for Break the Habit10/22/2003 c8 
3akaStrobe
writing like an amateur? what do you mean. It may not be shakespeare, but it is a heck of a lot better than others i've read...
i try not to do flames, but soem stories.. .argh! i can;t helpo myself...
but this isn't one of them. There are no GLARING mistakes at least.
and good story too.
3akaStrobewriting like an amateur? what do you mean. It may not be shakespeare, but it is a heck of a lot better than others i've read...
i try not to do flames, but soem stories.. .argh! i can;t helpo myself...
but this isn't one of them. There are no GLARING mistakes at least.
and good story too.
8/16/2003 c6 30KaT aka Mistress Shinigami
Aw...it was so cute when he comforted her! Too bad it was all shot when he kissed her. Poor Sango...so confused. Please update soon! =)
30KaT aka Mistress ShinigamiAw...it was so cute when he comforted her! Too bad it was all shot when he kissed her. Poor Sango...so confused. Please update soon! =)
7/27/2003 c5 rain
Very nice.
Very nice.
7/25/2003 c4 KaT aka Mistress Shinigami
O.O Just plain ignoring them? What's going on here...
I'm so glad you updated! So cool! Oh, and thanks a lot for your nice reviews on some of my stories. =) Yay! *gives darkpride (lower-case 'd') a virtual cookie*
O.O Just plain ignoring them? What's going on here...
I'm so glad you updated! So cool! Oh, and thanks a lot for your nice reviews on some of my stories. =) Yay! *gives darkpride (lower-case 'd') a virtual cookie*
7/23/2003 c3 KaT aka Mistress Shinigami
You could make this a long fic, if you want. Maybe add some twists and stuff..just an idea. I'm glad you updated! Too bad Kagome and Inuyasha ditched them...again. Though I really can't see Inu & Kag being all loving towards each other, it works in your story. So update soon! =)
You could make this a long fic, if you want. Maybe add some twists and stuff..just an idea. I'm glad you updated! Too bad Kagome and Inuyasha ditched them...again. Though I really can't see Inu & Kag being all loving towards each other, it works in your story. So update soon! =)
7/23/2003 c3 OkHorseLvr
VERY cool fic
I think i like the idea of a long fan-fic better than the idea of a short one.
so please make it longer!1
Jordan
VERY cool fic
I think i like the idea of a long fan-fic better than the idea of a short one.
so please make it longer!1
Jordan
7/22/2003 c3 Zoutou
^-^ Of course I liked it! I think it's a great Idea that you make this into a long fic. I like them better anyway! eep! If i live in Japan my family wouldn't be favored! ::Scowls at 3 older brothers:: ::Pulls out blue sword at looks with evil grimace at brothers:: *I don't care if we live in America, i still don't like yal!* ::Darkpride sweatdrops::
^-^ Of course I liked it! I think it's a great Idea that you make this into a long fic. I like them better anyway! eep! If i live in Japan my family wouldn't be favored! ::Scowls at 3 older brothers:: ::Pulls out blue sword at looks with evil grimace at brothers:: *I don't care if we live in America, i still don't like yal!* ::Darkpride sweatdrops::
7/21/2003 c2 Zoutou
You were so nice reviewing my story, that I just had to come over and check out your stories! ^-^ I like this one alot! I can't wait to find out what happens! Please update soon! ^-^
You were so nice reviewing my story, that I just had to come over and check out your stories! ^-^ I like this one alot! I can't wait to find out what happens! Please update soon! ^-^
7/17/2003 c2 Baka
::Blink:: Okay... What IS up with Sango?
::Blink:: Okay... What IS up with Sango?
7/15/2003 c2 30KaT aka Mistress Shinigami
^_^ Yay! I'm glad you updated! Too bad Inuyasha and Kagome are unintentionally ignoring them...but things will get better soon, right? ^_^ I hope you write more soon!
30KaT aka Mistress Shinigami^_^ Yay! I'm glad you updated! Too bad Inuyasha and Kagome are unintentionally ignoring them...but things will get better soon, right? ^_^ I hope you write more soon!