for Is it wrong to join Justice?9/8/2023 c1 Guest
Now this is an interesting fanfic. I hope you would continue this with more chapters.
Just in case you're not aware, there's a Ruler Class Pseudo-Servant who's also named Astraea in the body of Luviagelita Edelfelt summoned by Ritsuka Fujimaru in the Grand Orders of Fate/Grand Order. Archer might wonder if the Astraea in front of him is the same one who possessed Luvia's body. But he will quickly notice that their personalities are different. The Astraea in front him is not a professional wrestler. Although, it would be amusing to see Astraea's reaction of knowing that there's a Servant who has the same name as her.
I can't wait for Archer to interact with the members of the Astraea Familia. He could see Ryuu as his younger self and Kaguya as himself. One wants to save everyone and the other believes in saving the masses over the few. What a nostalgic clash between ideals. The two mages, Ryana and Celty, would be interested and curious in the topic about Magecraft and Magic Circuit from Archer. It would be interesting to see their reaction upon tasting Archer's cooking.
I'm looking forward for the next chapter, hopefully longer than the first chapter. Keep moving forward. Thank you.
Now this is an interesting fanfic. I hope you would continue this with more chapters.
Just in case you're not aware, there's a Ruler Class Pseudo-Servant who's also named Astraea in the body of Luviagelita Edelfelt summoned by Ritsuka Fujimaru in the Grand Orders of Fate/Grand Order. Archer might wonder if the Astraea in front of him is the same one who possessed Luvia's body. But he will quickly notice that their personalities are different. The Astraea in front him is not a professional wrestler. Although, it would be amusing to see Astraea's reaction of knowing that there's a Servant who has the same name as her.
I can't wait for Archer to interact with the members of the Astraea Familia. He could see Ryuu as his younger self and Kaguya as himself. One wants to save everyone and the other believes in saving the masses over the few. What a nostalgic clash between ideals. The two mages, Ryana and Celty, would be interested and curious in the topic about Magecraft and Magic Circuit from Archer. It would be interesting to see their reaction upon tasting Archer's cooking.
I'm looking forward for the next chapter, hopefully longer than the first chapter. Keep moving forward. Thank you.
9/7/2023 c1 Guest
interesting story
interesting story
9/7/2023 c1 DungeonMaster
Here are the mistakes you made in the chapter:
1.- The meme about rank E luck is bad: That's fanon, rank E luck is not bad but it's just a cringe meme/joke that unfortunately became very common to use in Fate Series fanfics.
2.- If this Emiya was at the FGO events, then he shouldn't be surprised by the large amounts of mana in the environment.
Here are the mistakes you made in the chapter:
1.- The meme about rank E luck is bad: That's fanon, rank E luck is not bad but it's just a cringe meme/joke that unfortunately became very common to use in Fate Series fanfics.
2.- If this Emiya was at the FGO events, then he shouldn't be surprised by the large amounts of mana in the environment.
9/7/2023 c1 Anon
While that is true that when heroic spirit are summoned they are supposed to have no memories of their previous time being summoned. But their are exceptions to the rules such as extreme emotion such as when Avicebron betrayed his master/student it left him with deep feelings of regret that it carried it with him each time he is summoned making him slightly more humbled. Their is also Artoria Pendragon a heroic spirit who is still alive in Avalon depending on the timeline. Their are always exceptions to the rules. Who to say that a counter guardian can retain the memory of all their previous summons outside of a Holy Grail War.
While that is true that when heroic spirit are summoned they are supposed to have no memories of their previous time being summoned. But their are exceptions to the rules such as extreme emotion such as when Avicebron betrayed his master/student it left him with deep feelings of regret that it carried it with him each time he is summoned making him slightly more humbled. Their is also Artoria Pendragon a heroic spirit who is still alive in Avalon depending on the timeline. Their are always exceptions to the rules. Who to say that a counter guardian can retain the memory of all their previous summons outside of a Holy Grail War.
9/7/2023 c1 Guest
Good introduction and I see that you did your homework on both universes it seems. I am looking forward to see how far this story goes.
Good introduction and I see that you did your homework on both universes it seems. I am looking forward to see how far this story goes.
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