3/15 c4 5SOPV
didn't realise you made an update to this one lol. The sites been kinda funky for the last few months. anyways loved the chapter! hoping for more! this and the one with Naruto and Marika before the erdtree.

1/31 c4 2gearhead2177
good job.

1/24 c4 jsndncnt
this story is good

1/22 c4 Le Phoque Blanc
honestly it is very fun but apart from the start I don't see the naruto crossover yet...just an ooc malenia. I want to see where this goes so update it is

1/21 c4 Braeden1002
While this chapter was just about Malenia being an absolute imp for all of her family, it still made me laugh and chuckle at all of the antics she got up to. I did like the scene between Marika and Malenia; for all that, Marika is typically written as someone who does not care, it is great to see her acting like a mother and a parent. So keep up the great work and I look forward to reading your Elden Ring stories.

1/20 c4 Hail Lord Archanfel
Just a little chaos before reality comes crashing down.

1/19 c4 Guest
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Forgetting shithead Gary Stu fuck boys like you exist would be a good thing. Kindly go fucking die Ryan Duff.
Forgetting shithead Gary Stu fuck boys like you exist would be a good thing. Kindly go fucking die Ryan Duff.
Forgetting shithead Gary Stu fuck boys like you exist would be a good thing. Kindly go fucking die Ryan Duff.