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1kasicair
Kinda disgusting, tbh.
The MC is extremely disingenuous. It is one thing to come to the ball with another girl. It is quite another to leave that girl there, go have a quickie with a different girl, and return as if nothing happened.
That... is not cool, man. It paints the MC as a cheating scumbag. This would have been WAY better if MC was upfront with Katie, told her how the situation is, and she decided to go with him as a friend, or had no problems with sharing or something. Even if that sounds like nonsense, it's still much better than having this scummy MC.
Well, that's just my opinion. You do you.
1kasicairKinda disgusting, tbh.
The MC is extremely disingenuous. It is one thing to come to the ball with another girl. It is quite another to leave that girl there, go have a quickie with a different girl, and return as if nothing happened.
That... is not cool, man. It paints the MC as a cheating scumbag. This would have been WAY better if MC was upfront with Katie, told her how the situation is, and she decided to go with him as a friend, or had no problems with sharing or something. Even if that sounds like nonsense, it's still much better than having this scummy MC.
Well, that's just my opinion. You do you.
6/4 c23 6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
6Yaw6113Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
5/4 c22 3Hudy Leak613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
3Hudy Leak613Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
4/3 c21 Hudy Leak613
I can’t wait for the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
I can’t wait for the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
4/3 c1 grantcourtney
Hi, I'm Ella courtney ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating! Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special!.
Hi, I'm Ella courtney ! I just finished reading your story, and I have to say it's absolutely captivating! Your storytelling is immersive, the characters feel so real, and the plot had me hooked from start to finish. I’d love to share a detailed review because your work deserves all the praise! Keep writing your talent is truly something special!.
4/3 c1 avilasamantha
The writing style is both vivid and compelling, effortlessly drawing the audience into the world the author has created. The pacing is well-managed, allowing moments of intensity to shine while giving space for reflection and character growth. Themes are thoughtfully explored, making the story not just entertaining but also meaningful.. .
The writing style is both vivid and compelling, effortlessly drawing the audience into the world the author has created. The pacing is well-managed, allowing moments of intensity to shine while giving space for reflection and character growth. Themes are thoughtfully explored, making the story not just entertaining but also meaningful.. .
4/1 c5 Seananagan
The concept so far seems interesting, always a fan of powerful!Harry fics and multi pairings are fun if done well. Not the biggest fan of him not spending any time with Fleur after what happened and you making up a rule about champions not being allowed to go to the ball together though.
The concept so far seems interesting, always a fan of powerful!Harry fics and multi pairings are fun if done well. Not the biggest fan of him not spending any time with Fleur after what happened and you making up a rule about champions not being allowed to go to the ball together though.
3/15 c10 2The Alpha 100
i really dont get it? why not just ask for Susan's help instead of pushing this whole manipulation shiit,iy definitely feels weird,pushed
2The Alpha 100i really dont get it? why not just ask for Susan's help instead of pushing this whole manipulation shiit,iy definitely feels weird,pushed
3/4 c20 3Hudy Leak613
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
3Hudy Leak613Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
2/3 c3 3alix33
You meant for Dumbles to say "saving another champion's life" and "am a fairly interesting companion". ".
3alix33You meant for Dumbles to say "saving another champion's life" and "am a fairly interesting companion". ".
2/3 c2 alix33
You meant "Its only drawback".
And not a contraceptive charm or potion anywhere in sight.
You meant "Its only drawback".
And not a contraceptive charm or potion anywhere in sight.