. Still fun though! Bullies need to learn sooner or later. The cooing Harry and Daphne did over each other was hilarious! Even better that it was in front of Draco. Update soon please! Can't wait to see what's next!
4/16 c18 Guest
I enjoyed seeing a more casual side of them for a change. and got a good laugh when Daphne crushed her draco sculpture. as much as I want to read the next chapters, please take your time and try to enjoy the process.
I enjoyed seeing a more casual side of them for a change. and got a good laugh when Daphne crushed her draco sculpture. as much as I want to read the next chapters, please take your time and try to enjoy the process.
4/16 c18 10CaskettFan5
I enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad you had them oblivious to his later attempts to ruin their date. It was satisfying to see him fail so spectacularly.
10CaskettFan5I enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad you had them oblivious to his later attempts to ruin their date. It was satisfying to see him fail so spectacularly.
4/14 c12 Hank1967
Excellent chapter! Really enjoyed how you handled the scene between Harry and Draco. In my experience, people who dish it out can rarely take it. It's always fun to turn the tables on them! Love your writing! Think you're doing a great job with the story. I do like how you've integrated Daphne and Tracy into the story and given them a good backstory. Details make the fic!
Excellent chapter! Really enjoyed how you handled the scene between Harry and Draco. In my experience, people who dish it out can rarely take it. It's always fun to turn the tables on them! Love your writing! Think you're doing a great job with the story. I do like how you've integrated Daphne and Tracy into the story and given them a good backstory. Details make the fic!
4/13 c17 Guest
I do not typically read stories much over 100k, but your's has been well worth it. thank you
I do not typically read stories much over 100k, but your's has been well worth it. thank you