2/21 c24 Geoxaga
I just caught up to your story and I really love it. It's a great blend of both universes.

I was curious about you were going to do the curse if Asta already had a devil arm. Seems like you were also kinda grasping at the logic flaw. Something that could have worked is getting the devil arm later at the witch arc instead of the beginning. With the reason for Liebe not giving asta the devil arm sooner was because he didn't want to hurt Richita's son unless it was absolutely necessary.

If you do end up getting to edolus, an idea I had for asta's reverse personality for his doppelganger would be a genius inventor, who's also rather quiet and rather reserve. He would specialize in the creation on nonmagical invention that could later be upgraded with magic. Since magic is a finite resource there should be great importance to his work. He would have invented trains that he would later be upgraded with magic to allow trains to fly to the different sky islands. He would have also been the one to invent a nonmagical prosthetic limbs like the auto-mail from Fullmetal alchemist. With his left arm replacing being replaced by auto-mail to mirror Asta's demon right arm. His arm doesn't need magic to operate, but has multiple upgrades that are magical in nature making him a true threat on the battle field.

Edolus Noelle and Mimosa both coming from the slums living with very poor families. The main difference for Noelle being she was raised but a mother and doting siblings and a loving mother. Her personality is very honest for her feelings for her Asta already and is a kind humble girl who loves to she her affection to people.

Edolus Mimosa being somewhat cold with a serious look most of the time, but has a deep care about people. She shows her love to her Asta as open as her Noelle, where she always gets close to him, while giving a small rare smile. Like a Kuundere that like to rap their arm around their boyfriend with a cold face that still held a blush. She has the feeling most of the time similar to a bad biker girl, especially with how she dresses. Maybe into an open relationship as long as she's number 1.

The Edolus Asta loves and care about both of them very much as he was raised with them as childhood friends. While also being a great break from his sister lily who's a viscous street punk, part of a gang that has a soft spot for kids and uses her money from crimes to help take care of children in the neighborhood.

1/31 c1 Jasperj07
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10/9/2024 c23 4Anti-Mage 29
So did Yun figure out Spirit Dive? I do get having him take the title of Overon, the currently strongest male Fairy tail member opposite Ezra’s Titania, that was a good choice, but what will Asta get as an equally awesome epithet? Also I do see what you did with Laxus. Spoiler free on reviews, it’s basically the same thing that happened to Langris. Now it’s on to the Witches Forest. Zell and the rest will debut along side Wendy and An early Yukino! And Black Asta debut, which will probably be at the same level at Yuno’s low leve Spirit Dive I can’t wait for that, then Oracion Seis. Those six are in for a shock with this stronger Tram Natsu and Black Clover. Looking forward to the next adventure.

8/9/2024 c22 Anti-Mage 29
Wow. Things are really heating up! I honestly thought you might have Yuno unlock his latent familial attribute of Star Magic here. but I guess that's a later chapter. And from what I just read, Bickslow can sorta see who exactly is a reincarnated elf with his magic, and sees that in Laxus, who's acting exactly like Langris during the Royal Knights Exam, so that's an additional problem down the road. Also, figured out the perfect time for the Fanzell/Dominante mini-arc if you haven't. PM if you want to discuss. Also, I guess Liebe is beating himself up over being unable to help Asta with his arms. given that this seems to be a stronger lingering effect than Ice Shell for him to undo without Destroyer. Guess we'll see how he's really feeling after Fantasia. Also, I'm interested in what you're gonna do with the filler arcs, seeing as Asta's on mandatory rest and can't take any jobs.

3/8/2024 c20 Anti-Mage 29
Thing's are gearing up! I can tell you set up The Witches' Forest Arc, but question, you skipped over the in between story that introduced Fanzell to the Bulls. Did that happen off screen or what? This is the guy who taught Asta swordsmanship.

1/4/2024 c10 FlameFox0327
That was smooth of yuno. 100% In character ngl.

11/28/2023 c11 yogaratw607
I would think noelle and juvia with get along sometimes also i really want see in future if you plan each character time to shine like alzack with bisca on battle of fairy tail arc, Romeo with sting on oracion Seis arc, Strauss siblings with Cana and juvia on edolas arc and many more

Please give them unique power up in future and maybe add Cana on Natsu Harem
Maybe edolas arc you should add edolas gildarts, edolas igneel and edolas edolas metalicana join fairy tail guild