for Rise of the Devil Dragon11/8 c1 
1HeartByte-FreeAIWritingTool
Love the storyRise Of The Devil Dragon. Just followed the writer and story.
1HeartByte-FreeAIWritingToolLove the storyRise Of The Devil Dragon. Just followed the writer and story.
9/23 c11 dbh13
I really enjoyed this version of Issei and Rias. Finally, a love story with a happy ending. Not a perverted Issei who could not see what he had.
I really enjoyed this version of Issei and Rias. Finally, a love story with a happy ending. Not a perverted Issei who could not see what he had.
6/28 c9 Lamont
I'm liking it so far but I'm curious on why Issei is going easy on them. Simply do your job and finish them off quickly. No need them to get a lucky shot off. This is a easy way just to follow cannon. The best thing for Rias would be be to destroy Riser's peerage as quickly as they can. With Riser's ability to get angry quickly seeing his peerage being destroyed quickly and ruthlessly would probably cause him to react badly. Issei should know this in this.
I'm liking it so far but I'm curious on why Issei is going easy on them. Simply do your job and finish them off quickly. No need them to get a lucky shot off. This is a easy way just to follow cannon. The best thing for Rias would be be to destroy Riser's peerage as quickly as they can. With Riser's ability to get angry quickly seeing his peerage being destroyed quickly and ruthlessly would probably cause him to react badly. Issei should know this in this.
6/9 c9 MoonpiePeden
So, I started reading this story a couple of days ago. I am loving it so far. I like the idea that Issei is not a bloody idiot pervert and actually has his life together. The backstory is sad, but interesting, while also creating a completely different atmosphere for the interactions of Issei with the others. I am curious as to how the fight in the Rating Game will go differently from the cannon. Earlier in the story, when Issei dispatched some of the Fallen Angels, that really surprised and impressed me. I really hope this story gets regular updates and wish the best to the author.
So, I started reading this story a couple of days ago. I am loving it so far. I like the idea that Issei is not a bloody idiot pervert and actually has his life together. The backstory is sad, but interesting, while also creating a completely different atmosphere for the interactions of Issei with the others. I am curious as to how the fight in the Rating Game will go differently from the cannon. Earlier in the story, when Issei dispatched some of the Fallen Angels, that really surprised and impressed me. I really hope this story gets regular updates and wish the best to the author.
6/5 c5 Kira Hanabusa
I find it highly idiotic that Issei joined Rias’ peerage since Issei is greatly stronger than her by miles, y’know being a Devil-Dragon Hybrid and being the wielder of the Boosted Gear. Seriously what was the point of him joining in the first place, I know Issei was considering it on Sirzechs’ behest, but, c’mon there is no point of him joining. The only reason why I can think of him joining is the Riser situation and down right plot convenience and nothing else.
I find it highly idiotic that Issei joined Rias’ peerage since Issei is greatly stronger than her by miles, y’know being a Devil-Dragon Hybrid and being the wielder of the Boosted Gear. Seriously what was the point of him joining in the first place, I know Issei was considering it on Sirzechs’ behest, but, c’mon there is no point of him joining. The only reason why I can think of him joining is the Riser situation and down right plot convenience and nothing else.
5/1 c8 VanishingDragonofSupremacy
Just out of curiosity are you going to follow the anime or Light Novel? Just wondering if you plan to add or change the events that follow Vol 2 Phoenix of the Battle School..
Just out of curiosity are you going to follow the anime or Light Novel? Just wondering if you plan to add or change the events that follow Vol 2 Phoenix of the Battle School..
2/14 c7 TatsuyaShiva4
A powerful Dragon as a Father would have been more interesting like Apophis or Ryujin.
A powerful Dragon as a Father would have been more interesting like Apophis or Ryujin.
1/29 c4 Bluenait
what a bullshit plot fuck this trash.
i mean really ? not killing Fred even he could do so easely bot noooo bullshit plor happend fuck this
what a bullshit plot fuck this trash.
i mean really ? not killing Fred even he could do so easely bot noooo bullshit plor happend fuck this
1/18 c1 Zetsway11
Yeah...when you disregard one of the few crucial laws in DxD the fanfiction is trash. Why would God give Sacred gears to Devils or Dragons, the strongest race in DxD...
Yeah...when you disregard one of the few crucial laws in DxD the fanfiction is trash. Why would God give Sacred gears to Devils or Dragons, the strongest race in DxD...
1/16 c1 XXX777
You do know that to have a Sacred Gear Issei would need to be part human right? It's DxD canon.
You do know that to have a Sacred Gear Issei would need to be part human right? It's DxD canon.