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for Remnant: World Trigger

3/24 c1 Guest
Kamen Rider Senty tal vez la historia podria ser mejor si pudieras tratar de plantear 1 mundo donde Kamen Rider converge con RWBY
3/5 c1 Writer2018
You’re a retarded idiot.
10/9/2023 c1 2MacchiatoGremlin
I want to start off by saying that you combined the two worlds very well. I also really like how you wrote the dialogue between Ironwood and Ozpin. You also have a great written narration voice. There are a few very small grammatical issues. The first is switching between boarder and border during the story. The second is that there are some places you need to use the word 'here' rather than 'hear'. Overall though, I think you did an excellent job with all of the action scenes. You also have a smooth flow in your writing that is easy to follow. Keep up the great work!

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