for Cursed Eyes6/10 c78 ALEX HATAKE
guau enserio cada día se pone mas emocionante, espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo.
saludos y que estés muy bien.
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guau enserio cada día se pone mas emocionante, espero con ansias el siguiente capitulo.
saludos y que estés muy bien.
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6/10 c71 ALEX HATAKE
hola, me alegra que estés muy bien y me va bien en mi canal gracias.
el capitulo estuvo genial.
hola, me alegra que estés muy bien y me va bien en mi canal gracias.
el capitulo estuvo genial.
6/10 c78 Anon
Oh shit, a real deity level technique. I suspect Ganesha's entire goal is to take out Tengen and restore the world to it's previous state? One question though, how tf did Tengen manage to singlehandedly fuck over the era of curses and deities without being one herself though?
Oh shit, a real deity level technique. I suspect Ganesha's entire goal is to take out Tengen and restore the world to it's previous state? One question though, how tf did Tengen manage to singlehandedly fuck over the era of curses and deities without being one herself though?
6/10 c78 roshane
While I appreciate the update, I must express my disappointment. The primary draw of this fic is the character of Itachi, yet he appears to be underutilized. While I understand the importance of supporting characters, the significant amount of time dedicated to them feels excessive. While a filler chapters are expected , the main characters, such as Itachi and Gojo are the major draw, does that mean it will be in July before we even catch a glimpse of itachi
While I appreciate the update, I must express my disappointment. The primary draw of this fic is the character of Itachi, yet he appears to be underutilized. While I understand the importance of supporting characters, the significant amount of time dedicated to them feels excessive. While a filler chapters are expected , the main characters, such as Itachi and Gojo are the major draw, does that mean it will be in July before we even catch a glimpse of itachi
5/24 c62 Alexander Lawliet
I think there's a bit of a recurring issue with having any recommendation a character gives about how a technique could be iproved or how a problem could be circumvented always seem be work immediately. Like' in will eneapter the idea that no Inumaki in the centuries long history of the clan has ever thought of something that a high school girl apparently figured out in five minutes after hearing a basic description of their technique feels ridiculous. It feels similar to the sign language thing. Itachi mentions once about how the Inumaki should use sign language and suddenly they're all using it and acting like it's some genius revelation. I feel like there should be more instances where ideas and proposed solutions just don't work. It'd make the story and the world feel less artificial.
I think there's a bit of a recurring issue with having any recommendation a character gives about how a technique could be iproved or how a problem could be circumvented always seem be work immediately. Like' in will eneapter the idea that no Inumaki in the centuries long history of the clan has ever thought of something that a high school girl apparently figured out in five minutes after hearing a basic description of their technique feels ridiculous. It feels similar to the sign language thing. Itachi mentions once about how the Inumaki should use sign language and suddenly they're all using it and acting like it's some genius revelation. I feel like there should be more instances where ideas and proposed solutions just don't work. It'd make the story and the world feel less artificial.
5/22 c74 TacysToess
Damn, had my boy Toge smiling as he slaughtered people hehe. Fuck i live for this fic! It’s so amazing! I love the worldbuilding and everything about it!
Damn, had my boy Toge smiling as he slaughtered people hehe. Fuck i live for this fic! It’s so amazing! I love the worldbuilding and everything about it!
5/22 c72 TacysToess
Damn, had my boy Toge smiling as he slaughtered people hehe. Fuck i live for this fic! It’s so amazing! I love the worldbuilding and everything about it!
Damn, had my boy Toge smiling as he slaughtered people hehe. Fuck i live for this fic! It’s so amazing! I love the worldbuilding and everything about it!
5/13 c26 Alexander Lawliet
Okay so hi! I've been binge reading this fic for the last few days trying to catch up. First of all I think this fic is really good. It's well written, and avoids falbing into power fantasy despite having a very strong main character which is super impressive. The premise is also just really cool. My omly "criticism" [q~"]I would say is sometimes it seems like you over describe the intention of certain lines of dialogue. Like, you will say, "line of dialogue," he said, pomppously critiquing the authors great writing. Instead you could just let the statement speak for itself. Also you seem to use shrugging a lot when you c just have a character stay quiet and still or just walk away for equal effect. I'm sorry if I'm being overly critical, I do really like the story and you very well may have already done the things I've suggested in more recent chapters, but I thought I'd give a, hopefully, constructive bit of advice.
Okay so hi! I've been binge reading this fic for the last few days trying to catch up. First of all I think this fic is really good. It's well written, and avoids falbing into power fantasy despite having a very strong main character which is super impressive. The premise is also just really cool. My omly "criticism" [q~"]I would say is sometimes it seems like you over describe the intention of certain lines of dialogue. Like, you will say, "line of dialogue," he said, pomppously critiquing the authors great writing. Instead you could just let the statement speak for itself. Also you seem to use shrugging a lot when you c just have a character stay quiet and still or just walk away for equal effect. I'm sorry if I'm being overly critical, I do really like the story and you very well may have already done the things I've suggested in more recent chapters, but I thought I'd give a, hopefully, constructive bit of advice.