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1Zipzapdoowoop
Nice little filler chapter. I'm hoping for major plot progression next chapter
1ZipzapdoowoopNice little filler chapter. I'm hoping for major plot progression next chapter
5/20 c2 halecrisostomo
It’d be interesting to see if the 7 year time skip happened and Naruto was left to fend for the fairy tail guild along with the people who were originally left being
It’d be interesting to see if the 7 year time skip happened and Naruto was left to fend for the fairy tail guild along with the people who were originally left being
5/20 c17 Samuel Santillan
Hahahaha...
This team is incredible and I love it. I want to see how they fight more as a team and see if Naruto and Laxus can work together.
Hahahaha...
This team is incredible and I love it. I want to see how they fight more as a team and see if Naruto and Laxus can work together.
5/20 c17 6The Faceless Wordsmith
A game of Uno. Truly evil. Only second to getting slammed in Monopoly.
6The Faceless WordsmithA game of Uno. Truly evil. Only second to getting slammed in Monopoly.
5/15 c16 SacredKoopa
Personally hope Seilah leaves Tartaros and ends up joining Fairy Tail with Naruto.
Personally hope Seilah leaves Tartaros and ends up joining Fairy Tail with Naruto.
5/15 c11 SacredKoopa
Good thing that Ultear won't be thinking of ever manipulating Naruto again in the future, heck, she may even come to truly love him.
Good thing that Ultear won't be thinking of ever manipulating Naruto again in the future, heck, she may even come to truly love him.
4/27 c16 random reader 44
Good chapter.
But you might have forgotten that war arc naruto can easily locate anyone across a continent. He should be able to locate Tartarus's hideout. Unless they are in separate dimension he can find then through their life-force alone. And six paths naruto can even locate anyone across dimensions.
Good chapter.
But you might have forgotten that war arc naruto can easily locate anyone across a continent. He should be able to locate Tartarus's hideout. Unless they are in separate dimension he can find then through their life-force alone. And six paths naruto can even locate anyone across dimensions.
4/17 c3 Marsuvees Black The Dark Lord
I got to say 10/10 hand to hand combat.
This story definitely has potential.
I got to say 10/10 hand to hand combat.
This story definitely has potential.
4/17 c2 Marsuvees Black The Dark Lord
To be clear this story seems to have potential and what little I had read to this point had been good.
The problem I noticed is when he wakes up.. not only is there no indication of him getting out of the infirmary bed but it suddenly sounds like he's outside the building and about to leave when he says farewell.
Now obviously it's revealed at the end of the scene he is still in the infirmary but still it was confusing at first.. also an event like this happens and when he leaves that infirmary room he isn't being bugged by the rest of the guild?
I know it sounds nitpicky but that's all in one scene in the second chapter.. usually a point at which readers are still deciding if they want to read the story.
Maybe that scene only bothered me but just in case I wanted to say something.
To be clear this story seems to have potential and what little I had read to this point had been good.
The problem I noticed is when he wakes up.. not only is there no indication of him getting out of the infirmary bed but it suddenly sounds like he's outside the building and about to leave when he says farewell.
Now obviously it's revealed at the end of the scene he is still in the infirmary but still it was confusing at first.. also an event like this happens and when he leaves that infirmary room he isn't being bugged by the rest of the guild?
I know it sounds nitpicky but that's all in one scene in the second chapter.. usually a point at which readers are still deciding if they want to read the story.
Maybe that scene only bothered me but just in case I wanted to say something.
4/13 c16 Borello
nice work
nice work