for Is it wrong to join Justice?6/2 c9 Dash6217
You could just make them both masters as there were over 100 and some did survive the explosion so instead of 1 being fine you and safe from the explosion you can make it 2. Love the chapter though wish it would update more frequently
You could just make them both masters as there were over 100 and some did survive the explosion so instead of 1 being fine you and safe from the explosion you can make it 2. Love the chapter though wish it would update more frequently
6/2 c9 Dman4869
Yooo welcome back. I hope you are doing well. Please take a break if you feel burnt out. Thanks for all your hard work writing this!
Yooo welcome back. I hope you are doing well. Please take a break if you feel burnt out. Thanks for all your hard work writing this!
6/2 c9 vinayakdj1
Did you use chatgpt to write this chapter? No one can be this bad at writing a decent story, right? Sure this is a platform for ppl to brush up their skills but still...felt weird to me. Like something was off
Did you use chatgpt to write this chapter? No one can be this bad at writing a decent story, right? Sure this is a platform for ppl to brush up their skills but still...felt weird to me. Like something was off
5/24 c8 Axcel Allen
Update Please. This is one of the few good Fate x Danmachi fics out there so please update this.
Update Please. This is one of the few good Fate x Danmachi fics out there so please update this.
4/29 c5 Adilek-Vas
This is upsetting that after roughly 2 months there are no more updates... I am quite worried. I was nonchalant when one user left a comment about, the last seen 9 years ago... I was really enjoying this fanfic, and had no objections rather than power level. Well lets hope, author I hope you really do not get burned out.
This is upsetting that after roughly 2 months there are no more updates... I am quite worried. I was nonchalant when one user left a comment about, the last seen 9 years ago... I was really enjoying this fanfic, and had no objections rather than power level. Well lets hope, author I hope you really do not get burned out.
3/13 c8 
1kailol
"elevators doesn’t exists in the age of gods"
me to everyone else: ooh... how to we tell em?
1kailol"elevators doesn’t exists in the age of gods"
me to everyone else: ooh... how to we tell em?
3/9 c1 Guest
You do know the suicide style isn't canon right ? His has good defense even better as hes stated to block lancer cu's attacks instantly
You do know the suicide style isn't canon right ? His has good defense even better as hes stated to block lancer cu's attacks instantly
3/8 c8 Star
Why do you do this?
You write something and then voice an opinion like it's supposed to convince your audience...
Like for example: tsubaki makes up some boring statement to try to convince Archer to try his hand at smithing... Now instead of letting your readers decide if they liked what they read, you make statements like Archer got convinced!
Wtf. You know how big of a yawn I had at that part? And that's just one of the section of one of the chapters. You already wrote 8 chapters...so you can imagine just how many 'head shaking' moments r there in this story.
Lame plot progression. Boring interactions. Making decisive statements that don't resonate with the readers. Uninteresting power scaling. Repetitive dialogue.
Not to mention, Archer doesn't even question as to why this alien fantasy like world has gods from his own world instead of brand new ones...
For a free fanfiction, sure it's not unreadable, but there is room, or in this case, amphitheatre, for improvement
Why do you do this?
You write something and then voice an opinion like it's supposed to convince your audience...
Like for example: tsubaki makes up some boring statement to try to convince Archer to try his hand at smithing... Now instead of letting your readers decide if they liked what they read, you make statements like Archer got convinced!
Wtf. You know how big of a yawn I had at that part? And that's just one of the section of one of the chapters. You already wrote 8 chapters...so you can imagine just how many 'head shaking' moments r there in this story.
Lame plot progression. Boring interactions. Making decisive statements that don't resonate with the readers. Uninteresting power scaling. Repetitive dialogue.
Not to mention, Archer doesn't even question as to why this alien fantasy like world has gods from his own world instead of brand new ones...
For a free fanfiction, sure it's not unreadable, but there is room, or in this case, amphitheatre, for improvement
3/8 c8 Guest
Yeah what you said is true a person begins from level 1 unless they have a falna or some form of divinity beforehand but many people love to automatically put their characters at high levels like a transfer over. Yeah scaling is going to suck in this because even the weakest servant would thrash Ottar. Since this is during the dark age you should have Archer meet Alfia (Bell’s Aunt) and save her as he has the tools to do it.
Yeah what you said is true a person begins from level 1 unless they have a falna or some form of divinity beforehand but many people love to automatically put their characters at high levels like a transfer over. Yeah scaling is going to suck in this because even the weakest servant would thrash Ottar. Since this is during the dark age you should have Archer meet Alfia (Bell’s Aunt) and save her as he has the tools to do it.
3/8 c8 Star
Has basic info on source material of both media...
Writes a fanfic anyways...
Gets heat from reader...
Tries to please them instead of just going ahead with his idea...
Gets burned out but commits to still finishing the work...
Last seen 9 years ago...
Has basic info on source material of both media...
Writes a fanfic anyways...
Gets heat from reader...
Tries to please them instead of just going ahead with his idea...
Gets burned out but commits to still finishing the work...
Last seen 9 years ago...
3/8 c8 NoName2099
Well, I will say that you have the right idea. In the Danmachi Lore, Falna does not take into consideration the battle experience and current strength of the individual when first receiving the Falna. So Archer would be a level 1 with stats at zero (Finn trained with monks before receiving his Falna and he started as a level 1 with stats at zero).
Ignore Danmachi fanfics that have protagonists who are not a level 1 when receiving the Falna for the first time. That's bull shit that some writers do for some reason I don't understand.
Well, I will say that you have the right idea. In the Danmachi Lore, Falna does not take into consideration the battle experience and current strength of the individual when first receiving the Falna. So Archer would be a level 1 with stats at zero (Finn trained with monks before receiving his Falna and he started as a level 1 with stats at zero).
Ignore Danmachi fanfics that have protagonists who are not a level 1 when receiving the Falna for the first time. That's bull shit that some writers do for some reason I don't understand.