for The Mystic Rises12/8 c13 Guest
Thank you for writing this fantastic story!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thank you for writing this fantastic story!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
12/5 c13 
3ObsessedWithHPFanFic
Fun story so far and I really like the involvement of the Black and Potter Lords in helping the family, especially Harry. Thanks for sharing!
3ObsessedWithHPFanFicFun story so far and I really like the involvement of the Black and Potter Lords in helping the family, especially Harry. Thanks for sharing!
11/23 c13 Cateagle
I doubt Smith will learn much from this, though he might be bright enough to learn to keep his mouth shut; might, I say.
I doubt Smith will learn much from this, though he might be bright enough to learn to keep his mouth shut; might, I say.
11/23 c1 jhsilver123
Nah, Snape was a shitty person, and that's what makes his character so frecking interesting, and definitely one of the best in the series. I apologize but people who say he wasn't, ruine this amazing character.
Nah, Snape was a shitty person, and that's what makes his character so frecking interesting, and definitely one of the best in the series. I apologize but people who say he wasn't, ruine this amazing character.
11/23 c8 silver.blast96
Private investigators aren’t illegal. Attacking them like that would be a crime. Now they’re the hypocrites.
Private investigators aren’t illegal. Attacking them like that would be a crime. Now they’re the hypocrites.
11/22 c13 3alix33
You meant "as prestigious and powerful as Minister", "in the Auror Corps, and", "they'd often overlooked those with sufficient", "earned her the ire of the other heirs", "who had to attend a meeting with the bureaucrats" and "Zach just brought onto the Smiths' House the attention".
Those pieces of Beskar metal and Tachyon ore that Harry got as a gift sound intriguing beyond all reason.
Casting every spell you know at the top of your lungs is going to cost you, Kiwi Elijah.
Zacharias Smith is an odious cretin who talks far too much and wthout thinking properly first, IMO. He reminds me of Ron Weasley and Draco Malfoy.
3alix33You meant "as prestigious and powerful as Minister", "in the Auror Corps, and", "they'd often overlooked those with sufficient", "earned her the ire of the other heirs", "who had to attend a meeting with the bureaucrats" and "Zach just brought onto the Smiths' House the attention".
Those pieces of Beskar metal and Tachyon ore that Harry got as a gift sound intriguing beyond all reason.
Casting every spell you know at the top of your lungs is going to cost you, Kiwi Elijah.
Zacharias Smith is an odious cretin who talks far too much and wthout thinking properly first, IMO. He reminds me of Ron Weasley and Draco Malfoy.
11/21 c11 alix33
You meant "me we have a house in Moscow", "you will be eligible to apply" andin the back of Potter Manor".
I have never had ribeye steak (Harry is about to have one with mashed potatoes and green beans).
"overextend" should be one word, according to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from.
You meant "me we have a house in Moscow", "you will be eligible to apply" andin the back of Potter Manor".
I have never had ribeye steak (Harry is about to have one with mashed potatoes and green beans).
"overextend" should be one word, according to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from.
11/21 c12 alix33
I had to google to learn which protein was or could be added to make protein milk.
You meant "join the Corps early", "she was both excited and wary about", "you joining the Corps is" and "but not the war".
Harry understanding that barn owl and other birds because he is a tsunamibird animagus is an excellent bonus.
I had to google to learn which protein was or could be added to make protein milk.
You meant "join the Corps early", "she was both excited and wary about", "you joining the Corps is" and "but not the war".
Harry understanding that barn owl and other birds because he is a tsunamibird animagus is an excellent bonus.
11/21 c10 alix33
Yum! on behalf of the Hogwarts students at their having Sirius as DADA teacher.
IMO Arcturus should come to Hogwarts and kick that entitled AF Ron Weasley in the same place he kicked Dumbles years ago.
Yum! on behalf of the Hogwarts students at their having Sirius as DADA teacher.
IMO Arcturus should come to Hogwarts and kick that entitled AF Ron Weasley in the same place he kicked Dumbles years ago.
11/21 c9 alix33
You meant "Take a seat on one of the open beds", "after a few minutes of thinking about the young", "You murdering son of a bitch", "Once the bucket was in his hands, Harry" and "watch the memory in the pensieve of what happened".
"far-fetched" needed a hyphen, according to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from.
Yum! at the mental pic I got of the dragon hide uniform Harry just got.
You meant "Take a seat on one of the open beds", "after a few minutes of thinking about the young", "You murdering son of a bitch", "Once the bucket was in his hands, Harry" and "watch the memory in the pensieve of what happened".
"far-fetched" needed a hyphen, according to the dictionaries that Google gives search results from.
Yum! at the mental pic I got of the dragon hide uniform Harry just got.
11/21 c8 alix33
And how would the friends that split up in the mall find one another before going back to school?
That man said "You're British" to Harry.
"hot cakes" in "sell like hot cakes" should be two words, according to the dictionaries that Gogives search results from.
I am SO relieved that Harry had a way to contact Charlus and Arcturus about the guys who were following him.
You meant "For your sakes... you had better not be lying", "You six can demonstrate", "to become an animagus", "You're not too old to learn", "I, Sirius Orion Black, am still a handsome man", "Thank Merlin the bitch was dead", "we would like to give you", "several aerial manoeuvres", "the dinner has only just begun", "We figured we would approach you all" and "You can have a hoverboard".
And how would the friends that split up in the mall find one another before going back to school?
That man said "You're British" to Harry.
"hot cakes" in "sell like hot cakes" should be two words, according to the dictionaries that Gogives search results from.
I am SO relieved that Harry had a way to contact Charlus and Arcturus about the guys who were following him.
You meant "For your sakes... you had better not be lying", "You six can demonstrate", "to become an animagus", "You're not too old to learn", "I, Sirius Orion Black, am still a handsome man", "Thank Merlin the bitch was dead", "we would like to give you", "several aerial manoeuvres", "the dinner has only just begun", "We figured we would approach you all" and "You can have a hoverboard".
11/21 c7 alix33
My very well-developed vengeful side loved learning that Arcturus and Charlus terrified Molly Weasley.
You meant "The young redhead was most eager", "righteous and I often retaliated", "smart to rein in your arrogance", "named Albus too many names" and "would have been heard by everyone at the castle and at Hogsmeade".
"I cannot imagine..." IMO proves just what an utter lack of imagination Dumbles has.
I am looking forward SO much to Molly Weasley's wild imaginings coming to naught.
If I were Severus Snape I would still be guffawing on the inside, never mind just smiling.
IMO Severus Snape has seriously mad acting skills, as revealed in this chapter.
My very well-developed vengeful side loved learning that Arcturus and Charlus terrified Molly Weasley.
You meant "The young redhead was most eager", "righteous and I often retaliated", "smart to rein in your arrogance", "named Albus too many names" and "would have been heard by everyone at the castle and at Hogsmeade".
"I cannot imagine..." IMO proves just what an utter lack of imagination Dumbles has.
I am looking forward SO much to Molly Weasley's wild imaginings coming to naught.
If I were Severus Snape I would still be guffawing on the inside, never mind just smiling.
IMO Severus Snape has seriously mad acting skills, as revealed in this chapter.
11/21 c6 alix33
Reading about Dumbles' plans is funny. Because those plans are not going to succeed.
You meant "If I were not dead and could", "given their ires", "I even made a couple discoveries" and "Hence you're my favourite".
Yum! at the dinner special.
Congratulations on becoming a tsunamibird animagus in your first year already, Harry.
Reading about Dumbles' plans is funny. Because those plans are not going to succeed.
You meant "If I were not dead and could", "given their ires", "I even made a couple discoveries" and "Hence you're my favourite".
Yum! at the dinner special.
Congratulations on becoming a tsunamibird animagus in your first year already, Harry.
11/21 c5 alix33
You meant "was done he left to sit", "They're division based" and "returned to the boys' dorm".
The apostrophe needs to go after the s of "boys" in "the boys' spacious living room".
You meant "was done he left to sit", "They're division based" and "returned to the boys' dorm".
The apostrophe needs to go after the s of "boys" in "the boys' spacious living room".