for The Veela's Captive10/12/2024 c5 
4Chaos Snow Kitsune
Well that was fun. Definitely glad to see Tonks getting involved finally.
Also uh-oh.. I think Hermione is gonna be in trouble for her self righteous meddling.
4Chaos Snow KitsuneWell that was fun. Definitely glad to see Tonks getting involved finally.
Also uh-oh.. I think Hermione is gonna be in trouble for her self righteous meddling.
9/29/2024 c2 GroveWolf
convenors? and also, it's cannons. you need to work on your quotes. when fleur first orders him, it's a bit off. and then when he waves his wands to carry out her command, it's in quotes. all of a sudden, not the sudden. the voyeur sentence needs the quote marks adjusted. also, it's not voyeur, it's exhibitionist. hermione just received,"
convenors? and also, it's cannons. you need to work on your quotes. when fleur first orders him, it's a bit off. and then when he waves his wands to carry out her command, it's in quotes. all of a sudden, not the sudden. the voyeur sentence needs the quote marks adjusted. also, it's not voyeur, it's exhibitionist. hermione just received,"
7/5/2024 c3 Guest
Waiting for Harry to finally drop the prank and let them know he was faking it soon.
Waiting for Harry to finally drop the prank and let them know he was faking it soon.
2/22/2024 c3 6thunderofdeath97
NGL. Fleur's kind of a cunt, and Hermione's kind of a shitty friend.
Also, getting to fuck Fleur, how is Harry jealous of Neville? Lol
6thunderofdeath97NGL. Fleur's kind of a cunt, and Hermione's kind of a shitty friend.
Also, getting to fuck Fleur, how is Harry jealous of Neville? Lol
2/22/2024 c1 thunderofdeath97
Hermione isn't a fucking genius. She just has good memory.
Also, she's way too arrogant. She and Fleur BOTH need knocked off their high horses.
Hermione isn't a fucking genius. She just has good memory.
Also, she's way too arrogant. She and Fleur BOTH need knocked off their high horses.
10/15/2023 c2 Ariadne Venegas
I think Harry could terminate the farce and have all of them all the same and the children have his name, not Weasleys. That is a waste.
I think Harry could terminate the farce and have all of them all the same and the children have his name, not Weasleys. That is a waste.
10/3/2023 c1 4Helscreama
Can't wait to see how Harry flips this on then. Loved the Hermione scene the most, very well structured.
4HelscreamaCan't wait to see how Harry flips this on then. Loved the Hermione scene the most, very well structured.
9/30/2023 c2 SuperReader3000
Im really looking forward to when Harry flips the script once theyre all involved
Im really looking forward to when Harry flips the script once theyre all involved
9/29/2023 c1 Ppsh
This is great. Would love to see Hermione too.
This is great. Would love to see Hermione too.