for Is it wrong to join Justice?1/29 c7 Midnight49
Feel like we’re going to get maybe another chapter or 2, and another Nightmare before Archer explains the Dream Cycles.
Feel like we’re going to get maybe another chapter or 2, and another Nightmare before Archer explains the Dream Cycles.
1/29 c7 
5Guts and Toes
I'm sorry. i couldn't help but cannot let this slide too. level 3 could be compared to rank E servants but holy man. you just turned the strongests ones into clowns then xD gonna have fun see king hassan gets his ass kicked on the dirt by level 8 adventurer like a kid xD
5Guts and ToesI'm sorry. i couldn't help but cannot let this slide too. level 3 could be compared to rank E servants but holy man. you just turned the strongests ones into clowns then xD gonna have fun see king hassan gets his ass kicked on the dirt by level 8 adventurer like a kid xD
1/29 c7 Ayanokoji Kiyotaka
I can not let that slide. Level 3 adventurers being equivalent to rank B? Piss off. I’m dropping this Fic
I can not let that slide. Level 3 adventurers being equivalent to rank B? Piss off. I’m dropping this Fic
1/29 c7 Guts and Toes
rank b? if the adventurer is level 7 or 8 that means all servants with Ex status are nothing but puppies in comparison?
rank b? if the adventurer is level 7 or 8 that means all servants with Ex status are nothing but puppies in comparison?
1/29 c7 2Psych Ward Works
Great chapter and the story is looking good so far. The dream cycle has started and Astrea is about to learn a crueler form of justice through Archer's past, that's gonna be tough for her. I'm looking forward to the rest.
One thing that was a bit worrying is the line mentioning openings. Please don't do the "suicide style", that's utter fanon that people jumped on years ago. It was a tactic Emiya used against Cu in the UBW fight because Cu didn't care whether the openings he attacked were real or not. It was mostly to buy time while he drained Medea's mana and found an opening while she got distracted by Rin and Shirou. It was a tactic that became conflated into being how he fights all the time which just isn't true.
As a rule of thumb: if he can beat someone by sniping them from a distance with arrows or a broken phantasm then he will. If sword fighting, he'll use his Mind's Eye to create a strong defense until h3 can get a good understanding of his opponent and then work out the proper counter measures be it a different weapon, technique, taunts, exploiting weaknesses, etc.
Anyways, wish you the best!
2Psych Ward WorksGreat chapter and the story is looking good so far. The dream cycle has started and Astrea is about to learn a crueler form of justice through Archer's past, that's gonna be tough for her. I'm looking forward to the rest.
One thing that was a bit worrying is the line mentioning openings. Please don't do the "suicide style", that's utter fanon that people jumped on years ago. It was a tactic Emiya used against Cu in the UBW fight because Cu didn't care whether the openings he attacked were real or not. It was mostly to buy time while he drained Medea's mana and found an opening while she got distracted by Rin and Shirou. It was a tactic that became conflated into being how he fights all the time which just isn't true.
As a rule of thumb: if he can beat someone by sniping them from a distance with arrows or a broken phantasm then he will. If sword fighting, he'll use his Mind's Eye to create a strong defense until h3 can get a good understanding of his opponent and then work out the proper counter measures be it a different weapon, technique, taunts, exploiting weaknesses, etc.
Anyways, wish you the best!
1/29 c7 1Innamorat0
i feel like the strength of a level 3 adventurer being on par with a mid tier servant is an overestimation.
1Innamorat0i feel like the strength of a level 3 adventurer being on par with a mid tier servant is an overestimation.
12/19/2023 c6 Dman4869
I'm so glad I stumbled upon this! I love your depiction of Archer and the Astrea familia. Archer's interactions with other Danmachi characters is so on point. I'm really enjoying my time reading this and I hope the tragedy can be averted now that Archer is here. Thank you so much for all your hard work writing this!
I'm so glad I stumbled upon this! I love your depiction of Archer and the Astrea familia. Archer's interactions with other Danmachi characters is so on point. I'm really enjoying my time reading this and I hope the tragedy can be averted now that Archer is here. Thank you so much for all your hard work writing this!