8/11/2023 c1 6cc992
*Ahem*

Professional Reviewer is here *Cringe*

*Ahem* Sorry
So This one shot doesn't feel like a one shot but more like a chapter of The Rise of the Phoenix which I absolutely loved *Internally screaming*
I loved this story from Top to bottom
I loved the Character development of Hiro, Blade breakers' love and respect for Kai not only as a captain but also as a friend.
I've nothing to say about the chemistry between KaiHil coz gurl we know they are the best.
I'm really impressed with the comparison of Blade Breakers' with the Solar system and when Kai compared Hils with moon... OMO Gurl I blushed too

So in short It's a really nice story and Kai is definitely the best leader :3

(PS: Why Hiro's having a headache and hearing voices in his mind is a big mystery for meMunia

8/1/2023 c1 4Sakhi2009
Really! That's super duper great! I liked the point when Hilary compared the team to Solar System, they way Ray knew all of things of Kaihil and how Hiro and Ray were scared of Hilary. The last line touched my heart when Kai accepted Bladebraekers as his family. It's real that Bladebreakers are family.