for Is it wrong to join Justice?3/9 c8 Gilgamesh50
Great Chapter
But can you make archer more uhh di the word be bount? Harsh with his words? Like in the series still loved it Great Chapter again
Great Chapter
But can you make archer more uhh di the word be bount? Harsh with his words? Like in the series still loved it Great Chapter again
3/8 c8 Dman4869
I really like the dynamic between Archer and Astrea. She's a good Master/goddess. I'm really curious to how Hephaestus/other smiths would react to Archer's reality marble/ heroic weapons. Thanks for all your hard work writing this as always!
I really like the dynamic between Archer and Astrea. She's a good Master/goddess. I'm really curious to how Hephaestus/other smiths would react to Archer's reality marble/ heroic weapons. Thanks for all your hard work writing this as always!
3/8 c7 S290138
Ummmmmmmmmmmm nooooo a level 3 adventure is no where near the level of a servant not even one of archers (relatively weak power level)
Ummmmmmmmmmmm nooooo a level 3 adventure is no where near the level of a servant not even one of archers (relatively weak power level)
3/8 c8 DragonTetho
Ey, to be honest there's a really huge huge huge chance that EMIYA Shirou is a Muramasa so hehehe he is now inheriting the Old Man's wish and goal then.
Ey, to be honest there's a really huge huge huge chance that EMIYA Shirou is a Muramasa so hehehe he is now inheriting the Old Man's wish and goal then.
3/8 c3 mysticalvoid111
Pretty sure it's more plausible that both Archer and Astraea actually talked about their current situation right after going in their familia HQ, preferably in private. Also, I think she would have at least noticed Archer's spiritual nature and their link. Well, hopefully, these are tackled in the next chapters.
Pretty sure it's more plausible that both Archer and Astraea actually talked about their current situation right after going in their familia HQ, preferably in private. Also, I think she would have at least noticed Archer's spiritual nature and their link. Well, hopefully, these are tackled in the next chapters.
3/8 c8 Mwrodach
give us an omake where after receiving a falna, it shows that Archer's first skill is Harem Protagonist EX
ALSO GREAT CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE TO DROP
give us an omake where after receiving a falna, it shows that Archer's first skill is Harem Protagonist EX
ALSO GREAT CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE TO DROP
3/8 c8 Shen1412
Well if you are going to get him a falna, it would be like Heroic Myth, stats just go up…. Very slowly
Great chapter as usual looking forward for next one
Well if you are going to get him a falna, it would be like Heroic Myth, stats just go up…. Very slowly
Great chapter as usual looking forward for next one
2/29 c6 Adilek-Vas
By the way, do not think your storytelling is bad or smth like that. Tbh I really enjoyed this slow development of the story that pays attention to the regular and leisurely life of Archer and others more, at least in the beginning without any rushing issues or unnecessary drama so surprisingly I enjoyed reading this slow development that starts with Archer getting used to new conditions and new acquaintances.
About the other positive aspects of this story. Firstly, someone actually had some brain cells to not add Bell Cranel to the story, at least not in the beginning, and hope not at all. As far as I understand this story is way before the actual beginning of the story, so there is going to be no canon MC from anime. You can make the story without touching main characters from anime and novels so there will be no issue with: A) the fans of canon MC that definitely would have several questions, B) you can make the story without even worrying about possible story holes, etc. The main issue of all crossovers is that the original canon MC becomes... well secondary character at best?
Secondly, you chose the goddess and characters that have no original impact (except Ryu but she is the best girl in anime so yeah, I am not complaining at all), so you can make the story as impossible, absurd, or unlogical as you wish. So you can forget about the original plot and make your preferred "original plot". It is the best decision because in that case, no one would complain. Your story starts before the original plot and uses non-original characters, however, I am pretty sure that one white-haired goddess will hunt, ironically, another specifically white-haired man.))
Thirdly, you do not use the cliche of GOD KNOWS how, but somehow Holy fuck*ng Grail that obviously could call the soul of heroes from completely another dimension was laying in the middle of a definitely non-suspicious room, or even worse, in the dirt among a pile of shit and sticks. It is ironically, one of the best decisions that you could actually make. Because, in that case, it seems more like: "You are the luckiest person because now you can summon at least 7 servants that possibly together could erase from existence everyone in this world without the slightest effort from their sides". However, the cliche of definitely a nonrandom circle that just happens to be able to call forth the servant from another parallel world was drawn in the same place where the Goddess hid and “accidentally” put her hand on. In that case, it would have been better if you would choose another... approach. Instead of a magical circle, it would have been better if the Goddess in case of a death-life scenario as you described in the beginning unconsciously could call force her goddess abilities and summon the hero of the same attribute as hers - justice. STILL, I am not going to lie, at the very least, your approach has at least meaning, cause Archer came only because of pleading for help to save her.
Fourthly, you make the Archer not like an antisocial, super sarcastic, and dead-inside crybaby that hates everything nearly related to justice and works as a machine. I mean, I guess most fanfic readers just do not get the whole point of the character of Archer. He does not think that helping others is wrong and just wants to erase himself from existence because he is a crybaby and all fault is Alayas. As far as I love the idea of possessive Alaya just going full yandere/yangire on Archer and that sole reason why she always uses Archer to massacre another 10-100 thousand people just to see his suffering because of her twisted love, Archer is actually never thought of himself like a machine or blame Alaya for this. The reason why Emiya tried to kill Shirou, is because he cared about his past self, and seeing the suffering worse than hell itself, just wanted to grand quick salvation from a life of empty shell that lost everything on the Great Fire. This IS NOT because of all this hero of Justice shit, no because Shirou never wanted to be the hero in the first place and just tried to imitate one person who saved him, while leaving behind the people that genuinely were concerned about him (Taiga, Rin, Sakura, and Issei) and giving his whole afterlife for lives of mere hundreds all while being killed by the same saved ones. This life has no meaning and will only bring suffering not only to the close ones but to the countless other lives that Archer killed himself and thus will be killed by Shirou in the future. Also, another aspect that everyone seems to misunderstand, is that Archer actually was never sarcastic or loved mocking others. Archer in the wars was serious and fought using logic and rational approaches to achieve the goal. He never was sarcastic, just straightforward with his thoughts, and NEVER mocked anyone, well except Shirou, kek. The Cu is also another exception because his main aim is to hurt his pride and make him fight with rage and hatred towards him, thus giving Archer the upper hand in combat. So the whole idea of Archer being sarcastic and cynical is a full fanon thing that has no connection with Archer's character itself. Hell, it was perfectly shown in FGO, as Archer was carefree and happy outside of Grail War. The only reason he behaved differently on Holy Wars, is because of the situation itself. He was called forth to fight with a legend from the past, holding no real power, being summoned even though it is impossible to summon CG in Holy Wars, while also taking into account that enemies are walking apocalypses for the world itself. Archer was just fully concentrated on the objective, defeating all enemy servants, while trying to save as much as possible taking into account that the world could perish, so the lives of people even of the whole city do not have much of a price in contrast to the whole world itself.
Fifthly, at least, I hope, you do not include other servants and will just keep Archer as the main protagonist and SOLE servant. It actually becomes really irritating when the story has more than one servant moreover USUSALLY the other servants are either Gil, Gu, or God-Forsaken Artoria. I really hate this whole Artoria and Archer being close and being lovers etc. IT was already stated by the author that even though EMIYA called forth Artoria, he was not close and had no feelings towards Artoria and thus never loved her. Hell, the whole existence of Archer is another way of telling that only love could save Shirou and give a happy ending for him, and if Shirou could not love someone out of 3 of the main heroins, then he becomes Archer, the proof is one of the endings of Heavens Feels, where Shirou killed Sakura by himself while his hairs were like Archers - pure white and his face showed little to no emotions. So at least now, there are no additional servants currently and this already puts your story at least on top of 90% of all fanfictions.
So NOW, I really hope that you do not forget about the abilities of Gods (AT LEAST as far as I know Freya has the ability to see the human souls) to see the souls of humans. So I am really excited and waiting for Freya's monologue about her desire to see his soul once more, after all, it is not every day that you see the whole world with countless swords inside human beings' souls. Also, considering that once the inner world changes you can make few decisions. For example, if you take Archer from the UBW finale then his UBW should have clean skies after he told that he would try hard again, regaining his hope and desire to strive for an impossible dream and he should transform from the sword with rust to the sword from the glass again. If you pay attention to Archer from FGO after level-ups then you will understand. Another decision is to make so that Archer through his journey will again find a reason to fight and start loving his ideals once again, thus as was told regain his pure soul with the intention of becoming the hero of justice once more. Therefore, his soul again goes from pure steel to pure glass with child-like innocence and desire to save as much as he can, while creating a world where nobody will shed tears anymore. MAN, YOU HAVE TONS OF OPPORTUNITIES TO MAKE THE BEST FANFICTION. The whole Danmachi is actually suited for Archer the best if you think carefully.
Well, whatever, I have only one suggestion to change the beginning so that Archer will have a human body and can become a hero in this world and become the proper Heroic Spirit and escape from Yandere Alaya, KEK. :)))) In total, I like everything, from the fact that Archer actually attracts a lot of female characters, he is GARCHER for a reason after all, and with the fact that his Goddess is the Goddess of Justice, talk about irony lol. Even if you do not change, it will make no difference for me, kek, I will definitely still wait for future updates.
By the way, do not think your storytelling is bad or smth like that. Tbh I really enjoyed this slow development of the story that pays attention to the regular and leisurely life of Archer and others more, at least in the beginning without any rushing issues or unnecessary drama so surprisingly I enjoyed reading this slow development that starts with Archer getting used to new conditions and new acquaintances.
About the other positive aspects of this story. Firstly, someone actually had some brain cells to not add Bell Cranel to the story, at least not in the beginning, and hope not at all. As far as I understand this story is way before the actual beginning of the story, so there is going to be no canon MC from anime. You can make the story without touching main characters from anime and novels so there will be no issue with: A) the fans of canon MC that definitely would have several questions, B) you can make the story without even worrying about possible story holes, etc. The main issue of all crossovers is that the original canon MC becomes... well secondary character at best?
Secondly, you chose the goddess and characters that have no original impact (except Ryu but she is the best girl in anime so yeah, I am not complaining at all), so you can make the story as impossible, absurd, or unlogical as you wish. So you can forget about the original plot and make your preferred "original plot". It is the best decision because in that case, no one would complain. Your story starts before the original plot and uses non-original characters, however, I am pretty sure that one white-haired goddess will hunt, ironically, another specifically white-haired man.))
Thirdly, you do not use the cliche of GOD KNOWS how, but somehow Holy fuck*ng Grail that obviously could call the soul of heroes from completely another dimension was laying in the middle of a definitely non-suspicious room, or even worse, in the dirt among a pile of shit and sticks. It is ironically, one of the best decisions that you could actually make. Because, in that case, it seems more like: "You are the luckiest person because now you can summon at least 7 servants that possibly together could erase from existence everyone in this world without the slightest effort from their sides". However, the cliche of definitely a nonrandom circle that just happens to be able to call forth the servant from another parallel world was drawn in the same place where the Goddess hid and “accidentally” put her hand on. In that case, it would have been better if you would choose another... approach. Instead of a magical circle, it would have been better if the Goddess in case of a death-life scenario as you described in the beginning unconsciously could call force her goddess abilities and summon the hero of the same attribute as hers - justice. STILL, I am not going to lie, at the very least, your approach has at least meaning, cause Archer came only because of pleading for help to save her.
Fourthly, you make the Archer not like an antisocial, super sarcastic, and dead-inside crybaby that hates everything nearly related to justice and works as a machine. I mean, I guess most fanfic readers just do not get the whole point of the character of Archer. He does not think that helping others is wrong and just wants to erase himself from existence because he is a crybaby and all fault is Alayas. As far as I love the idea of possessive Alaya just going full yandere/yangire on Archer and that sole reason why she always uses Archer to massacre another 10-100 thousand people just to see his suffering because of her twisted love, Archer is actually never thought of himself like a machine or blame Alaya for this. The reason why Emiya tried to kill Shirou, is because he cared about his past self, and seeing the suffering worse than hell itself, just wanted to grand quick salvation from a life of empty shell that lost everything on the Great Fire. This IS NOT because of all this hero of Justice shit, no because Shirou never wanted to be the hero in the first place and just tried to imitate one person who saved him, while leaving behind the people that genuinely were concerned about him (Taiga, Rin, Sakura, and Issei) and giving his whole afterlife for lives of mere hundreds all while being killed by the same saved ones. This life has no meaning and will only bring suffering not only to the close ones but to the countless other lives that Archer killed himself and thus will be killed by Shirou in the future. Also, another aspect that everyone seems to misunderstand, is that Archer actually was never sarcastic or loved mocking others. Archer in the wars was serious and fought using logic and rational approaches to achieve the goal. He never was sarcastic, just straightforward with his thoughts, and NEVER mocked anyone, well except Shirou, kek. The Cu is also another exception because his main aim is to hurt his pride and make him fight with rage and hatred towards him, thus giving Archer the upper hand in combat. So the whole idea of Archer being sarcastic and cynical is a full fanon thing that has no connection with Archer's character itself. Hell, it was perfectly shown in FGO, as Archer was carefree and happy outside of Grail War. The only reason he behaved differently on Holy Wars, is because of the situation itself. He was called forth to fight with a legend from the past, holding no real power, being summoned even though it is impossible to summon CG in Holy Wars, while also taking into account that enemies are walking apocalypses for the world itself. Archer was just fully concentrated on the objective, defeating all enemy servants, while trying to save as much as possible taking into account that the world could perish, so the lives of people even of the whole city do not have much of a price in contrast to the whole world itself.
Fifthly, at least, I hope, you do not include other servants and will just keep Archer as the main protagonist and SOLE servant. It actually becomes really irritating when the story has more than one servant moreover USUSALLY the other servants are either Gil, Gu, or God-Forsaken Artoria. I really hate this whole Artoria and Archer being close and being lovers etc. IT was already stated by the author that even though EMIYA called forth Artoria, he was not close and had no feelings towards Artoria and thus never loved her. Hell, the whole existence of Archer is another way of telling that only love could save Shirou and give a happy ending for him, and if Shirou could not love someone out of 3 of the main heroins, then he becomes Archer, the proof is one of the endings of Heavens Feels, where Shirou killed Sakura by himself while his hairs were like Archers - pure white and his face showed little to no emotions. So at least now, there are no additional servants currently and this already puts your story at least on top of 90% of all fanfictions.
So NOW, I really hope that you do not forget about the abilities of Gods (AT LEAST as far as I know Freya has the ability to see the human souls) to see the souls of humans. So I am really excited and waiting for Freya's monologue about her desire to see his soul once more, after all, it is not every day that you see the whole world with countless swords inside human beings' souls. Also, considering that once the inner world changes you can make few decisions. For example, if you take Archer from the UBW finale then his UBW should have clean skies after he told that he would try hard again, regaining his hope and desire to strive for an impossible dream and he should transform from the sword with rust to the sword from the glass again. If you pay attention to Archer from FGO after level-ups then you will understand. Another decision is to make so that Archer through his journey will again find a reason to fight and start loving his ideals once again, thus as was told regain his pure soul with the intention of becoming the hero of justice once more. Therefore, his soul again goes from pure steel to pure glass with child-like innocence and desire to save as much as he can, while creating a world where nobody will shed tears anymore. MAN, YOU HAVE TONS OF OPPORTUNITIES TO MAKE THE BEST FANFICTION. The whole Danmachi is actually suited for Archer the best if you think carefully.
Well, whatever, I have only one suggestion to change the beginning so that Archer will have a human body and can become a hero in this world and become the proper Heroic Spirit and escape from Yandere Alaya, KEK. :)))) In total, I like everything, from the fact that Archer actually attracts a lot of female characters, he is GARCHER for a reason after all, and with the fact that his Goddess is the Goddess of Justice, talk about irony lol. Even if you do not change, it will make no difference for me, kek, I will definitely still wait for future updates.
2/29 c7 Adilek-Vas
Well, first of all, PLEASE do not abandon the fanfiction/writing at this point due to some mistakes, cause I really love the idea of putting Archer into the Danmachi world that essentially circles around the idea of being a hero, and who can be a better hero, than the Archer that wants to save others but was forced to kill everyone, so giving him a chance be a hero again is really good. Right now I guess it is just better to rewrite the part with the description of the fight, cause it makes no sense that some 3rd lvl adventure has B-rank strength. Still please do not pay too much attention to your first mistake and the harsh response afterwards from a lot of users.
"For servants with rank B strength, we could use too the feat of Quetz lifting and throwing away Mardux axe who have the weight equivalent of the city of Eridu, (The Axe of Marduk is a divine weapon shown in the Babylonia Singularity. Its size is enormous and its weight is equivalent to the city of Eridu)" - this is literally was shown in the game and anime source as well.
So when you tell that 3rd-level adventure has the strength to lift the fu**ing axe that size of the city... well the servants are doomed if faced with level 7, I am sure that even beasts will be like puppies in contrast to the Gigachad adventures. Well, if seriously, even 7 level adventures should not be that much of an issue, if not at all, for Archer, cause this guy literally severed the Hercules himself like 6-7 times while being in the non-primal condition of both terrains (he was forced to fight close combat while being archer with low strength against literally fuc**ng Hercules himself, also in small rooms that do not help to even take out bow) and physically being injured from Saber attack, also using only his mana and relying on independent action.
Tbh, it is essentially hard to even imagine the threat that could be impossible or really hard for Archer in Danmachi. Except might be the dragon cause it is a dragon even if Archer has a lot of swords that could obliterate the dragon in pieces in lore, I guess that this dragon will obliterate Archer instead without any issues, kek. Still, I am not sure, cause as far as I remember, it was not stated the total threat level of the dragon or described others than "terrorized the civilians, destroyed the cities, etc". So yeah it was doomed from the beginning that you made the Archer a servant. Would be actually believable if you made as one fanfiction of "NimtheWriter", where he made the body from flesh and blood(still connected to CF) so Archer to not be too OP for Kuroinu timeline.
In that case, even this fight will be actually pretty enjoyable cause with this fight Archer would understand that he needs more power and join the family to start obtaining Falna. So I really strongly recommend rewriting the beginning and making it so that Archer does not have a "servant ghost body" but rather a body from flesh and blood. You just literally need to change only begging and parts with being a servant to the human body. Cause otherwise, it will be... unbelievable and even non-canonical to the stat-wise of servants compared to regular adventures. NO REALLY, please consider making this, so you can make the EMIYA as strong or weak as you want. Also, in that case, Archer actually has 2 opportunities: Join the family officially and make a "new legend" for himself in this world so that he could escape Alaya and become a proper Heroic Spirit there. It is better because otherwise you are pretty much going to add other servants and... it will bring 2 issues: Again with the stat-wise issues cause it is even more impossible for other servants due to them being just absurdly strong, and the issue again with the ton of servants that going to be either weak or just... well sorry but this concept is already too boring. Most of us readers came here solely for Archer not for other servants. Well, you guys can argue with this if you actually do, I may be wrong but I am really fed up with the cliche - tons of servants and just fighting between them, or making servants so that they can be secondary characters needed only to highlight MC or make MC better in contrast, etc.
Other than that it is quite funny and actually even believable. By the way, I do not understand the guys who say smth like: "Also it feels like you have never interacted with the fairer sex with how every girl is either smiling brightly or blushing". Well even in-game it was stated (well if I am correct cause played this game like 4 years ago) that Amazon warriors were distracted by the look of Archer, also considering that he has a physique that could be described as "God-like or peak of human body" surpassing even warriors like Cu Chulain while having the enormously strong and huge bust, that ironically bigger than Kiaras. and having armor that actually highlights his muscles. Taking into account his cooking and cleaning skills... well why not? Hell, I am sure that if you make even a guy go Gar for him it will be actually understandable.))))))))))
Also, do not pay attention to the sh*t-talk like this: "Also not even a day in this new world, and already Archer is cooking, helping citizens, fighting crooks, and cleaning a whole familia manor!". I guess they do not understand that Archer firstly, is in the house that has only girls, and secondly, Archer right now is literally a homeless guy who by the way needs to be close to Goddess and protect her from possible threats or other possible servants so he supposed to stay at home. So the least you can do is to show that you can be useful at home and that they can keep him, it kills 2 problems: The reason to stay as near as possible to Goddess, and to avoid discrimination or any negative comments from other girls in the house and avoid future confrontations. So you did a really good job in this part so do not take it too personally. Also, as far as we know Archer actually quite enjoy it on his own so it is now that he is out of character, people do not understand that reason why EMIYA was acting in the way he acted in Fate UBW na d Heavens Feel, is solely due to Holy Grail War, and he was taking seriously the threat of 7 legendary and super dangerous beings that's why acted as harsh as possible. Currently, EMIYA is literally only Servant so... why bother and be serious or wary?
Well, first of all, PLEASE do not abandon the fanfiction/writing at this point due to some mistakes, cause I really love the idea of putting Archer into the Danmachi world that essentially circles around the idea of being a hero, and who can be a better hero, than the Archer that wants to save others but was forced to kill everyone, so giving him a chance be a hero again is really good. Right now I guess it is just better to rewrite the part with the description of the fight, cause it makes no sense that some 3rd lvl adventure has B-rank strength. Still please do not pay too much attention to your first mistake and the harsh response afterwards from a lot of users.
"For servants with rank B strength, we could use too the feat of Quetz lifting and throwing away Mardux axe who have the weight equivalent of the city of Eridu, (The Axe of Marduk is a divine weapon shown in the Babylonia Singularity. Its size is enormous and its weight is equivalent to the city of Eridu)" - this is literally was shown in the game and anime source as well.
So when you tell that 3rd-level adventure has the strength to lift the fu**ing axe that size of the city... well the servants are doomed if faced with level 7, I am sure that even beasts will be like puppies in contrast to the Gigachad adventures. Well, if seriously, even 7 level adventures should not be that much of an issue, if not at all, for Archer, cause this guy literally severed the Hercules himself like 6-7 times while being in the non-primal condition of both terrains (he was forced to fight close combat while being archer with low strength against literally fuc**ng Hercules himself, also in small rooms that do not help to even take out bow) and physically being injured from Saber attack, also using only his mana and relying on independent action.
Tbh, it is essentially hard to even imagine the threat that could be impossible or really hard for Archer in Danmachi. Except might be the dragon cause it is a dragon even if Archer has a lot of swords that could obliterate the dragon in pieces in lore, I guess that this dragon will obliterate Archer instead without any issues, kek. Still, I am not sure, cause as far as I remember, it was not stated the total threat level of the dragon or described others than "terrorized the civilians, destroyed the cities, etc". So yeah it was doomed from the beginning that you made the Archer a servant. Would be actually believable if you made as one fanfiction of "NimtheWriter", where he made the body from flesh and blood(still connected to CF) so Archer to not be too OP for Kuroinu timeline.
In that case, even this fight will be actually pretty enjoyable cause with this fight Archer would understand that he needs more power and join the family to start obtaining Falna. So I really strongly recommend rewriting the beginning and making it so that Archer does not have a "servant ghost body" but rather a body from flesh and blood. You just literally need to change only begging and parts with being a servant to the human body. Cause otherwise, it will be... unbelievable and even non-canonical to the stat-wise of servants compared to regular adventures. NO REALLY, please consider making this, so you can make the EMIYA as strong or weak as you want. Also, in that case, Archer actually has 2 opportunities: Join the family officially and make a "new legend" for himself in this world so that he could escape Alaya and become a proper Heroic Spirit there. It is better because otherwise you are pretty much going to add other servants and... it will bring 2 issues: Again with the stat-wise issues cause it is even more impossible for other servants due to them being just absurdly strong, and the issue again with the ton of servants that going to be either weak or just... well sorry but this concept is already too boring. Most of us readers came here solely for Archer not for other servants. Well, you guys can argue with this if you actually do, I may be wrong but I am really fed up with the cliche - tons of servants and just fighting between them, or making servants so that they can be secondary characters needed only to highlight MC or make MC better in contrast, etc.
Other than that it is quite funny and actually even believable. By the way, I do not understand the guys who say smth like: "Also it feels like you have never interacted with the fairer sex with how every girl is either smiling brightly or blushing". Well even in-game it was stated (well if I am correct cause played this game like 4 years ago) that Amazon warriors were distracted by the look of Archer, also considering that he has a physique that could be described as "God-like or peak of human body" surpassing even warriors like Cu Chulain while having the enormously strong and huge bust, that ironically bigger than Kiaras. and having armor that actually highlights his muscles. Taking into account his cooking and cleaning skills... well why not? Hell, I am sure that if you make even a guy go Gar for him it will be actually understandable.))))))))))
Also, do not pay attention to the sh*t-talk like this: "Also not even a day in this new world, and already Archer is cooking, helping citizens, fighting crooks, and cleaning a whole familia manor!". I guess they do not understand that Archer firstly, is in the house that has only girls, and secondly, Archer right now is literally a homeless guy who by the way needs to be close to Goddess and protect her from possible threats or other possible servants so he supposed to stay at home. So the least you can do is to show that you can be useful at home and that they can keep him, it kills 2 problems: The reason to stay as near as possible to Goddess, and to avoid discrimination or any negative comments from other girls in the house and avoid future confrontations. So you did a really good job in this part so do not take it too personally. Also, as far as we know Archer actually quite enjoy it on his own so it is now that he is out of character, people do not understand that reason why EMIYA was acting in the way he acted in Fate UBW na d Heavens Feel, is solely due to Holy Grail War, and he was taking seriously the threat of 7 legendary and super dangerous beings that's why acted as harsh as possible. Currently, EMIYA is literally only Servant so... why bother and be serious or wary?
2/5 c2 NightmareKnight1
Going to point this out for you, but you need to start a new paragraph any time you swap speakers. None of the back and forth in a single line with more than one person speaking.
Going to point this out for you, but you need to start a new paragraph any time you swap speakers. None of the back and forth in a single line with more than one person speaking.
2/5 c7 
1EnkiduKingu
At this point they should just officially hire Archer as Astraea’s personal butler/ security just to keep him around
1EnkiduKinguAt this point they should just officially hire Archer as Astraea’s personal butler/ security just to keep him around
2/2 c7 vinayakdj1
So by your logic, a lvl 7 adventurer is stronger than a grand servant? If a lvl 3 adventurer is rank B ?
So the more powerful monsters of the dungeon are BEAST lvl?
While the dungeon itself being TYPE lvl?
So by your logic, a lvl 7 adventurer is stronger than a grand servant? If a lvl 3 adventurer is rank B ?
So the more powerful monsters of the dungeon are BEAST lvl?
While the dungeon itself being TYPE lvl?