
11h c17 Erick Salvador
Ojalá no agregen a Bell en la historia, con un protagonista es suficiente, muchos autores al mezclar varias historias pierden el rumbo
Ojalá no agregen a Bell en la historia, con un protagonista es suficiente, muchos autores al mezclar varias historias pierden el rumbo
5/10 c17 Miguelito030905
Good morning, author! I've read your story and loved it so much, so I'd like to ask your permission to translate it into Spanish and make it more widely known. Good luck with your work!
Good morning, author! I've read your story and loved it so much, so I'd like to ask your permission to translate it into Spanish and make it more widely known. Good luck with your work!
5/10 c17 weirdbutOK
since this is a grail war in another world, is it possible for a ruler to be summoned to try and maintain whatever rules or at least to make sure it doesn't get out of hand?
since this is a grail war in another world, is it possible for a ruler to be summoned to try and maintain whatever rules or at least to make sure it doesn't get out of hand?
5/7 c7 RandomGuy
I don't know if EMIYA is trolling or not with his comment of her being at least B rank.
I don't know if EMIYA is trolling or not with his comment of her being at least B rank.
5/5 c17 Shen1412
Ahhh the infection of food is spreading & wow Ais can tell Atcher is a spirit immediately, amazing chapter as usual, really curious how this story ends
Ahhh the infection of food is spreading & wow Ais can tell Atcher is a spirit immediately, amazing chapter as usual, really curious how this story ends
5/5 c17
18Yoshiki-909
Archer and Ais influence
Positive: Ais grows a level higher to her Canon Self from Archer's healthy meals and Combat tips.
Neutral: Ais visits Astrea Familia more often.
Negative: Ais calls him Mama Archer. (Rival to Mama Mia). Ask Archer for a Fae or Wind Elemental Sword Noble Phantasm.

Archer and Ais influence
Positive: Ais grows a level higher to her Canon Self from Archer's healthy meals and Combat tips.
Neutral: Ais visits Astrea Familia more often.
Negative: Ais calls him Mama Archer. (Rival to Mama Mia). Ask Archer for a Fae or Wind Elemental Sword Noble Phantasm.
5/5 c17 Dman4869
I really enjoyed the different perspective here. I wonder what why it would be bad for Archer to remind Ais of her mother. Archer's maternal nature is too strong haha. I guess it doesn't help that he's also a spirit as well. My wish of Ais being attached/seeing Archer in a parental role is rising! I hope Archer is able to convince Alfia to stand down with the lure of his food. Haha thank you so much for all your hard work writing this as always!
I really enjoyed the different perspective here. I wonder what why it would be bad for Archer to remind Ais of her mother. Archer's maternal nature is too strong haha. I guess it doesn't help that he's also a spirit as well. My wish of Ais being attached/seeing Archer in a parental role is rising! I hope Archer is able to convince Alfia to stand down with the lure of his food. Haha thank you so much for all your hard work writing this as always!
4/23 c7 Kdosf
What utter bullshit. A level 3 keeping up with a servant. Nevermind a counter guardian
What utter bullshit. A level 3 keeping up with a servant. Nevermind a counter guardian
4/4 c16 Guest
Nice
Nice
4/6 c15 Falvern
Man Archer is really nerfed in this. It's hard to believe that this is the same guy who killed Heracles six times, in six different ways, without even using his Reality Marble.
Man Archer is really nerfed in this. It's hard to believe that this is the same guy who killed Heracles six times, in six different ways, without even using his Reality Marble.
4/6 c16
2TheSlySage
this was a cute fluffy chapter. i approve lol
i wanna see Archer training the littles. little Ais especially. soo cute must protect.
he could open a dojo/restaurant combo lol

this was a cute fluffy chapter. i approve lol
i wanna see Archer training the littles. little Ais especially. soo cute must protect.
he could open a dojo/restaurant combo lol
4/6 c16
18Yoshiki-909
Archer prepares a Kid's Meal (like the one in Isekai Shokudou) for little Ais, only for the girls to ask for the same thing.
Little Ais: "I will only eat Archer's food from now on." (Eats Archer's Curry Bun)

Archer prepares a Kid's Meal (like the one in Isekai Shokudou) for little Ais, only for the girls to ask for the same thing.
Little Ais: "I will only eat Archer's food from now on." (Eats Archer's Curry Bun)
4/4 c1 avilasamantha
The writing style is both vivid and compelling, effortlessly drawing the audience into the world the author has created. The pacing is well-managed, allowing moments of intensity to shine while giving space for reflection and character growth. Themes are thoughtfully explored, making the story not just entertaining but also meaningful.. .
The writing style is both vivid and compelling, effortlessly drawing the audience into the world the author has created. The pacing is well-managed, allowing moments of intensity to shine while giving space for reflection and character growth. Themes are thoughtfully explored, making the story not just entertaining but also meaningful.. .
4/4 c16
17Ignisha
Oooh, I completely forgot that Riveria had her VA changed sometime between 2016 and 2017. And her VA since is the same VA for Saber? Wow!
The god Eren... Was there a god like that? Hmm... The plot thickens...!

Oooh, I completely forgot that Riveria had her VA changed sometime between 2016 and 2017. And her VA since is the same VA for Saber? Wow!
The god Eren... Was there a god like that? Hmm... The plot thickens...!
4/4 c16 Dman4869
Hell yeah I'm glad that Archer has a job as the potato stand worker. The owner lucked out. Nice seeing previous characters reintroduced. Was that Eren from AOT? I have a feeling Ais, Riveria and Archer are gonna see each other more often. I would love to have Ais see Archer as an Uncle or father figure for her. Man I didn't even notice that Artoria and Riveria sharing the same VA. That's pretty neat. Not sure if this was a typo but is Riveria a level 7 in this? Thank you so much for all your hard work writing this as always!
Hell yeah I'm glad that Archer has a job as the potato stand worker. The owner lucked out. Nice seeing previous characters reintroduced. Was that Eren from AOT? I have a feeling Ais, Riveria and Archer are gonna see each other more often. I would love to have Ais see Archer as an Uncle or father figure for her. Man I didn't even notice that Artoria and Riveria sharing the same VA. That's pretty neat. Not sure if this was a typo but is Riveria a level 7 in this? Thank you so much for all your hard work writing this as always!