for Pokemon: Resurgence7h c13 Fill-them-up
When you put the move proficiency you put twister twice i belive you meant to put one as thunder wave.
When you put the move proficiency you put twister twice i belive you meant to put one as thunder wave.
5/3 c61 Guest
ummmmm, did Lucas just get outed as knowing both Mew and Mewtwo?
ummmmm, did Lucas just get outed as knowing both Mew and Mewtwo?
5/4 c21 Slither21
The communicating via bond shit is kinda ass imo, feels like a cop out so you dont have to write commands in battles.
I cba with the wonky ass dialogue. It gives off heavy translation vibes
The communicating via bond shit is kinda ass imo, feels like a cop out so you dont have to write commands in battles.
I cba with the wonky ass dialogue. It gives off heavy translation vibes
5/4 c20 Slither21
Conversations are still super weak, clunky and disjointed. Battles are also very stale. Added the constant changing health status is quite overbearing since it appears every 4-5 lines in a fight.
Rather weird to have him still have to pay for the egg, considering he did a job for her pretty much for free.
HIS NAME IS GIOVANNI GIOVANNI? NOT RANDOM NAME GIOVANNI ffs.
Conversations are still super weak, clunky and disjointed. Battles are also very stale. Added the constant changing health status is quite overbearing since it appears every 4-5 lines in a fight.
Rather weird to have him still have to pay for the egg, considering he did a job for her pretty much for free.
HIS NAME IS GIOVANNI GIOVANNI? NOT RANDOM NAME GIOVANNI ffs.
5/3 c11 Slither21
Conversations are so overly formal (disregarding sabrina) it kinda gives off the vibes that youre trying to reach a word count. “It isI am” etc can all be shortened to be more informal and casual such as “itsI’mwe’re” and so on. Hopefully you improved later on.
Conversations are so overly formal (disregarding sabrina) it kinda gives off the vibes that youre trying to reach a word count. “It isI am” etc can all be shortened to be more informal and casual such as “itsI’mwe’re” and so on. Hopefully you improved later on.
5/2 c61 pratikchakraborty911
I shudder to think about lucas ultimate team. They will be beast. Lucas doesn't need to battle in league. He would be ultimate Pokemon trainer. It's always hilarious to read about meowth's reaction.
Anyways thanks for the update.
I shudder to think about lucas ultimate team. They will be beast. Lucas doesn't need to battle in league. He would be ultimate Pokemon trainer. It's always hilarious to read about meowth's reaction.
Anyways thanks for the update.
5/2 c61 frankieu
nice chapter thx for writing it
welp some one tale is going to grow with mew kidnapping him :d
nice chapter thx for writing it
welp some one tale is going to grow with mew kidnapping him :d
4/28 c47 
2RebelliousPrince
So. technically, lucas can take a pokemon egg. lets say a mankey. go into the store. purchase an attribute. psychic. add it to the mankey. remove the fighting type with the attribute eraser... tailoring exclusive eggs
2RebelliousPrinceSo. technically, lucas can take a pokemon egg. lets say a mankey. go into the store. purchase an attribute. psychic. add it to the mankey. remove the fighting type with the attribute eraser... tailoring exclusive eggs
4/24 c60 pratikchakraborty911
I think it is one of my favourite Pokemon fic that has system. Thanks for the update.
I think it is one of my favourite Pokemon fic that has system. Thanks for the update.